People Are in the Heavens, Starting as Li Xingyun

Gaowu and fantasy are two different concepts. The most bad people are Zhongwu. If it's a comprehensive martial arts story, it would be great if you could write a few hundred pieces. But if you do something like covering the sky or doing something like Douluo. People over 30 years old won't watch it very much, but people under 20 years old may watch it. Because Douluo is yours, youth. Not mine. For us, what he wrote is okay, but that doesn't mean we like it. We think you may not have heard of great writers. When we were young, Zichuan was a great god in Sou Shen Ji Wukong Biography. This is. The flower of time. Flowers bloom differently.

Finished reading. Also voted. You haven't seen enough in this month.

If you see a hodgepodge and you're not interested in reading it, it has nothing to do with whether the writing is good or not.

The subject matter is good, the writing can be practiced, and of course the author is not bad. I saw a brother said that you can learn the five-party lolita. This is true. The loli martial arts is really well written. I personally feel that it is at its peak now. There is also a style of "Yu Yu Feng Deng" that can also be added. I wish the author can find some signings (Jing Keshou's "The Tang Dynasty" is also very good)

It's hard not to feel comfortable if you have to suppress your realm, and you also have an inexplicable sworn sworn relationship with Qiao Feng, which has a perfect effect of persuading him to quit.

Emm, it's not that a hodgepodge is bad, but if it's too mixed, there will be a lot of poisonous points. In the first world, Fengyun, Tian Long Ba Bu, The Condor Trilogy, and Bad Guys are put together. The author really can't think about it. If you don't fight, who will fight? The painting style of these worlds is different. It's all in one pot. Is it because you are afraid that readers will read your book?

When Wang Yuyan saw Tianlong, I didn't understand that martial arts masters can't fight as fast as she said. In reality, my hands are faster than my mouth when fighting. Do all martial arts masters fight in slow motion?

It was good before Chapter 86, but when the Extraterrestrial Demon came out in Chapter 87, both the plot and the character design dropped significantly. In the previous chapter, the protagonist was still a fun person with two businesses online, but in the end, there was a life-and-death battle, and there was still severe pain. What did you do earlier?

I'm really a bit of a noob. I couldn't help it when I made a sworn vows with Gang Leader Qiao. The plot happened so many years ago and I'm still writing about the sworn vows now.

It's boring to feel that after learning the Beiming Divine Technique and getting help from the system, I only reached a small level in half a month. Even that small realm is improved by character cards, not by using the Beiming Divine Skill. As a result, the heroine beside him is Wang Yuyan. Not only did he learn the Beiming Magic Skill for a little while, his strength greatly increased. It belongs to the Renaissance. As long as the protagonist comes into contact with a woman, the woman will somehow feel the same as the protagonist. I feel like I don't feel anything at all when I use Bei Ming Shen Gong. The realm is as slow as the Turtle Card, and the supporting actress always keeps up with it inexplicably. It belongs to ancient literature.

No, you haven't even broken through to become a god. Here comes Nuwa with demonic energy. I'm really nervous.

It's not that you can't write a hodgepodge, but at least your style is unified, right? The styles you have combined are all different, making people feel uncomfortable watching them by leaps and bounds, just like the underworld in China becomes hell, the heaven becomes heaven, the emperor of heaven becomes god, and the soldiers of heaven become angels. The style is awkward.

This setting of demonic energy is a failure. A fourth-level player with a little bit of demonic energy can beat the masters on the grandmaster list. And it doesn't seem to cost anything

I can't stand it when I see Qiao Feng being sworn in... It would be nice if husband and wife and father and son can get along well, but in reality, political correctness is a bigger problem. Childish is not good, fairy tales are okay, but time travelers should forget about it!

Mixed martial arts is quite interesting, but the combat power is not high enough. I read a comprehensive martial arts book on a certain website. The eight continents surround Zhongzhou. The eight continents are low martial arts and middle martial arts. Zhongzhou is a miserable state (but you can't get out of the eight continents, and people from the eight continents can enter). This avoids the collapse of combat power, famous figures being hit by dimensionality reduction, and the overall upper limit of force is high.

This book is good, but I read the introduction and it said that there is a part about covering the sky: the protagonist can also seize bodies and bodies! I feel that seizing the body is very alienating, and there is no setting for seizing the body in Zhetian. It can only be soul fusion at best. For example: Xiaoyao Tianzun can only fuse the soul of the original owner to seize the body and extend his life, but his true self has been lost. I hope the author will consider it!

I'm very curious, in this world of high martial arts, how fast an animal like a horse can travel is considered a warrior. Do high-level warriors still need to ride a horse? I don't mean any harm, but I've seen many warriors from the middle and high martial arts world leaping tens of meters, and it feels a bit strange to ride a horse while rushing.

Isn't this settled? Was it originally a hodgepodge of martial arts? This also includes the story about the demon outside the territory. Can you write it?

There can't be a female protagonist in the world, it can only be a failure. Fantasy novels with many female protagonists must be garbage novels!

Li Xingyun's Adou who can't help him?

The most difficult part of mixed martial arts is how to integrate the various settings in each work. Dugu Qiubei is really defeated, then he is still Dugu Qiubei? His setting is that he is invincible in the world, and only the word love can hurt him. If his martial arts is no longer invincible, and the gap of love and injury is filled, then it is better not to write Dugu Qiubai and just write a new character. But if you want to write about being invincible in the world and promoting martial arts, then some readers will say, why do you, a low-level martial arts character like Jin Yong, fight against a high-level martial arts boss who is about to live forever?

I think there may be a difference between "acting" and "pretending". Is it "acting" if you wear a few other people's clothes and say a few words to others?

The front part is okay, but the back part is really unsatisfying. It feels like martial arts training without the kind of bravery and refinement.

When you see the word "Zongwu", you avoid the trap. You can't write "Zongwu" and the training systems are all different. If you try to put them all together, it will be confusing.

Reading is really important for new books. You can read books, but if you can, be noble and turn to the last page every day. Please!

I saw that it was Zhu Tianwen, and the heroine was still Wang Yuyan. One glance sets the target, purely the author's crooked writing

The protagonist is already an invincible master and can compete with the great master. He is much stronger than Qiao Feng, but he is still sworn in. I also spent 5,000 wealth points to exchange healing medicine for Qiao Feng. It's so licking that I can't stand it anymore.

The biggest point of mixed martial arts is the time line issue. Some stories take place in the Tang Dynasty, some take place in the Song Dynasty, and some take place in the Ming Dynasty. Many martial arts have a history of inheritance. For example, many people like to inherit the Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty in mixed martial arts, and also write about the story of the Four Famous Catchers and the No. 1 In the World. Especially the plot of Qin Shi Mingyue. The various techniques of good and evil in The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty are related to various schools of thought. You write this.

It might be much better if I write world by world.