HK Comprehensive: Me, Traffic Enforcement and Control Team?

Stop writing plots with so many women. Too stallions are really boring.

In the first 20 chapters, your book is definitely a hit. The title of the book is not attractive. Cheats are intentionally disgusting. The rewards you receive can only prove your thinking as the author. Different from normal people. The cannibal artist and the god-stealing hand? Originally, you rely on reward items to attract readers to pay attention to you. I won't say whether it will collapse later, but your beginning shows that you are a fool. You have to have the courage to write 1 million words. I also admire your perfect attendance of 300 to 500 a month, right? Congratulations.

I couldn't stand it until chapter 4, it's so stupid.

Nausea. The first one is disgusted with the other person because he sells drugs, but the second one is sleeping with the person because of his beauty. Have you never seen a woman?

Brother, don't write about stuttering as a lover. There is too much to write. A thief and a short mule. There are so many normal things in Hong Kong. No need

The author still hasn't gotten rid of his long-winded problem. He even has to write a short essay for every thought of the character. It's extremely dramatic and takes too much for granted. At this level, he still refuses to listen to others' advice.

The starting point has declined? Low resources? Or is the quality too high? ? ? Why can't you even pick out eight books?

First, "chao lao" is an absolute term of contempt. In "The Ghost Detective", Yu Zilang's biological sister would be dissatisfied if she called him that, let alone other people! People call themselves "police men," and police stations are commonly called "police stations." No one calls himself a "police man," just like a police officer doesn't call himself a "cop." As for the nondescript title of "traffic policeman", it is even more outrageous! Second, it is "Royal·Hong Kong Police" and not "Royal Hong Kong Police". Where did the "Royal" come from in Hong Kong? "Royal" must be placed first! Thirdly, Chen Haonan's nickname is "𡃁", not "Pretty boy". It's different if you look carefully at the subtitles in the movie. The literal character for "𡃁" is "" in Cantonese, which refers to "a young boy and a stupid young man". The nickname here is that others laugh at him because he is young and stupid, not because he is handsome. Therefore, Chen Haonan has never called himself "𡃁". On the contrary, the word "beautiful" in "Liangkun" is really self-praising. Fourth, when watching Hong Kong movies, you must watch the original version. The Mandarin version will randomly change the lines... Many people think that the hall leader in Hongxing is called "Gang Bazi". In fact, this is an out-and-out Mandarin name. The hall leader in each district of Hongxing is called "Hua Shiren", commonly known as "fit". In the original Cantonese version of He Lian Sheng's leader, it was called "Service", but for some reason it was changed to "Hua Shiren" in Mandarin. Those other titles like "dwarf mule" are purely Mandarin. I don't understand the point of changing the Mandarin version to this one! Fifth, the underworld usually calls itself "** society", "** prefix" or directly "company". Jiang Tiansheng always uses "company" to refer to Hongxing, and Liansheng and others all use "we prefix" to call themselves societies. "Grandpa" generally refers to the entire society, and sometimes it can also refer to the upper echelons of the society. "Big bottom" refers to the top level. "Red stick, straw sandals, and white paper fan" are all boss-level. They can directly be the leader of the hall, or even directly choose the leader. "Four-nine" are official members of the grassroots and can recruit younger brothers. "Blue Lanterns" are the lowest level, basically peripheral members. Maybe the hawkers don't want to be bullied so they can call themselves "one of their own" by handing over red envelopes. Those societies say they have tens of thousands or tens of thousands of people... In fact, 90% of them are just by name!

😰😰😰What kind of thing are you writing about? Teddy dogs are nothing more than that. They just fall in love with you when you see them. The author has been depressed for hundreds of years?

Don't even look at it, this Wanyi from Biyang is deliberately trying to disgust people. First he says how much he hates drug dealers, and then he gets involved with a female dealer and goes off on the street.

You speak justice in a colony! Which one is justice? It is justice to plot against a British guy and force him to kill a British guy.

There should be a red line even if there is no lower limit. Not to mention how shameless the protagonist is in his attitude towards women, since even female drug dealers have to forcibly clean up their innocence. You are a Chinese author, not really a Hong Kong drama protagonist from the 1980s and 1990s. You like Brigitte Lin so much, can't you do it with the policewoman Cheng Xiaodong in "Chasing Boys", but you want to whitewash the drug dealer Salina? What are your intentions?

The previous chapters were so toxic that I could barely read them at a glance, but in Chapter 264, the senior inspector, a billionaire, had his car scratched by a gangster and even pretended to be someone else to take revenge. The innocent cerebellum was not fully developed.

Rubbish article, Chapter 3. There are no bullets in the drug dealer's gun. The police didn't arrest the person immediately. What's wrong with letting the drug dealer check the gun? Just to show off to the protagonist, rubbish

Well, instead of picking a little Jew, why don't you pick a Hong Kong student? Then choose a little girl who is also a thief, seriously?

Since you are writing a Hong Kong variety show, don't get into bed with every woman you meet, and don't let go of all kinds of religions. Movies are movies and reality is reality. The characters in the book you write all live in a two-dimensional real world called a novel. Readers must have a sense of immersion before they will continue to read your book! Think about it, in our reality, would you sleep with a drug dealer without prejudice? In other words, are you not afraid of contracting some strange incurable disease after sleeping with her? There are many characters with the same actor's face in Hong Kong dramas. You have to figure it out whether you like this actress or a certain character played by this actress! ! To give a simple example, Brigitte Lin's "The Invincible East" is very charming, but in the virtual world of "movies", he is a eunuch! The attractive one is Brigitte Lin, not the Invincible Dongfang! ! !

It's so long and verbose, and it's smellier and longer than an old lady's foot-binding cloth.

Well, I don't know what's going on, but it seems that the promotion route for the Hong Kong Comprehensive Police Service is wrong. Normally, for a Xiangjiang police officer, the promotion route is to have a high school degree or above, take the police academy and train for 27 weeks before graduating. Become a police officer. The ranks of Hong Kong police officers are equivalent to those of ancient officials, and it is more difficult to be promoted. Usually, after meritorious service, a police officer is directly promoted to a sergeant or a trainee inspector. In many Hong Kong police stations, everyone will become a senior police officer. The senior police officer is a consolation prize for those police officers who have been working as police officers for more than ten years and have not been promoted. I forget the exact number of years, but those who become senior police officers are all those who have been promoted and are very old.

If you use your own gun to shoot bullets from someone else's gun, the police can find out who the bullet belongs to, but they can't find out which gun it was shot from. This operation also shocked me. Is there any author who can't tell the difference between pounds and dollars?

Each article is full of nonsense, and the author is somewhat flawed. Obviously the protagonist lives in an era before the Return, but the author always uses the post-Return environment and thoughts to influence it. It looks awkward no matter how you look at it.

Retired! Traveling through Hong Kong dramas has to be a harem, because there are so many female stars in Hong Kong movies, and choosing one over another will affect readers who don't want that one! But please don't have a harem just for the sake of a harem. Don't break up some CPs that are not that bad if they should exist! Otherwise, there were hundreds of movies in 80-90-00, each of which required at least one woman, and you would have a harem of hundreds or thousands of people? ! 🤔🤫

Do you know why your collection is only 10,000? I am a person who really, really likes watching Hong Kong variety shows. I really like the shower head and stuff. But this book of yours needs writing style but no writing style, and it needs stories but no story. It is whimpering, like an old lady holding her footsteps. If I catch Zhu Tao, I would like to write one sentence 10 times. Real. Either change the numbers properly, or give up on this business.

I'm speechless. A police officer from Hong Kong was drunk when he wrote about Harry Potter. No wonder his grades were so bad!

I can't stand it any longer. I've read more than 130 chapters, and I'm still messing around in the traffic team. At the beginning, being a Cambridge law graduate, being in the traffic team can be understood as a setting. It's over 100 chapters, and I've solved so many cases. I'm still working in the traffic team, and I don't add more credits that are not my job. It doesn't make sense.

It's too long-winded, with a plot explained over and over again, and having to be re-explained from several perspectives of the protagonist and supporting characters.

Yes, but skills such as disguise and poisoning that are used for private work should not be exposed in the police station.

Knowing that a killer will come, just bring some 38 points, pure sand dollar protagonist

It was written about the traffic police, but nothing related to the traffic police was written. Isn't this nonsense

Author? What do you plan to write next? Or a movie variety show?

Brother? ? ? 10177. . . ? ? ? I wrote an extra zero.