Versatile Mage: I Have No Intention of Dimensional Throne

The writing is really good. I am no longer in the top three among all French fans, but there are still some problems: 1. After becoming the Spark Judge, there is no difference from before. You still have to look at people's faces wherever you go, and you are ordered by the Speaker to check the totems, but you have to help the local area first before you can check it. It is completely unreasonable to help fight the monarch when it is obviously just an ordinary high-level training holy land. 2. After risking his life to save the entire northwest, he was tested and robbed and killed by the Mu family during his weak period. The only benefit he got was the one that the Ai family originally intended to give to the protagonist. Moreover, the Mu family, the ancestral family, tried to kill the protagonist many times to make amends, but it was not painful. It was revealed in one sentence and it was very frustrating. He was obviously the presiding judge and arrested Cardinal Leng Jue, but he was treated like this. It's understandable that I have to make meritorious deeds for the large territory I've conquered in the northwest because I want to keep it a secret, but it's really dissatisfying that Mu Bingluan and Zu Xiangtian didn't ask for compensation after being robbed and killed again. If I were the protagonist, I would have given up my job a long time ago. I have shed blood and sweat for the country but have been bullied. The speaker and the generals don't care. No wonder those noble families are so emboldened. 3. All the abilities acquired by the protagonist have traces and foreshadowing and are buried in an unobtrusive way. However, now that he holds the two trump cards of Hollow Willow and Jingwei, he feels that they are too weakened in many places. It feels like he is three times weaker than the enemy. There is a lot of pressure on the protagonist, but he cannot even deal with an ordinary monarch and has to take action on his own. It is understandable that you want to use a battle to describe the abilities acquired by the protagonist after training. However, this situation will make the combat power vague and make the readers confused, and it will not feel good to read. But generally speaking, it is still within an acceptable range. This stable writing method has a much lower probability of collapse than other full-scale fan fiction, and the logic of this book can be rounded out to some extent. Even if there are some flaws, it is still within the acceptable range. After all, everyone will still have different opinions when reading it. I saw the Suzaku volume when I was writing this article. I hope the author will continue to work hard, but don't enter the palace!

I've seen 483, and it's really good. It has a background. Although there are few primary battles and cultivation is fast, there are also primary plots. There are many original plots for upgrade battles in the future, which are very good. I have read almost 500 chapters. I have my own original sub-totem, and the concept of the hidden tribe. It can be called a first-class work for full-time fans. If there is a plot, the writing is also very good. I support it. Qidian gave me a monthly pass.

I have finished reading the update. So far, the writing is very good, the ideas are very original, and it does not deviate from the branches of the whole French. The character of the protagonist is okay, and the daily interactions are well written. At least I think it's much better than other brainless self-propelled gun all-powerful fan fiction. Give it a thumbs up

A good-looking full-time fanfic, the pace is not too slow, and it will not completely follow the original work. Most of the major events in the original work are added in the middle or they will be solved quickly. If you don't want to be Mo Fan's nanny, you will take advantage of him if necessary, although they are all opportunities that do not have much impact. Most of them are self-created plots, and the protagonist's harem is not a stallion. Although it is a bit sandy, it does not affect the perception. I am more worried about whether the author can grasp the foreshadowing, the second magic concept and the follow-up, so don't cut it Of course, there are some parts that seem to be constantly being troubled by the Lu family.

Just seeing the protagonist dressing up as a woman and being beaten up and running around made me go crazy.

The yin and yang face of the greenstone guild basically doesn't use earth, space, summon, and sound. It uses wind throughout the process. It has to be injured to use advanced summons. I'm really speechless.

The plot of God's Arrival is greatly reduced. I came to see Shuangwen to make up for my regrets, not to see another Mo Fan-type protagonist suffer 😡😡😡

It's so useless. Anyone can beat the protagonist. The protagonist's identity feels worse than that of a civilian. What's the use of the identity of a judge?

There are too many battle scenes and they are boring. What the hell was this writing about?

The author's writing was so uncomfortable to read. It was so weird that it was just like reading comprehension. I had to read it two or three times before I could understand what I wanted to write. 😴😴😴

No, why don't you have any high-quality products? I can't help but feel overwhelmed when I see any book of Control to Death. MD and Shi are equally worthy of him.

I have been devouring posts on q, so I came here to comment. The opportunity setting is very good, and the originality is also great. There are two problems. One is that the combat power fluctuates. I have several totems in my hand. I have to be patient in the face of the Mu family ancestors. It seems that it is very difficult to be a great monarch. Still with Jingwei all the time, the second thing is that the excitement is not enough and it is too bland. Whether it is fighting Khufu or a naval battle, it feels like it is anticlimactic and fails to capture the burning feeling. Overall, it is pretty good, but it is a pity that the excitement is not strong.

If possible, you can take Mu Ningxue and don't leave it to Mo Fan. Mo Fan is too difficult. Just lighten the burden on him and give him Xinxia.

Lingling

After reading the latest chapter, I really wanted to learn from Chen Xie and kill them all in one fell swoop with an asteroid hitting the earth!

Among all-time mage fandoms, this book ranks among the top.

Ding Yumian

The writing is better than that of A Xiaobai and B's full-time fan, and that Emperor has become a cabbage on the roadside.

(If you don't mind, I'll talk to you book friends today.) It feels like basically all the fans are babysitters for Mo Fan. Most of them are always on call whenever something happens to Mo Fan. It's really disgusting. It's best not to get involved with Mo Fan and just pretend that you don't know each other. If you know each other, you don't need to have a close relationship. If you have a chance, you can use it for yourself. If you don't use it, you can cultivate your own people. Many opportunities have not moved, and you haven't seen the protagonist of the fan novel. All of them are collected in advance until the plot arrives. There is only one book that starts with Nanyang City and Suzaku Fire Feather and Earth Core. They are saying that taking away Mo Fan's opportunity will cause Mo Fan to become weak, and then the disaster in the ancient capital of Western Xinjiang cannot be solved. I want to say that it has nothing to do with the protagonist. The original book just gave the protagonist a grassroots, patriotic, and stubborn character design. There is no need to write a fanfic, right? And the entire French world will not turn around without Mo Fan? It looks like the world will be destroyed without Mo Fan. Isn't it true that some people think that the country in the original work is so weak that these things cannot be solved? There are hidden bosses everywhere, and other bosses like to hide and live their own lives. Mo Fan is a stubborn and stupid boy who likes to meddle in other people's affairs. I think writing a fanfic is to be selfish and follow the plot normally. He should mind his own business and not join any military tribunals. Anyway, the main characters in the fanfic are basically dead. Occasionally open a small dungeon to get some resources or something. Just write about your daily life and develop slowly. Occasionally, if you encounter a monster attacking the city, you can solve it. If you can't solve it, don't join in the fun. If you can't afford it early, how can you be selfless and use your own cards to fight for others? It's hard to judge those who want to develop and defeat the monster. When there is no common foreign enemy, the real world chaos begins. It is best to maintain the status quo. Don't talk about being patriotic and serving the country and the people. Traveling to a different world where strength is respected, it is normal to be strong and selfish. Finding a few female protagonists to live out your life comfortably is the most real thing (my true thoughts are welcome to someone who is righteous and awe-inspiring to criticize me, but if you are the real Holy Mother, I will accept it)

Well... The combat power setting is unacceptable... It is unstable, for example, the performance of the generals and commanders fluctuates, as well as the protagonist.

The author's writing is really good. I hope to publish another book.

It's a bit tiring to watch. It's fun to be in high-intensity battles all the time, and there's not much daily life. It was okay at first, but the more I watched, the more boring I became.

Among the fanfics of Versatile Mage novels, it is already considered very good.

The copies after more than a hundred chapters are very boring and can't be read at all.

It's already considered a very well-written French fanfic.

The strongest suggestion is to suggest that the author go to Pinduoduo and spend a few more dollars for the entire cover 🙂

What other full-time mages write is not as good as yours. Others are too fake and empty.

The author put most of the members of the National Team into the Imperial Capital Academy. Zu Jiming, Jiang Shaoxu (), Jiang Yu (Central Academy), Guan Yu, and Mu Tingying were all from the Imperial Capital. Then at a university exchange meeting, they were wiped out by a character created by the author 😰

The new book "Full-time Mage: All My Contracted Beasts Are Divine Beasts" has many female protagonists and is a great read. Fans who like it are welcome to read it! ! !

It's the end of the month, I'll give it all to you, keep up the good work😚😚