Traditional Time Travelers Join the Chat Group

Come on, it's very interesting. The writing of Dragon Snake is very good. The transformation of the protagonist's state of mind is very well written. You won't get tired of watching it. I look forward to the following plots.

The protagonist's ability to travel back and forth belongs to the setting of the ancient infinite flow, but the author handles it very delicately so that it does not lead to a mindless rise in strength. And the addition of the chat group setting takes this book to a new level. Since it is half a comprehensive comic novel, I hope the author can avoid the biggest pitfall of a comprehensive comic novel, which is how to open the harem in a reasonable and wonderful way. The biggest pitfall of comprehensive comics is that you want to have a harem but don't understand it, and you don't want to have a harem and you are flirting with women everywhere.

When I see someone discussing Superman's martial arts training, I want to say that what Superman needs is not martial arts such as fighting skills. What Superman needs is fantasy martial arts that can make him stronger quickly and increase his strength a lot. Martial arts that only use pure fighting skills are of no use at all. Superman can do it at a glance.

Reminder, this is a harem story, and those two-dimensional beautiful girls should be ready to accept it. When I saw the protagonist inexplicably uploading a first-person video of his fight to the group, I felt something was wrong. It smelled like a two-dimensional Asashi male protagonist. Kasumigaoka was scared to cry after watching the video, and the protagonist was gentle and comforting. Kasumigaoka's inexplicable self-defense made her blush, and it was difficult to hold back.

In just one sentence, the protagonist puts water and levels on top of Demon Slayer Wu Chi's brain to train the opponent to fight.

The perspective jumps around and I feel dizzy, DC + Dragon Snake + chat group + a bunch of Japanese comic heroines, what the hell is this stitching monster, the stitching is very weird, and then I feel like I am a Dragon Snake fan, and I can't write the key points. There is a hammer here and there, what happened is not written in detail, it is all up to the reader to understand. There is also joining the army. There is no discipline in the army. After reading it for a while, I don't know what joining the army is for.

Will there be another disgusting plot about teaching Superman to practice martial arts in the future?

How do you say the classic line of Fire Cloud Evil God? Nothing is invincible but speed. What is the most important thing in practicing martial arts? Just be strong enough and fast enough. There is no need to practice skills. There is no need to write such a detailed and long one. Moreover, when you have such golden fingers as time travel and chat groups, practicing martial arts is a waste of time.

It's difficult to watch, but the beginning is pretty good, giving people a sense of anticipation for how the protagonist will develop later on. Although the time in different worlds is not arranged and displayed well, which seems a bit messy, the problem is not a big one. But at the beginning, I had to fight against the world of dragons and snakes. I was already cheating on taking medicine. I didn't know how to study biology. Wouldn't it be better to draw some Superman's blood to make a serum? Even if you want to practice martial arts, can't you improve your physical fitness first and then practice? Later, for no apparent reason, he had to run to experience life and death with the mercenaries. Obviously the protagonist has a safe rear area, and he is not in a Gu breeding ground like the main god space. Why are you so anxious? Isn't it better to improve step by step in a planned way? As a result, the protagonist was written in such a desperate manner that he kept forcing himself to say how tired he was, and then his development speed was not much faster. After a year or two, he was still at the level of an ordinary person. After holding on for a while, I couldn't hold on anymore when I saw that the video was uploaded for no reason. Suddenly, it revealed a sudden and abrupt twist and a nerdy YY flavor. If it weren't for the previous ones, it wouldn't be a big problem. At most, the writing is immature. But before, I arranged a character for the protagonist who is rich in knowledge, "scheming", deep-minded, and has experienced darkness. As soon as I uploaded the video, I gave you an Asasi otaku with a sudden change in style, and he was poisoned to death🙂 I feel that the protagonist really wasted this plug-in, and the drug the protagonist took at the beginning was in vain. After taking the drug, in terms of planning and arrangement, he is not as good as an ordinary person without taking the drug🙂

"Lian Guoshu" is too long to write. What spiritual realm is pursued by traveling through multiple worlds and practicing "Guoshu"? Go to the world of Superman's Girlfriend and touch the meteorite to become Superman, or go to the world of martial arts or fantasy, where the upper limit is no higher than the combat power of dragons and snakes. In order to pursue the spiritual realm, you don't directly imitate the secret power to increase your combat power. He's not the kind of martial artist who seeks enlightenment.

If you have time to practice this martial art, why not go to the Marvel world and find Ant-Man to get Pym Particles, and then go to Doctor Octopus and get his artificial little sun. You can directly shrink the artificial little sun with Pym Particles and carry the little sun with you. It will become stronger every moment and restore blood every moment. Isn't it better than practicing martial arts? If you don't practice martial arts, at most you won't be able to beat him with the skills of others at the same level, but you'll still have to use a big move if you can't beat him in the final decision. Furthermore, Superman's physique can be improved in all directions if he is exposed to the sun. He is an all-round warrior. When he is exposed to the sun, the injuries on his body will also recover. If you put hundreds of little suns on your body, do you think he can beat you? Even if you are at the same level at this time, no matter how good your skills are, you You can't just kill him instantly when his health is full. Put hundreds of little suns on your body. Superman's physique will be exhausted when he is exposed to the sun to restore blood 🤫🤫🤫 Even if you don't go to Marvel, you can have a technological version of the Atom and an artificial yellow sun in DC.

The flow of time... Genius protagonist (medicine)... Martial arts training...😅... Honestly speaking, it's quite rare for a book to have so many pitfalls at the beginning... I can only say that the author should work hard

Writing about dragons and snakes is definitely a failure. If you can't express that feeling, don't force it. The whole article is based on the inner description. It's embarrassing. The embarrassment is beyond the sky.

When did Ming Jin become a rumor? In the original book, aren't there a lot of them in any martial arts club? And there is this thing about nzt. Didn't the movie say that he learned all the fighting skills on earth and used them skillfully in 2 and a half hours? The protagonist has been taking drugs for so long and he still hasn't reached the dark level?

Let Superman practice martial arts, it is better to let him study philosophy. It would be better to let him study the Buddhist and Taoist scriptures so that he can understand what it means to truly save all sentient beings.

What a pity. This book was released ten years late.

The character of a traditional time traveler should be more like Long Aotian. The protagonist written by the author is simply a female protagonist and a male protagonist. While he can kill people at will, he treats women gently at the same time.

I wouldn't be happy if I didn't practice dance with Doomsday

Superman practicing martial arts is as ridiculous as asking artificial intelligence to learn programming, okay? 😰 Understanding the setting of the super brain, no one thinks that Superman can't control his body and his own strength, right? ? ? You will know it immediately after reading the martial arts secret books. If you read two more books, you will be able to create your own magical skills. This is the basic skill of superman. Still need to practice? Winter training is for ordinary people, while summer training is for three days.

When writing infinite flow, especially this kind of fast time travel flow, you have to be fast. You write a world in too detail, and many people don't have the patience to read it. Moreover, you have obtained the medicine in the early stage, and the growth of martial arts body. You only need to write three or four pictures. If you write in such detail, it doesn't matter. Who would have so much patience to read this kind of novel? You can only grasp the plot of the protagonist's growth in one word, and what is this chat group for? It's completely useless. The protagonist of a novel can have many cheats, but he can't have useless cheats.

I hope the protagonist can be with Tang Zichen and take her to other worlds for experience, otherwise it would be a pity

Don't you feel good? You can travel through time and practice some boxing!

It's so abrupt, the various angles change so abruptly, and from time to time some embarrassing plots pop up. It's really hard to watch without some brains.

I saw the protagonist wasting his life in the novel Dragon and Snake. I'm no longer interested. You can travel through time. To find a world where you can live forever, extending your life span is the most important thing.