American Comics: Unlimited Spider-Man

Shennong is here. I have finished reading it. The setting is good and the logic is very clear. The combat power is controlled quite stably, keep it up, otherwise it will collapse easily. The first few chapters are a bit boring, but then it gets better and you can ignore some minor problems. In short, it is a good book and the future is promising.

This does not copy Darwin, Black King, and Wolverine, but the life-saving ability is directly maxed out.

It always gives me the feeling of another author. After I cut the first book, "Spider-Man of Time and Space", I wrote another one, "Across the Universe", and then I also cut the second one. I feel that the author opened a small account to write this book again. The world of Miles feels like a new way of writing without changing the medicine. He stole the characters from the original work without changing anything, and then re-wrote the original plot, just like a native, except that the two were licking the heroine Gwen the Spider. The heroine Gwen was determined at the beginning. Could it be that they are really the same author? The opening time of the book and the time of the cut are also consistent.

Moreover, you currently give people a very comfortable feeling. It is not like a dark novel, which is full of hostility, nor is it like a disgusting Madonna novel, but it is very comfortable to read.

It's amazing. I don't care what others think, I think this chapter is really amazing. Indeed, when I usually watch it, I watch it from God's perspective, but if I step into the protagonist's mind, I can really understand the entanglement and powerlessness at that time. There was a similar question on the forum before. If surrendering one person could save the earth, how would you choose? At that time, most forums chose to hand it over, but Spider-Man was different. He is a hero and he cannot just look at his own choices. So I think this chapter is really great. It not only describes the protagonist's mentality, but also describes the protagonist's entanglements and psychological activities as Spider-Man and Peter. Of course the author cannot write to everyone's satisfaction, but I am very satisfied. Moreover, the logic is also very clear. The future is promising, keep working hard

There is too much wasted work. Although Spider-Man himself is a talker, he still can't stand the protagonist's nonsense and the content is too full of water.

You are so trustworthy, and you are so talkative and talkative. I think the first chapter is okay. Every time I talk to the mirror afterwards, I am really speechless. I can't stand it. Maybe I like to be decisive and realistic There are so many comments that praise and praise, and other comments that discuss the content are not at all

I looked at more than 30 pictures and didn't understand what the use of copying is? There is no change in strength before and after copying!

Although I am living in a novel, I can feel that the protagonist is really alive. Not only does it describe the choices and conflicts between the protagonists as Peter Parker and Spider-Man, but it also touches people. Is there any more perfect character than this?

To be honest, the content is okay. But the introduction is really discouraging, with a kind of ancient beauty of Long Aotian. If I hadn't read the book review section, I wouldn't have clicked in.

After thinking about it, it feels like a difficult problem to travel through a new universe every time I enter a new instance. Because not only the plot must be taken into consideration, but also the continuity. I have now roughly written the general framework of the copy of the successor, which will probably have dozens of chapters. But where to travel to the next universe gives me a little headache. Because plot issues have to be taken into consideration, while making readers happy, the issue of combat power cannot be broken. So, I simply thought that after the Successor dungeon ends, it would be up to the readers to decide the protagonist's next dungeon in the universe, and then I would write the big event. So if you want the protagonist to travel to the universe you want to see, just interact in this discussion area.

The contradiction between Parker and Spider-Man is that they cannot have both. As long as they are capable enough, both can be arduous. All tragedies are due to the lack of ability of the parties involved. They should rely on the ability to copy. You completely ignore the pressure that Peter, the person involved, is under. First is the American comic world, and then the Heir family. The crises are like multiple dominoes, one after another. How can we not be strong? We have to limit the ability to copy and forcibly reduce the combat power.

Oh, the end page of the free chapter is directly refreshed to the first chapter of the new update.

The super giant itself has the ability to fly, so there is no need to add a pair of wings. Also, the reaction speed of the super giant is very fast, and there is no way that Mojas can catch Xiao Ben as a hostage under the nose of the super giant without being restrained.

{"NickName":"The Rubber Fruit in One Piece","UserId":390228159} Author, can you let Gwen always wear a spider suit and a mask on her face when she is in peacetime, when she is private with Peter? Especially having her wearing a spider mask. It would be best if you let the protagonist kiss Gwen with his mouth through the mask.

{"NickName":"The Rubber Fruit in One Piece","UserId":390228159} Author, I gave you a reward just now. I gave you a reward of 500. Can you say thank you to me?

{"NickName":"The Rubber Fruit in One Piece","UserId":390228159} Author, when do you plan to create a group?

? Is this a eunuch? 😅

Hahaha, first and foremost, add a good author, hehe

Can the author go to various worlds to copy abilities and technologies?🤓

The plot is okay, and the heroine is Gwen. This article is very enjoyable to read. I love reading it and have saved it.

Third person perspective, difficult to write

The previous copying seemed to have some limitations. With the combination of invisibility, teleportation, and white hole traversal that even the Spider Sense could not recognize, theoretically the combat power would increase exponentially. As a genius, Peter should quickly realize the horror brought by the combination of these skills. Moreover, in the face of such a catastrophic event, the optimal solution is not to assemble a small team, but to constantly travel through time and space to quickly copy and directly maximize the combat power of a single target. The skill combination is too buggy. The protagonist no longer has the restriction of slow growth. External pressure should also force him to grow at a high speed, instead of seeming to have nothing. I didn't realize it, but the character design does not match the driving force of the plot. There should be strong restrictions on travel skills. Either the destination will always be random, or the CD time will be lengthened. Especially this is the world of Marvel. If time is added, Spider-Man can theoretically become the ceiling of combat power in the next second.

Aboriginal? Or time travel?

It's better to write about traveling to various Spider-Man haloes. Each time you travel to different universes, you can also learn different Spider-Man abilities, such as invisibility! Generate electricity! Wait, why can I learn it? It's nothing, I'm just a junior Spider-Man

The dialogue is too middle-school, suitable for middle school students

When are you going to get your little broken watch back?