Pirate: Kenso Koina

High-intensity training, giving you an unfinishable amount of training at once, and then punishing you by not eating enough, will only make the next training farther and farther away from this goal, and you will eat less and less, and then you will either die of exhaustion or starve to death.

I gave up when I saw Zang Gao. In this book, Zangao works for a human trafficker, helping the slave trade by hypnotizing and taming rebellious people. Not only is the protagonist not a murderer, but he recruits Zangao for hire, which is completely unacceptable. 😤

Why do you have to be a dog for a dragon? Even if you really have amnesia, the dragon will not trust you even if you have been with him for more than ten years (Saab has not gained the trust of the dragon) What's more, you have not lost your memory at all, and you have hidden more passwords than the Five Old Stars. What's more, joining the revolutionary army will not provide any protection and will only increase the risk of being killed. What's more, the only thing that can save the world is absolute force. The revolutionary army is useless. Im only needs to fire one shot, and the revolutionary army can be wiped out. It can even be said that Long has been waiting for his son to become Nika. You Guina are not Nika, what are you for?

The author has some crazy idea and made the protagonist become someone else's doppelgänger. Do you think your book's results are good? I have abandoned the book, and posting here is just to remind new readers not to fall into the trap casually.

I want to see Guina and Dasqi's posts

This latest chapter is not available. I'm giving up now, I haven't changed yet. Come here and give me a kick.

The main thing about Pirates is that the stronger you are, the more you can eat, and the more you can eat, the stronger you are 😥 You don't give me anything to eat during training, it's really poisonous

The author really didn't handle this part well. Judging from the original work and the title page "Jango's Adventure Paradise", he himself is a person with a bottom line. No matter when he appeared or after he was abandoned by the Black Cat Pirates, he did not harm the villagers and children of Silobu Village. He was even chased and beaten by Usopp's three carrot-headed boys. In the Dance Competition on Glass Bead Island, whether it was to save a friend or a beautiful hostage, he teamed up with Fenbudi to fight against the Flower Hand Pirates, and then was arrested calmly, which indirectly shows that this person is a man. If the author had shown praise for the good from the first meeting, for example, he had a verbal conflict with Maysam's men, criticized the other party for coercing his friends or admirers, denounced his slave trade, suffered inner torture for participating in such evil things, etc... In this way, the readers would be more likely to accept it, and the image would be more consistent with the original work. Whether it is to directly express trust based on the senses of the previous life, or to whitewash his identity as a slave trader, the protagonist keeps saying that he wants to kill the slave trader, but because he is an acquaintance of Zangao in his previous life, he wants to accept him as his younger brother. The characters of both parties have not been overdone and adjusted, and it looks really uncomfortable. I hope the author will make adjustments, otherwise it will be easy to discourage readers.

... In fact, there is no need to create a DNF swordsman template, because Kuina's swordsmanship talent is already very strong, and the original book clearly shows that she is stronger than Zoro's swordsmanship talent. If she hadn't met a patriarchal father and died inexplicably after falling down the stairs, there would really be no telling who is stronger or weaker than Zoro.

You can tolerate everything else, but what kind of mentality is it to accept a trafficker as your subordinate?

I can't even eat enough, but I still do high-intensity training and still improve quickly. It's really amazing.

I don't know why I like to read rebellion novels. The time-traveling pirates joined the revolutionary army to rebel against the Celestial Dragons, the Naruto rebelled against the Daimyo, the Attack on Titan rebelled against the royal family, and the Crimson Eyes rebelled against the empire. Why is this so?

Do the protagonists nowadays have to sublimate their themes? They have to change and save the world at every turn?

Luffy's liberation and Dragon's revolution were just a change of king, which had nothing to do with the bottom from beginning to end. The overthrow of the Celestial Dragons only meant the abolition of slavery and the move towards feudalism, not liberation in the modern sense. Fen II Yu Lie, vigorously develop his strategy in Yu Yunei, Nika Xing, King Luffy! The feudal destiny belongs to, and the bloodline inheritance is right.

Hundreds of Marriages Say your camp, it's good for everyone

The idea of ​​becoming a general in Wano is a good idea, but what about those foolish and loyal people?

Oda-sensei is portraying the pirate characters. The more he portrays them, the more they are. I can't even watch this fanfic anymore.

There is really no need to read it anymore. The book is like Guanyin soil, but it cannot satisfy your hunger and cannot be digested. Just look at the chapter names and you will know the content inside.

When I saw the title of the book, I remembered another sentence: Pirate, Airbender Zoro. Then the sword battle will start again among the pirates

When the protagonist masters the ability of hypnosis or mind control, it proves that the author is beginning to be perfunctory. There is also a book next door that is beginning to be perfunctory. I hate myself for spending money on this kind of book.

The most sinful among pirates is Roger. The era of great pirates has started. More people have gone to sea, and 95% of them are scum. These are sins. The organization of the World Government should exist. It just needs to clean up a group of people and overthrow the government. Don't tell me to establish a feudal kingdom or an equal society. This is an extraordinary world, and the sea can only Balance cannot be suppressed, unless it is invincible + immortal, but isn't this a dictatorship? Also, the revolutionary army here is not a good bird. What is the use of overthrowing some noble kings? To teach people how to fish, ideas are the most important. Unification + government is more suitable. The five-old star system is good and can be retained. Five people are more democratic than one person

Want the pirates to truly achieve peace and unification 1: The sea train must be completed to achieve convenient transportation 2: Eliminate more than 90% of the evil kings and nobles, and change the country into an autonomous region or municipality 3: Special race (fur Tribes, mermaids, fishmen, giants, small humans, long-handed tribes, etc.) Are integrated to achieve equality and change into ethnic minorities 4: Clear out more than 90% of the big pirates, eliminate the pirate flags, and can be changed into an adventure group (criminals will also be wanted and rewarded) 5: Public ownership of Devil Fruits, bounties can be given if you turn them in, and you need to register your abilities and life cards to eat them yourself 6: Major changes in the law, abolishing various lynchings and local country and island laws 7: Establishing an air force, army, and police department to provide checks and balances Navy, balance of power 8: Recruiting talents, popularizing ideological education, disseminating knowledge (schools, colleges, military academies), medical development (Drum Island), armament research and development (the smartest hot man in 800 years) Other additions are welcome

I want to read Kuina's fanfic, but it's too niche and I can't find it. This book has a system or a system that I don't understand at all (dnf has never understood it). I have stepped on the wrong point and haven't read it. I have so many meanings. Is there any big guy who can write about it? 🙂

It's so funny, there are more than 200 chapters written and turned into more than 300 chapters 🤭

The progress is a bit fast, please write more, the best is to write 200W

I know I won't order so many. It's a series of chronicle narratives. I might as well just look at the chapter names. I heard that the later chapters are more poisonous, so I'd better remove them from the bookshelf.

"Pirates: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of Gods. The protagonist will rise up in the Rocks Pirate Group and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of Gods, he participated in the struggle for hegemony in the new world, became the world's greatest swordsman, and dominated the new world together with Whitebeard and others.

Well, actually I think the chapters that are not on the shelves are better. The pace of advancement is too fast and the characters cannot keep up. Being in a young state for a long time (this is the strangest thing, the sense of violation is too strong) It's cool... In fact, it seems to be there but not at all, pretending... It doesn't seem to be pretending, I just did something that I thought was awesome, but in fact the plot ended before it started.

It feels okay, but there are a few points at the beginning where you don't have to follow the dragon. With a system and a father, you can be the best on your own. Instead of buying Nami's house, it's better to just move in and live in it. You just take over the family's memories for several years, which is a bit unkind. In the mid-term, the strength has advanced a bit too quickly. From a strength of about 300 million to a card-level strength in just a few chapters.

This book has become unreadable since it progressed beyond the original work.