Ember Dragon

I can't stand fighting a vampire anymore. I know that the vampire is about to ascend. Instead of beating him directly, I have to slowly attack the city slowly. When I fight the BOSS, the first one to arrive is the player? ? Wait until the ascension is successful and beat the players, then they arrive late and say it's too late? ? ? There is also a vampire who summons a level 21 legendary shadow dragon after death. As a reborn player, he doesn't know the opponent's characteristics and needs to try magic one by one? ? Summoning the phantom of the five-color dragon mother when you have no other choice? ? ? It's like dragging your pants and farting for two chapters? ? As a reader, the first thought when seeing a legendary enemy is to summon the Five-Colored Dragon Mother, but the author just gave up a chapter on summoning? ? ?

In fact, there are many dragons who believe in Tiamat, and there are even more blue dragons and green dragons. But most of their faith is shallow, that is, just a few words. In addition, unless it is an extremely devout priest, no dragon will bring the statue of Tiamat to his lair. Because Tiamat is really capable of stealing these dragon treasures, and he has done it more than once. Super shameless.

Wouldn't it be better if you just honestly wrote the red dragon? It would be okay if there were fewer players in the front, but then the protagonist would be invisible in the back? I really think I am a novel about online games and the fourth natural disaster. And the dozens of pictures about Demon of the Abyss are too lazy to spray, they are just poisonous. Now the middle and late stages are all about the development of the empire and the players. If the protagonist becomes the background, I will be disappointed.

Cool! Kill, kill, kill without mercy, be strong, be strong, be invincible, all have been ordered. Just like what I said, the whole process is conquest, conquest, and conquest. Build a monster lair at the beginning, then occupy a principality, and then conquer the northern kingdom. Anyway, I enjoyed it. 🤓🤓🤓

Let you see what a jet dragon is

I hope that the protagonist can kill or punish the half-elf paladin in the future. Revenge for killing his mother, losing his asylum, and running away in panic. These three are big troubles for any dragon. Even if it is an evil dragon, the protagonist is still in the neutral camp, so he must have revenge.

This game is too real, the leader of the village, the mechanic I won't talk about the first one, just monitor the account ban in real time The second part is martial arts, the world is restricted and there will be no call of the evil god, you can only beat the boss, how many times has this Dali killed the chicken to scare the monkeys, and is still wary of the players all day long The third part, time and space amber account ban, information state Not to mention erasing and deleting accounts, the upper limit is only A level, which is blocked Several great novels have to limit players, not just the number of resurrections per day What's more, your book DND worldview has a lot of big guys, and you can't write it casually. Other books are still original worldviews, no matter how you say it, it is the author's freedom. As a novel player, you have neither level restrictions nor account bans, nor worldview restrictions. How do you restrict players? Is it by blocking the resurrection point?

Suddenly I remembered the red dragon from Interface Card Brother. I caught a silver dragon and then strengthened it three times a day. After the human form, I finished the dragon form and then the dragon form.

The combat power is written too abstractly. It says you can beat legends at first, but then a level 15 player will hang you up and beat you. If you don't write about this stuff, you'll just brush it off for the sake of the plot. You write down the combat power level clearly. In every chapter, you write about why the protagonist is so awesome. When it comes to fighting, he is like Yang Wei. Then doesn't your previous description conflict with your subsequent performance? For those who understand the DND system, they know that targeted spells can defeat the enemy. The problem is that a large number of people who read your book don't know much about it. When you describe the combat power, you have to make a patch in advance to tell readers that this kind of existence will threaten the protagonist. And at least in the early stage, you didn't write a few crushing games for the protagonist. Each time, you spent a lot of ink describing the battle of wits and courage. Before the upgrade, you fought against 55 people, and after the upgrade, you still fought against 55 people.

Well, I can't stand watching the demon invasion anymore. Those who don't know think it's an invasion from hell. It's too traditional villain evil force. When did the demon army become so orderly? Those fleeing nobles in the North have turned into high-level demons. Can their souls be qualified? It's not a famous high-level professional who has fallen. The souls of ordinary corrupt nobles generally fall into the Bato Hell to be used as consumables. Moreover, high-level demons have their own teleportation and summoning demons. How can they be in the resistance line and get bombed?

Singing brings breath, the dragon's heir Singing begins the first world Created from chaos, the color is beautiful. Singing Bahamut of platinum, sculpting majestic shapes for mountains, seas and rivers Singing Tiamat of all colors, painting colorful shapes for infinite scrolls They woke up from the darkness together, and worked together to create the world. Breathe with song, the heir of the dragon Sing Sadivo was born in the world The dragon gods followed their own appearance Carved their images out of ruby The first-born dragon and the two dragon gods Laid the pattern for the dragon race - The dragon of metal and the dragon of color. Breathe with song, the heir of the dragon! Because it was given at the beginning of creation the power that breathes life into you. Sing to rest, the dragon's descendants Sing the arrival of outsiders The gods set off a raging war The number of mortal descendants is huge They came to the first world, for many The followers sought their home With powerful magic and numerous armies the gods of invasion finally won The noble Bahamut was knocked to the ground, and Sadivo hid in the heart of the world. Sing the Breath, the dragon's heir; Sing of Tiamat's present face, Rage for hopeless victory. She will never flee or surrender, she will fight until the cold claws of death fall. However, the gods who started the war imprisoned her. She will not die. Only pain will bury her She will never see the light of day. Being shackled by the tyrant gods who stole creation. Sing to breath, the heirs of the dragon; Sing to the outsiders to tame the world, and their people will thrive in the new world like seeds sprouting and growing on the earth. The elegant elves live in the wild forests, the stubborn dwarves dig into the towering hills, the rough beastmen capture the caves and canyons, the cunning goblins divide the barren wilderness, the halflings cultivate the green fields, the lizard tribe hides in the depths of the swamps, and humans are scattered in all directions. Sing to breath, the dragon's heir; Sing Bahamut to forge peace He was invited to the Heavenly Mountains, to be honored as the Holy King by the Platinum Paladins. Sings of his journey of discovery, Learning about the new gods and their offspring He longs for Tiamat to be free again, mourning that it no longer walks the halls of the world. Sing the Breath, the dragon's heir; Sing Tiamat out of her bonds and free again Speak of her gathering her children, letting the chromatic dragons spread chaos. Singing her vengeful fury Poisonous lightning, blazing frost, and strong acid corroding bones Now the Dragon God has given birth to five shapes Terrifying in her form, but supreme in her power She has unleashed havoc on the world, Raining destruction that no one can stop. Sing the breath, the dragon's heir; Sing the first world of the past, Fragment into the boundless reality. Sing of Bahamut and Tiamat, Mourning the destruction of their laborious creations. Also sing Sadivo, The movement of spiritual consciousness is subtle and subtle. Breath of song, heir of the dragon: You should inherit the great cause of the dragon god Rule over the first world in the past - even though it is a broken past​

You are a red dragon, come on and look like a red dragon! Whether it's brutality or hand-to-hand combat, why don't you learn a woolen spell? It's not that you can't learn spells, but you are a red dragon. Do you want to do something that is full of violence? You can use flaming arrows for hunting, take advantage of the enemy, and use the hands of the mage, but you don't look like a red dragon at all? What I want to see is something like Plutonium Dragon, Nuclear Bomb Dragon, Armored Dragon, and Black Dragon that can blow everything up in melee combat!

Write less about firearms, tanks and other industrial products, they are really low-level. Can the author have some thoughts of his own? This is just a bad way of crushing the natives (replicating real-life technology).

It commits a common problem in game writing. In the later stage, it is all about the players. The protagonist is reduced to a symbol, and the players become the real protagonists.

Xiaodeng is a poor writer who can't write big scenes, player fighting competitions, and a series of poisonous battlefields in the abyss invasion. There are places where he is not good at and he still manages to do it. The writing is watery and bad, the speech styles of players and NPCs cannot be switched smoothly, and the player speeches are only in a few fixed live broadcast barrage formats Identified as: Xiao Deng who has never played good games or watched good movies, and can only binge-watch short videos and watch live broadcast slices.

In this kind of fourth-day disaster story, the protagonist will want players to work for him in the follow-up. But why does the protagonist think this way? When players appear, shouldn't you question the authenticity of your world? After all, players can affect your world, but you can't affect them. If the plot is not right, someone else will change it for you with a string of codes. Shouldn't you learn soul spells to change the player's perception to conquer the real world? If it is someone else's virtual world model, at least the personality memory can be copied and made real.

Can you write less about your player, or mention it in one stroke? Adding so many scenes to the player will affect the perception. What we want to see is the red dragon. Don't be confused about the beginning and the end.

To be honest, the bottom line of most players is much stronger than that of indigenous monsters and human nobles. It is much more efficient for those players to become nobles and officials in various basic positions than indigenous monsters.

Dragon Language Teaching The following are words selected from the Dragon Language vocabulary, as well as their translations and parts of speech. Common Draconic Parts of Speech Above svern preposition after ghent preposition air thrae noun and vur conjunction animal b aeshra noun Armor litrix noun Arrow svent noun Ash vignar noun Axe garurt noun Bag waeth noun battle vargach adjective bronze aujir noun before ghoros preposition behind zara preposition below v hir preposition beside unsinti preposition big turalisj adjective black vutha adjective bleed valeij verb bloo d iejir noun blue ulhar adjective bow vaex noun burn valignat verb bravery sveargith noun breed maurg verb bribe durah verb but shar conjunction cave waere noun celestial ahear noun cent ury ierikc noun cleric sunathaer noun claw gix noun copper rach noun cow rhyvos noun cow ard faessi adjective crippled thurgix adjective dance vaeri noun, verb danger korth noun darkvision s verak noun day kear noun dead loex adjective deity urathear noun demon kothar noun die loreat verb disembowel gixustrat verb dragon darastrix noun dwarf tundar noun earth edar noun elf vaecaesin noun enchanted levex adjective enemy irlym adjective, noun evil malsvir adjective eye saur iv noun far karif adjective, adverb fate haurach noun few lauth noun fire ixen noun flee osvith verb fly austra verb food achthend noun for ihk preposition forest caesin noun fortress hurthi noun friend thurirl adjective, noun gem kethend noun give majak verb gnome terunt noun go gethr isj verb gold aurix noun good bensvelk adjective green achuak adjective halfling rauhiss noun hammer jhank noun hate dartak noun, verb heal irisv verb home okarthel noun human munthrek noun > if sjek conjunction in persvek preposition iron usk adjective kill svent verb leader maekrix noun magi c arcaniss noun man sthyr noun many throden noun meat rhyaex noun mountain verthicha noun name ominak noun near leirith adjective, adverb night thurkear noun no thric adverb nor thur conjunction ogre ghontix noun on shafaer preposition one ir noun or usv conjunction orc ghik noun peace martivir noun word pillage thadarsh verb platinum ux noun rain oposs noun red chair adjective rest ssifis v verb scroll sjir noun secret irthos adjective, noun see ocuir verb shadow sjach noun silver o rn noun skin(hide) molik noun slaughter kurik verb small kosj adjective smart othokent adjective so zyak adverb, conjunction soar hysvear verb song miririk noun sorcerer vorastrix noun speak renthisj verb spear ner noun star isk noun steel vyth adjective stone ternesj noun stop pok verb s torm kepesk noun Strong versvesh adjective stupid pothoc adjective sword caex noun take clax verb talk ukris verb thief virlym noun through erekess preposition to ekess preposition tomorrow earenk noun Travel ossalur verb Treasure rasvim noun Tooth oth noun Ugly nurh adjective undead kaegro noun word, adjective under onureth preposition valley arux noun victory vivex noun want tuor verb war aryte noun water hesjing noun we yth pronoun wealth noach noun weapon laraek noun white aussir description word with mrith preposition wizard levethix noun woman aesthyr noun wood grovisv noun year eori kc noun yellow yrev adjective yes axun adverb yet sjerit adverb you wux pronoun Here are some typical sentences and their dragon language translations. Miyali, talk to the ugly elf. Mialee, ukris vaecaesin nurh. The elves said that the magic sword we want is in the Lich's tomb. Vaecaesin ner levex caex levex yth tuor persvekarikaegrowaere. If we pay him, he will take us to the mountain where the tomb is located. Vaecaesin tuor aurix clax yth ekess ariloexokarthelverthicha. This cave is evil and dangerous. We should leave. Sauriv waere korth. Yth *gethrisj*. Shut up, you stupid coward! Get in! Thric ner, *pothoc* wux faessi! *Gethrisj* persvek! Tordak, beat that orc with your axe. Tordek, vargach ghik mrith aritordekgarunt. A red dragon! Escape! Charir *darastrix*!*Osvith*! Krusk is dead. He died bravely. Krusk loex. Loreat mrith *sveargith*. Yes, he is so unfortunate. Axun malsvir arikruskhaurach. Count all this gold! Tomorrow we will be kings! Ocuir throden *aurix*! Earenk yth *maekrix*! I am not a thief! *Thric* virlym! The secret of the dragon's treasure is in this scroll. Ardarastrixrasvim irthos shafaer sjir. The dragon's blood flows in the sorcerer's body. Aridarastrixiejir gethrisj persvek vorastrix. Please don't eviscerate that dwarf. Martivir thric gixustratt tundar.

Look at another Long Wen and look at you again. It's really disappointing.

It's another novel that imitates a super-super mechanic to death. To be honest, Qi Peijia's death is the thing I hate the most when reading online articles in recent years, because I haven't seen an author who is so suitable to my taste for a long time. In the online literature world, there have been a large number of imitators in recent years, but none of them has a good novel about a super-super mechanic. It seems that there is one who is more famous for writing mixed martial arts. Unfortunately, I didn't feel happy enough after reading it. In fact, I have been reading this novel for several months. When I saw the author's crude imitation of the plot of the player competition in The Super Mechanic, I had a vague feeling that this book was not far away from death. If I didn't think about it, the author would have an appendix. To be honest, a bad ending is a big no-no, but sometimes when I think about the author not cutting the book, it seems like I can't write anymore. It's really uncomfortable to read, and it's really uncomfortable to write. Since Qi Peijia disappeared from the Internet, I have read nearly ten imitation works of Qi Peijia in Qidian. To be honest, most people have written about it. . . Therefore, this subject matter is the type of book that looks simple but is about to be thrown into the street. I personally feel that the works on Qidian have not been so spiritual in recent years. They just live by relying on a few great masters and old friends. Maybe Qidian is about to separate again (speculation). Anyway, it is not like in previous years. I found many good novels in it. Of course, I think this may be This is a hurdle that senior bookworms cannot overcome. All senior bookworms are like this. When reading books by ordinary authors, you can vaguely guess the outline or the author's writing point from the beginning. You can guess the content of the chapter by just looking at the title. You can sweat on your forehead just by looking at the writing. Hey, I really miss the time when reading was simple. Now my appetite for reading is really getting stronger and stronger 😅

Okay, it looks pretty cool. The combat power is not too abstract and is quite stable. The main thing is the recent dwarves. They don't feel like humans. I mean, just fight the dwarves. Why do you have to waste your troops directly? If there are casualties, even training the army is not a training method. In fact, you can directly send special forces to seduce the orcs in advance. After all, the green-skinned orcs have low intelligence. You can directly lure the monsters to let them fight the dwarves. Then you can also notify the dwarves in the name of justice and ask them to strengthen their defenses. Finally, when the green-skinned orcs attack the dwarves, directly send troops to support. After a battle, the basic dwarves can be integrated and have a relationship with the dwarf god system. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and it is also quite general. In fact, the protagonist's troops can implement this routine now, that is, to seduce the Chaos to fight the Orderers, and then send troops to support the bicycles. Relying on advanced logistics, they can swallow up all the Orderers and the rear. Then, even if the war is over, your wife and children are in our hands. If you don't join us, where will you go? Anyway, that's probably what I think, ah, of course it's just my idea. The main thing is that the author's writing of the book is okay. At least the logic is normal.

How to put it, I can only say that this novel was written in the wrong era. The protagonist was always described in the beginning, but in the middle, the players of the 4th natural disaster were suddenly inserted, and then the role of the protagonist was continuously reduced. If you want it to be like this, why not directly introduce the players at the beginning? In fact, the story of the novel itself is quite good, but it's a pity.

Shocked

Hoho, after watching it, I found out that I got the first place 😰

It's really shameless to end the update. It's okay to give it a casual ending.

What about the author? Have you changed your account?

It feels like every time the protagonist upgrades, he still struggles in combat. After gaining power that could rival the Dragon God, it didn't show anything at all. And the player's ability and the boss's ability are nothing when combined. Just upgrade your bloodline all the way, and suffer losses all the way.

I can't stand the chapters before they were released. Can I be an author with this kind of writing style? There are dozens of questions about you in the comment area, but you pretend to be dead and don't modify or reply😅

This ultra-low-end version of Blue Dragon actually has many people following it. It seems that the starting point has indeed declined.