Weird Stories About Rules: the Monster Begged Me Not to Seek Death

I hope this book wasn't ridiculed by the whole internet when it first came out. Then people who changed their nationality came to ridicule, what's the end of you? My great god has been winning for several consecutive times. Then their great god died and the protagonist won. Those who changed their nationality regretted it. Then the ridiculing people on the Internet started to call the protagonist a god (usually a god is added after the surname), but as soon as a new copy came, they started to denigrate the whole network. I have read several novels of this type, but the routines are all very similar.

The character of the team during the National Games was a bit bad. Soldiers are human beings, so they should restrain themselves at least. Acting impulsively all the time seems too outrageous.

I don't like the attitude of the country's soldiers after the second copy. After all, they are still contributing to the country. Can't they communicate well? I don't like others being on top of me. It's very rude to take the protagonist back.

I feel like you're rubbing the intelligence of senior executives on the ground, quite harshly.

First of all, the book does not make it clear who is stronger, the outer gods or the rules. There is only a scrawled sentence of "the rules are above everything else." However, it is obvious that what is shown in the book is that the rules can only slightly restrict the demigod islanders, but the complete blood god is restricted by the rules and cannot come all at once. After the Marvel Universe, the worldview completely collapsed and was completely separated from the foundation of the original world. Don't you understand what the author wants to express and construct a weird multiverse? The worldview of Marvel is already complete enough. If you insert a weird rule into it, what are you playing at? It just feels chaotic, not elegant.

Instead of improving yourself, it's better to vilify others, right? After reading a few chapters, I found that several characters from other countries have too low IQs.

To be honest, it was quite fun to write, but it fell apart when it came to the Marvel copy. If I continued writing, the male protagonist would be invincible soon after, and if I continued to add elements, it would become more and more confusing, and I couldn't fill the gap. I really can't think of any development potential for this book, so it's better to just cut it. Now, re-imagine it, and you are better at writing original pictures. Readers will have a certain mold when it comes to fan fiction. It's okay to deviate a little, but now it's completely messed up. Or you can stop for a while and modify the Marvel part, so that this copy is forced to stop and there is a chance to enter next time. I saw what you wrote about the so-called administrator. In theory, there is more than one. It is better to let the owner of this dungeon give this administrator a punishment. The male protagonist will be kicked out of the dungeon, the dungeon will be reset, and the male protagonist will receive an invitation letter and have a chance to enter next time. I have seen many bright spots in this book, but also many bad points. If necessary, you can discuss it (for free). There is a lot of room for development in this book, and many connections are not good enough. To be precise, your first two dungeons are well connected and have the shadow of "Healing Game", which is a good idea, but the National Games dungeon cannot be handled well. It is obvious and basically causes discomfort. I have an idea, but it's too far-fetched.

Hiss... I have finished reading the first and second copies now... The plot is good, but the first 10 chapters are enough to make most readers abandon the book directly... The stereotype is too serious... The malice of foreigners towards the Chinese has reached its limit. It stands to reason that the first goal of people participating in this game is to stay alive, but in the end I only saw the kind of internal fighting that harms others but does not benefit oneself. The public also sneers at the protagonist. No matter how many right things he has done before, he will be criticized as long as he makes the slightest accidental move. And the background of the start is unreasonable. Let's not talk about anything else. Let's talk about this setting first: China has knelt down for eight consecutive times. What does this setting mean? Logically speaking, the protagonist should be a slap in the face to those who look down on us, but the author starts by describing the Chinese people as having a low ability? It's quite contradictory. If you want this book to be popular, I suggest you delete the meaningless ridicule first. The first six chapters should have nearly 1/3 of the chapters describing how people from other countries ridicule us... Even our own people... Overall: I can read it, and I can see that the author has made progress... Anyway, good luck.

To be honest, the subject of carrying the fate of the country is really not good-looking.

That's awesome, you dare to treat the contestants like this. Are you really not afraid that the contestants will cause trouble? Arrest people forcefully, have a shameless face, and kidnap people morally? In the author's eyes, is this the impression the country gives you?

One hundred and one chapters, only 10 posts, this. . . . . The criticism is a bit serious.

I have to arrange a s13 female character, and she is also smart

Chapter 3: Poison Hair, a classic start and a slap in the face, so classic 😅

The previous article was well written, but I really can't stand it starting from the National Games. The author should keep working hard

The writing is really good, keep it up!