Strategic Fantasy

Although I have always adhered to the principle of choosing the upper left corner if it doesn't look good, this time, I think I have to make an exception. I really can't help it. First of all, if we meet again in the future, I hope the emotional scenes can be written better, even if there are no emotional lines. To be honest, I quite like the setting of this book. Really, I fell in love with it as soon as I read the introduction. I thought maybe I was too deeply hurt by Dao Wei, and I eagerly wanted to read another happier story about Brother Huozi. If I had to compare it to a metaphor, it would probably be the feeling I had after watching the final battle of Kouga in the Demon Dragon Academy and seeing Chuunibyou falling in love. My initial expectation for this book was that it would be a truly cool version of Brother Huo Zi. The routine and boring things they talk about are not problems. Before I came to Qidian to read, my friend read a lot of cool articles for two or three years, such as urban, immortality, fantasy, etc., And he has already mastered it. This point is quite satisfactory and there is nothing to say. The problem lies with the heroine. How can I put it this way? I watched The School Beauty's Personal Agent. I don't know the latest chapter. I quit and read a few chapters in the middle. I can't say that they are evenly matched, at least they can be judged. You can replace her as a man, even a tomboy, a transvestite or something like that. The plot remains the same and everyone can accept it. Okay, if you play some more jokes, such as "Life is short, why not give it a try?" "Grandma told me to be brave enough to try" and the like, well, it will be great fun! But it happens to be a traditional love, so I can only say "huh?" Finally, I am a poor guy, not a rich guy, otherwise I wouldn't have been a premium user for more than three years without even a discount on my subscription. Brother's money doesn't come from strong winds. If it weren't for that girl, even if I just took a look at your profile, I would have gritted my teeth and booked it. But you come here from time to time, not only ruining the atmosphere, but also disgusting, so I can only say sorry. There is a long way to go, see you again if we are destined!

I stitched strategic-level angels and daogui, but it didn't please both sides. If you sew but don't take the initiative to say that you sewed, that's plagiarism. Neither the historical performance of strategic angels is used, nor the psychedelic performance of Daogui. There is no special design, no writing skills, it is still the same old running account of Internet articles, but the background setting is covered with layers of skin. Strategic Angel and Daogui are both works that highly combine background setting (world view) and narrative techniques. However, I can't see any ideas in this writing technique in this work. The reading experience feels like earth within the earth.

Three stars, not five stars. The subject matter is very good, but the ability is not up to par, and there are some highlights. You can read it once, but sometimes for the sake of balance, the pleasure of reading is lost. Actually, I think that if you are a new author, even if you can't make enough money, it would be great if you write a million words. Now the author is very concerned about what will happen after 2 million or 5 million. The first three and a half million won't attract people, but the last three and a half million is a very suitable ending. They are very confident and think they can have a story worth three to five million.

Read, don't like, good idea

Very good idea, plot design is also good. Personal shortcomings: It's a bit tiring to watch, and it feels like there are too many characters, or there are too many supporting roles. The general meaning is: the author has written the protagonist's upgrade route very clearly, and the reader has nothing to think about. It is written like a cool article or an invincible article, but the roles of the supporting characters are not like an invincible article, but a bit like a group portrait. For example, if the protagonist's combat power has grown like this, it feels like he is heading towards invincibility. Then why do so many characters need to join the team? It feels like there is no improvement in combat power. They are all used to cooperate with the protagonist's training. I understand that the author wants to use this method to enrich the plot, and at the same time prevent the protagonist from upgrading too quickly, but the writing power may be lacking. Of course, maybe I didn't calm down and was a little impetuous. It may also be that I haven't read enough. I have read about dozens of chapters after it was released, and I can't remember them clearly. I still feel good. I hope the author will write better and better.

If you write this down, you will definitely achieve something. This book is a novel and creative novel that I have rarely seen in the past six months, and it deserves recognition. The setting feels like a dream come true, you can roam freely in your own fantasy world, and the fantasy can also be reflected in reality. I would like to call it - ultra-realistic play house. Anyway, come on.

It has the same effect as the time travel of bear, wolf and dog.

It's really wonderful.

After reading the introduction, most normal people would think that the protagonist's ability should be a unique existence in the modern world without demons. Well, it turns out that there are systems related to extraordinary beings, so the protagonist's ability is considered p. 🤭 Especially according to the setting that the author himself has not figured out, the protagonist's delusion can only affect himself. That's it? Strategy? Do you deserve it?

It's too poisonous. The official organization is taboo for all fantasy web articles.

The heroine is really disgusting. Holy shit, it's still possible to write novels with such a disgusting heroine.

The opening creative idea is really interesting, but the subsequent plot is too petty, focusing on the protagonist without expanding the world view. The focus is on mental illness, rather than combat, superpowers, and confrontation. I feel obviously bored after seeing dozens of pictures. Give it 3 points, and wish the author a big hit with his next book.

The supporting characters in this book are too intellectual, and the researchers don't even have the IQ of normal people. When the facts are in front of you, you still call it crazy, and you don't have the spirit of scientific exploration at all.

It's really useless. There are only 50 or so chapters that revolve around a few women. As expected, the writing skills are so bad that I can only skim the plot.

If you have such ability, why not engage in science and technology and learn martial arts? ! Open high and go low, bad reviews!

It looked a bit frustrating, and I convinced myself to rationalize a lot of the plot, but I couldn't stand the fact that the protagonist was a psychopath in the eyes of others, and he was like a disaster star that was disliked by others, especially the protagonist who had no temper at all and kept showing kindness to the people around him. Even though the protagonist was like this, he still suffered a lot of unprovoked malice. It really felt so frustrating What is the meaning of the author setting this environment? I don't know. Based on my experience in reading, this book may be written in two main ways. One is to quickly determine the importance of the protagonist's ability in the early stage, quickly transition into this environment, and then be taken seriously. After all, the protagonist has a strong impression of the official. The other is that the protagonist will be taken seriously, but the attention will gradually increase. That is, the plot of the beginning is basically repeated, with small changes, but the tone remains the same. I haven't read the rest of the plot, or even the chapter titles. If it's the first scenario, I might feel a pity, but it's a pity that I ran away earlier; if it's the second scenario, I feel lucky, but I'm glad that I ran away earlier; if it's another way of writing, there's nothing I can do about it. When I read a book, I'll be embarrassed to read a novel with a wonderful plot but with minor problems, but I won't be embarrassed to read a novel with a wronged protagonist but other problems!

If all the descriptions of Bai Xiuchu's beauty, beauty, and inexplicable ambiguity with the protagonist were deleted, then this book would be a good book. These descriptions are oily, disgusting, and too disturbing. I can't think of any reason for their existence. They have been mentioned countless times in just four chapters. What's the use?

Martial arts is a shitty strategy. Not to mention super brains and the like that can't be written. At the very least, you have to cultivate immortality to be considered a strategic level. Martial arts is useless in sewers. If you practice it for a hundred years, will you live forever or be able to carry a rocket launcher?

There are too many words, too watery. Every time a new character appeared, he kept questioning the protagonist. No matter how much others tried to persuade him, he kept questioning and denying. Then everyone had to say a few words, and it was just one chapter. As a result, the plot was not moved. It took two or three chapters to write just one story about going up the stairs. Everyone's perspective was written once, and the dialogue was repeated twice. It's just an ordinary little thing, but the author has to take it apart and pour a lot of water into it. Sometimes after reading a few chapters, I feel like I haven't seen anything. The plot is dragging, only various polishes and a lot of water. To sum it up: the setting is pretty good, but that's all. As I read, my enthusiasm was overwhelmed by the flood😞

Looking at the introduction, the protagonist's tool-man attributes are too strong. The success of his fantasy depends on some supporting facilities, so what he wants to fantasy is determined by his "assistant team" and the team's superiors.

And this heroine is really useless. Why did you write it? If you don't think about a woman in your mind, you won't be able to live.

The first few chapters made me feel a little nauseous, so I spat before leaving.

The biggest advantage is that the creative mind is very good. The biggest flaw is that the villain is too weak and unrealistic, making the whole book feel like a few people playing house with the protagonist.

It's so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore. After seven years in the institute, no one can understand it. You've been here for less than a month and you've figured it out. Everyone in the institute is Ruozhi, right? Especially when she doesn't use any special methods. Also, every time the heroine and his friends find the right direction, the people next to them say they are crazy again. Crazy, you scolded the next door, and described how beautiful the heroine was. The driver said you look like Liu Yifan? Tell me, other male colleagues are envious of the way the heroine eats for the hero and crushes the food with her hands and puts it in her mouth. At that time, they also needed to know that the statue of the fairy sister required standards. The person in charge directly sent the heroine's photo to the factory production staff and told them to do it. First, did you obtain the heroine's authorization? Secondly, was there any problem with you directly using the photo from the experimenter? Will it irritate the male protagonist?

You can make do with it in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, you just keep bastardizing, and it's annoying to watch the constant trust and distrust. It's all bullshit, and you don't even bother to complain about it. There's no logic at all.

I think it's well written, although it's ugly. I don't know why you are so angry and scold the author. Is it because his writing is worse than shit?

The official complained about the low pay and the lack of personnel. Then they said that the heroes of non-governmental organizations are very comfortable. Is this to highlight the great dedication of official heroes? Then they frantically test the protagonist who has a good impression of the official. Let's just say, does the official want a new hero?

The idea is very good, but the writing is so intelligent that I directly doubt that the protagonist is the only normal person in the world, right? The truth has been deceived countless times. The official still insists that the main character is mentally ill. Your mental illness can turn fake into real. Why do you support me?

Came from Xiaohuang😁😁

Why do I feel like my hot face is pressing hard against someone else's cold ass?