The Dharma-Ending World Accompanies Me in Farming

Even if it is your debut novel, you should write an outline first before starting to update it! This time, let's think of everyone practicing writing with you. You should seize the time to finish writing this book, and send out the outline of the next book for everyone to take a look at!

The presumption of responsibility at the beginning is just fucking outrageous. The protagonist was betrayed by his girlfriend, and then his father killed him, and he still thinks it is his responsibility? ! What does it have to do with the protagonist? At most, the protagonist has a secondary responsibility, providing a certain amount of help for public opinion and online violence Shouldn't the main responsibility be the person who published the rumors? Although the male protagonist contributed to the flames, he was only venting his anger, and he did not maliciously spread rumors, nor did he end up spreading rumors Why did he get cheated on by his girlfriend? You have to be nice and calm, and be careful not to ruin your girlfriend's reputation? What kind of licking dog can do this? No, my girlfriend cheated on her and she still had to support the adulterer from behind? If the responsibility can be placed on the male protagonist, then I would also say that the responsibility can be placed on the girlfriend. If she hadn't cheated or cheated, wouldn't these things have happened, and the male protagonist wouldn't have told the truth in public in anger She could cheat, but others couldn't say anything about her, right? Even if it is a normal breakup, after the breakup, you will wish your ex was dead. Not to mention the breakup caused by the cheating of the other party Among the parties involved in this matter, the male protagonist should be considered the one with the least fault, right? Rumor spreaders and cyber bullies: the main culprits who caused the girlfriend's death Girlfriend: cheated on her, which aroused the male protagonist's anger and ruined her reputation Girlfriend's father: failed to discipline his daughter, and even broke into the house to kill someone Male protagonist: was betrayed by his girlfriend's cheating, and was killed by his girlfriend's father. Although the angry talk played a role in fueling this incident, it is only a secondary responsibility

This book is really awesome, I was confused in the first two or three pages of Chapter 1. Tell the truth. When I saw the paragraph "There is no doubt that Zhao Yi's death was not innocent, but for Carlo, his girlfriend and his daughter who caused him harm are his enemies", I re-read it two or three times from beginning to end, but I didn't understand what kind of narrative device this was and what kind of thing it was describing. Given the current Internet environment in Qidian, physical and mental recovery after time travel should be a very simple matter. Why does it have to be so awkward?

In the current context, it is best to write out of love and not to make a living from it. I started writing this month because of anxiety. Many plots in the novel reflect my anxiety. I hope I can correct it as soon as possible.

Chapter 8 said that agricultural backwardness is due to the upper class monopolizing agricultural technology and not opening it to serfs. They would rather reduce grain production than teach serfs better agricultural technology. Can you think through it before speaking? Some people actually dislike that their own leeks grow too well and deliberately suppress their own leeks.

In the first chapter, he was persuaded to quit. His girlfriend cheated on him and was violently raped and committed suicide. The male protagonist was killed by the female protagonist's father. Now that the law is being popularized today, the male protagonist needs to have a sense of responsibility to comfort himself after traveling through time, right? If you don't know how to write, just be killed by a dump truck and time travel. There is no need to make up so much. It is thankless and disgusting to the readers.

I don't understand. Why is the system offline?

The writing style is not very good and the plot is incoherent. There is a beauty of writing wherever you think of it.

Although there is the factor of my own "money ability", it is really difficult to get to this point in one month. Thank you for your continued support.

The beginning part is indeed very poisonous. The male protagonist, a male college student, was chopped up without any resistance... But now that the matter has come to this, I will make the mistake right. After all, the poisonous point is also a way to make money.

There must be limits to protecting your post. If you play tricks every day, be careful of being beaten to death by your book friends.

I was confused when I read it. I felt that the preface did not match the following, the character descriptions were confusing, and there were always some comments made by young people who thought they were philosophical.

Thank you for your support and feedback during this period, which has given me the courage to stick to my dreams. Although I feel very confused about the future due to employment pressure and postgraduate entrance examination pressure, I will continue to work hard and practice together with the heavy pressure.

I listened to Brother Banana's class today and felt that I benefited a lot. I have always been too lyrical when writing, and did not focus on guiding the readers' emotions. It is very bad to be called "literary youth" at a glance. I hope I can master the rhythm of digging holes and filling them in the future. The second chapter is about to begin. Let's start again.

When the author reaches 150,000 words, he will find an editor again, and then he should be able to put it on the shelves

I will take the English CET-6 test on the 16th. I will update normally during this period to relieve fatigue.

I've been looking around, but there's no news about the first V, and I haven't found where the first V is?

I myself feel that my sentences are not fluent. It seems that I need to reduce the description of psychological activities and focus on the plot.

Coming

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

I plan to change the beginning of the first chapter, but there is no feasible idea. Do you think I changed the whole part to be hit by a dump truck? Or should he change the unilateral massacre by his girlfriend's father into a fight and die? It's really difficult to change it after you finish writing it...