The Heavens Begin with Babies

Let me talk about a few things that made me accept that I couldn't accept it. First point, I have been drinking milk for six chapters, which makes me feel baffled. Where is the plot? Arrange to drink milk when the child is one year old. First of all, will a one-year-old child know what milk is? What are vegetables? Can a one-year-old child explain it so clearly? The protagonist has traveled through time, but others don't know. At this time, the protagonist is surrounded by people of various forces. Won't they report it to the master behind? Then there is the issue of writing. Everything has to be explained. I find it very awkward. Some common sense that everyone knows, such as the author explaining why one cannot form a force at one year old, uses hundreds of words to explain. Everyone knows that this can be explained in one stroke. Readers are not stupid. Reading a book is just a plot, while reading a white text is just a picture. It's cool when the setting is reasonable. I didn't see any tricks after reading the first ten chapters. I like this kind of subject very much. The whole front part is explaining. The three golden chapters are talking about setting, the first six chapters are drinking milk, the first ten chapters are explaining common sense, and the first fifteen chapters are finally the first world. There are too many exclamation marks. Every paragraph is an exclamation mark. What are you sighing about? ? ? I don't understand what the protagonist's personality is like. I think you might as well be more direct and make the protagonist a child prodigy who can speak at half a year old and can speak at one year old. Who says you can't form a force at one year old? You just make yourself a divine being. In ancient times, there was great superstition. They would lift you up to the sky, and then travel to a world of magic and immortality. Then come back and make a flying sword, or make a fireball, shocking everyone. With Li Yuan and Li Shimin protecting you, who can do anything to you? Especially when the main world is in troubled times, this can still win over people's hearts, and the destiny will be determined by Zhu Tianwen anyway.

Nonsense, dozens of pictures and no sign of it. How far has your plot advanced? They only talk about how bad and powerful they are, what their physique is like, and what their abilities are like?

There are so many scenes for a baby, and there are too many baby writings

Are they all Japanese comics? I haven't seen it, I'm not interested, I just slipped away! ! !

Add it to your bookshelf first! . Check back in two months. If there are no eunuchs or major changes. Read more in detail! . The comment section is already full of complaints.

The writing is good, but the updates are too slow and not enough to read.

The inner activities of the protagonist are disdainful. This word is used too many times, and it sounds a bit like Long Aotian. I have read a story about the development of a baby before, and the protagonist who has lived in two lives is very mature. Because Goldfinger was too arrogant and the way he talked to Dumbledore, I personally felt that Li Kuan was quite rude. The protagonists of Gone with the Wind are too common nowadays, but they lack the charm of the characters. This setting is quite attractive to me, so come on, author! I hope your next book will be better! Farewell(oo)/

Chapter 1 and 2 The old man has a long paragraph. The author may think it is novel,,,,, but it is really boring,,,, not attractive enough.

There are too many unreasonable things, so I won't mention them all. I couldn't help myself when I saw the dagger's teaching. How could a two-year-old child fight with an adult? Jumping and fighting?

I found that this author really lacks common sense. For example, in Chapter 22, I won't argue with you about how much a puppy that can't even eat meat is worth. In terms of food alone, it's seventy or eighty stone, one stone is fifty-three kilograms. To put it simply, 80x50, 4000 kilograms. A family of five does not have to worry about food. Can one person eat eight hundred kilograms a year? Of course, this should be grain that has not been shelled. After shelling, it is at least 600 kilograms, right? A person eats a pound of rice a day, which is too much. China's annual grain production is more than 300 million tons of rice and wheat, and more than 300 billion kilograms are eaten by 1.4 Billion people. 300 Kilograms for one person is still too much, and this is still in the shell. Considering that a large amount of grain is not actually rations, such as making wine, so the grain eaten by your ancient people is four times that of modern people, which is amazing 👍🏻

Why is there no Eastern world? Born in the Tang Dynasty, you didn't play martial arts, cultivate immortality, or play magic? It's okay to develop technology. If the protagonist was born in the West and played magic, that would be the right match.

Let's open a new world. Harry Potter is a warlock, not an orthodox magician. There is no way to cultivate magic without magic without meditation. It all depends on the magic bloodline. For those who have never cultivated magic power, it takes a lot of intelligence to let a person without magic power enter the bar. As soon as you enter the bar, they will know that you have no magic power and throw you out. At the same time, you will be forgotten. You can only buy magic items when you enter. As an outsider, you can't learn magic without magic.

I want to watch based on the name and setting. As soon as I see ninjas, I don't want to watch the world of One Piece. It's boring, has low combat power, and I'm not interested in this system.

I also like to travel through time and become a child, or animals, monsters, elves, and warcraft, or simply travel through time and become a girl. In short, as long as I don't travel through time and become an adult man. I like them all😜

How tall are you when you are three years old? You cut the throat of a European gangster, and your physique is so low. This requires at least three times the physique of an adult. A child of 40 to 50 centimeters jumps up from behind and slit the throat of a 1.89 Meter white man. His jumping ability is more than three times taller, but he still jumps up and slits his throat. Such a difficult move.

Last time I read a novel about Qin Shi Mingyue, there was a person in it who insisted on quarreling, saying that the Great Qin Army in Qin Shi Mingyue could wipe out all five major countries if they went to Hokage. I told him, let alone the five major countries, only an army composed of one of the countries could defeat an army of tens of thousands of ordinary people. Apart from anything else, the transformation technique is a must for every ninja, and with the blessing of chakra, the range of a thrown shuriken is no closer than that of an arrow. All it takes is for a group of ninjas to use their transformation skills to replace the dead Qin army in the melee and kill directly in the chaos. If you kill a few people, you can change your face, and if you use Earth Escape, you can kill them in another place. You can't tell who is a ninja and who is one of our own. He will also become the person who kills randomly, and will be killed by his companions later. Forget it. It stabilized for a moment. Stop fighting and rest. You have to make camp to eat, drink water and sleep. A group of ninjas have already mixed up with your army and poisoned them. When you sleep, it will scratch your throat or even set your body on fire. Taking advantage of the chaos, during a random killing wave, you will see your familiar companions slashing you to death with a knife. Only then will you realize that these are ninjas. Just ask. Beat like this. Your Da Qin army can withstand how many days without collapsing. If you are not allowed to eat or drink, you will die in the toilet. You will die even if you sleep. And there is not just one person who will transform and ambush you, but a group of them. And because of the existence of chakra. Ninjas are stronger than soldiers. One against ten is achievable. Due to physical differences. He did it to you quietly, and you didn't even have a chance to say anything.

The protagonist has an innate soul power of level 100. He has a terrifying resurgence at the beginning. He wears women's clothes to kill Tang San, eats the rabbit Xiao Wu, kills women, kills Ning Rongrong, becomes a sister to Zhu Zhuqing, protects Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, and does not lick dogs. The title of the book: Gods in the Heavens Starting from Douluo, come and take a look, just click in to read it. Become a god at the beginning and play the role of a beautiful girl. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is a tsundere loli, but in fact the protagonist is already invincible.

I'm just wondering, you are an ancient prince, you are the emperor's biological son, and you can travel through time, how did you fall in love with Hermione? There is something wrong with this aesthetic. Aren't Chinese people good-looking? I also need to find a foreigner from another dimension, you. . .

The universe begins with no need for brains

Go to Harry to learn magic? I'm afraid he went to be a Muggle. Not to mention the history of the main world, you want to add surreal elements, but if you don't add fantasy in the same style, you want to add Western fantasy? Forget it about Harry, why don't you add the pirate Hokage? Your style has already gone to grandma's house.

Can this kind of junk novel be blocked?

So you practiced martial arts and opened a restaurant when you were young? Even if you eat two peanuts, you won't be like this. Isn't this fantasy martial arts? Is it a myth?

Don't fall into the trap! Too poisonous! I've been studying for seven or eight years. I can't say I have a lot of experience, but I can also say that I have a strong resistance to poison. You are very poisonous. I can barely bear it. The author should not delete it. Please take a good look at the feedback from readers. Poison points: 1. This author only uses exclamation points and uses them for everything. 2. Too outrageous. Who would believe a three- or four-year-old child? It's also hard to believe how stupid you are. There is no magic power to refine medicine... 3. There is no original work. The author has never read the original work, so he can write all kinds of outrageous things. 4. Part of the plot of pretending to be AC ​​is embarrassing and cliché. This is too much. 5. Detached from reality. The author has not checked the information at first glance, and the writing is unclear. I think that's all, it's not necessarily objective, it's definitely more or less relevant. Everyone, be careful! A lot of poison!

I can't stand it anymore. A weapon as big as a space gate is placed there as a decoration. Are you still thinking about where to place the refugees of the Tang Dynasty? There are so many uninhabited lands in America, Australia, and Africa that you can't even hunt wild animals alone. Not to mention farming and mining, are you actually considering using the Broken Plane for farming? ! He himself said that the ecology above is in a weak balance, and species resources should be collected from other planes to supplement and maintain. In this way, the plane under your control can be slowly cultivated, and it can be used as a core experimental base and escape safe house in the future. What is the author thinking in his mind? Why use the core plane as a supply pack? I'm numb

It's so unreasonable. In the first chapter, the mistress gave birth to a baby. The male servant saw a young master nearby and came to report to the master. Can the royal family of the Tang Dynasty be so careless if they have Hu ancestry? Farewell.

Does this book have too many loopholes? And,! ! Why are they all this symbol! A one-year-old child is very articulate. Five copper coins, five dogs. And it's still half the price. 100 Yuan is just enough to buy a cucumber? A whole lot of irrational stuff. I have never heard of such a small puppy barking. And that's even while giving him food.

It's all a foreign world, how much you admire Japan and Britain

The Three Kingdoms of Gods and Demons are a bit collapsed! Huang Zhong killed two million people with one arrow, and one million people died in the Five Dou Rice Sect's sacrifice formation. Isn't this how the scene was grand?

Vomited, 248 watched, Naruto. In the battle at the Valley of the End, Ban's corpse could be transferred directly to another dimension. He knew that Tobirama and Black Zetsu were watching the battle, so he had to hang around and fight Tobirama, and Black Zetsu snatched Ban's body away. He could only scream and curse in anger! Convinced! Forced wisdom. Farewell! ! ! !

Are you a two-year-old kid telling others about store management? Are you afraid that you are not being funny? Aren't you afraid that you will be regarded as evil? Your uncle calls you nephew, you are so awesome, you can't even figure out the seniority, that is nephew, and people in the Tang Dynasty call their father grandpa, don't you understand history, you are just writing nonsense, this is why you have written more than ten books, and you have never been able to get to lv5