Mecha and Knife

1 Limit, free to finish, looks good. Some of the first chapters make people's noses sore. They are carefully crafted and better than ordinary short-term writing. I personally like this kind of lyricism that can be tasted briefly without making people cry. It is eye-catching now that most novels start with driving to attract readers. For the old man being the protagonist, I don't think the audience will be narrow. 2 After joining the army, I started to push forward. It was a lot of fun. However, there is too little room for readers to relax in the middle. Looking at the author's previous works, this is a legacy of the previous unlimited flow, and the transformation has not been completed. Infinite Streaming is not a unit drama that does not need to be soothing, one after another. But for this book, I hope the author can write some small events that connect the cool points. 3 classic heroine questions. I personally have no feelings for it, but there are always people who want to see female protagonists with female supporting roles. If you want to add a heroine plot, I suggest the author put the heroine in the memory, so that readers will not find it too toxic, and it can leave room for whether the heroine will appear in the future, and gain more traffic. (It is also convenient for water, which can solve the problems of 2 and 4) 4 The problem of the sense of substitution of the protagonist. Authors, don't worry, there is a market for Laotou's articles. It's just that I couldn't read the difference between the old man and the young protagonist in this book, and the "old" characteristics were not written out. How can I put it, the protagonist has lost his blood, but he does not feel that he is getting stronger and stronger, and he lacks a sense of three-dimensionality. I also hope that you will write some specific tragic stories about how others sacrificed their families, so that the protagonist can sublimate his thoughts from the individual to the country. 5 Now that the hostile forces are a bit weak, can you install B to show their technological advantages? Either bring in a new villain, the current boss is not powerful or oppressive. Or change the map now, otherwise the plot will become dull and difficult to last. 6 It doesn't matter if it's not finished, even a great person like Cui Zui will think it's not finished

It's very interesting, and the quality of the article is low-key. It's really expensive to get married recently, so I can only post a good review here. Come on.

I gave you 6 monthly passes, all for ordering the book. Why is there no character like Xingyue? This is not a beaver.

It's very interesting. I finished it before I knew it. Author, you are not allowed to update 20,000 words a day? Highly recommended!

Not bad😊beautiful! ! There are just too few updates! Come on! ! ! 👍👍👍

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This idea itself goes against the laws of nature and is a negative innovation. Add the themes of revenge and war to create a triple negative. Because the protagonist is older, revenge, plunder, victory, glory, beauty, etc. Can no longer be enjoyed according to the normal laws of nature, so this is a hopeless story. This idea is so anti-human and has reached the point of ignoring the plot and content. If the protagonist is rejuvenated, it will be like selling sheep over dogs. But I originally came here for dog meat, but I didn't expect that the author actually sells mutton. At least there is no turning point until today's chapter. So I will keep track of the book and follow up. I don't plan to read the book. Reality is already so difficult. We have to deal with life, old age, illness and death. Reading online articles is just to escape for a short time. Then you gave me a reminder? Good guy! Since the author has chosen this path of confronting the laws of nature, he should write with Yang Bailao's mentality. Don't complain about poor grades, because the income will definitely disappoint you. Of course, there is no shame in cutting your losses when you can't go any further.

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I don't know how to write about war at all. Real war is cruel. Don't think that the people around you will not sacrifice. Do you think it is child's play? Sometimes as long as you are soft-hearted, the war will fail, and the sacrifices of countless people will be wasted. I suggest the author to read the Liaoshen Campaign. Lin said in it, don't sacrifice numbers, just Tashan. War is very cruel, and those in charge of the army can never be emotional.

Yanzu, did you come in to read book reviews again? I must have caught you. Come to the comment area after reading this book. Believe me, this book is really worth reading (serious face)

The Hateful Old Man

Sensationalism is not a problem, but sensationalism for the sake of sensationalism, or even forced sensationalism, I can only say that the author is more suitable for writing reading romance novels and mechas, haha

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It's amazing in the early stage, but it loses its stamina in the mid-term On the one hand, it's too sensational. It's okay to do this kind of thing once or twice. It's quite moving in the past. You'll have to do it again from time to time. No matter how strong the empathy ability is, people can't stand it and will feel embarrassed Secondly, Guwu mecha, I only saw mecha in the first 300 chapters. Guwu's role is to use it to activate the mecha better. But the character of the protagonist Guwu master you set up in the front will be written later. I'm really not that good at it. Although I can physically attack the mecha, I'm not that good at it. I can't stand up or down and get stuck. The anticipation of pulling it up has completely disappeared. I've played more than two hundred chapters of mecha, and suddenly an alien power was created. The protagonist's mecha is almost unparalleled. I also created a empathy system to forcibly increase the strength of the minions. It's exciting but not that exciting, and sadistic but not that sad. I can't stand it after reading Chapter 291. I hope the author can learn from it next time he writes a book.

A science fiction novel I read twenty years ago, Legend of the Little Soldier In interstellar warfare, there are many turret cults, gang-hopping tactics, old things like giant ships and cannons, interstellar fortresses, and black hole missiles There are also drone carriers, matrix control, loyal wingmen, and artificial intelligence mechas, which will be the core technologies of the military 20 years later There are also artificial intelligence social services that respect primitive people and robots, equal rights for all races, a high welfare system, and war requires the cooperation of multiple systems and multiple arms Twenty years later, I read science fiction novels, driving mechas and using technologies that are now gradually being phased out, and fighting without guns or artillery, no reconnaissance, no cooperation with friendly forces, and no military regulations and disciplines

I took advantage of this time limit to read most of it, and the writing is quite good. Although the rhythm is a bit confusing, the climax is not very clear because there is no foreshadowing, and the character of the protagonist, an old man, is not very likable, but with the author's writing style and ideas, it can be regarded as far above the standard. It has a bit of a Jianke feel, but it is still a bit immature compared to the author. My evaluation is that compared with the author's previous infinite streams, writing about mechas has great potential, and the future is promising ps: I haven't seen such a good mecha text for a long time after Jianke, and even the trilogy of skeletons is not as good. It's rare to see the hope of top-notch mecha writing from the author. Once the mecha writing is written, there is a chance of becoming a god. Don't change the style if this book blows up. Come on.

Gathering and dispersing across the Ganges and across the sea, Soaring dragons dance across the sky. Nine stars are destroyed with many steps, (chong twice) Double bombs sink the dust. The wild wind and sand are roaring, Thousands of stars have been fixed in the dust. Waiting for him to share his merits, to see him off in the stars.

Properly operated, the secret of "deqi" mastered by Ji Xinghe can completely become the fuse that detonates civil strife in the empire: one day in the future, when the life and death of an important position is at stake, "I am the wall-facer Ji Xinghe, and I want to speak to the civilization of the Planet of the Apes! I want to speak to the emperor of the empire!" "(Certain conditions), otherwise I will broadcast to the entire Planet of the Apes. Broadcast the biggest secret of the imperial family! " When this magical power is no longer monopolized by the ruler, when immortality no longer requires the family to be servile to certain people for generations, when the gap between the strength and resources of the two sides is no longer so huge, when the mountains that have been weighing on their heads for thousands of years are no longer so heavy, when the position above ten thousand people is no longer out of reach! Will the ruled class stand up and shout, "Does the prince and general Xiang Ning have the guts?" "The tide has turned, you can sit in this position, and I can sit in this position. And you have been sitting on the ground for too long, now you should and must move your butt - my emperor 'must get down'!" It's just a temporary idea, just think about it. The author also has a complete outline and will not change it casually. It's just a chat in the book review section while everyone waits for the update. To do this and after doing so, it is undoubtedly necessary to make careful arrangements to deal with the endless troubles. It is not an exaggeration to say that the northwest of Shanxi will be a mess. The idea is just to make a killing move in times of crisis, in order to win the glimmer of hope among millions of impossibilities - to one day completely end this endless war and usher in a peaceful life that cannot be exchanged for a lot of money. In this day and age, tomorrow. Some superficial opinions and a few nonsense words. All book friends are welcome to discuss with each other and have friendly exchanges.

Xinxin The biggest failure. This book, I dare say that at least half of the people who abandoned it were because of this Xinxin. A 6-year-old child, do you write that she is sensible? Why? Why do you think so? Since she is only 6 years old, she still doesn't necessarily understand the meaning of the word "why"? Given that she is only 6 years old, she is so frail and sick that she doesn't even have a normal growing environment? Since she was raised by a single mother, she can't be considered an adult. Or is there someone at the base who takes care of her and teaches her the principles of life? And does she understand? Now you tell me why? As a child, I suggest you read the first chapter of the book "I". The same is true for people who are not age-appropriate. Look at what other people write and how you write. To be honest, when I encounter chapters where she makes sense, I always skip over them so as not to affect my reading. Whole chapter jumps. Otherwise there will be drama. Are you wondering what will happen if there is a drama? Abandon the book.

Well written, you captured the flow of emotions, but mecha novels shouldn't be like this. It's about blood and romance, stars and cannons. Although you have captured the reader emotionally, the mechas have not. In the interstellar era, close combat is only used when it is unavoidable. The battle is usually over at medium and long distances. The protagonist uses a knife. No matter what you write, it is always against the law. After all, this is a science fiction mecha novel, not fantasy. It is impossible for a sword to be tens of thousands of miles away and to destroy a planet with a sword.

Original lyrics written by fans of Jiqi's "Mecha and Knife" Lyrics: Shangguan Tianbing Lyrics: Light, star, thoughts, four directions Who is wandering Inverted silver gun Light, glow, heart Hometown The blood is boiling The beating heart The longing between my fingers, the road ahead is vast My heart has a direction Unstoppable The mecha general wields the blade madly God punished the half-immortal and became famous The battlefield is divided into checkerboards The sharp eyes Cold light in the hands Flags on alien planets fluttering in the wind Under the dust storm, mountains are cut like heavenly pillars The expectations of comrades in the Galaxy Regiment Armor is covered with golden light and clothes are decorated with medals "People should not speculate about God" Peace, sleep, and danger. Summon the spirit It is difficult to calm down How can I settle down here Return to zero reaction Clarity Wake up from a dream No longer longing Master the fate of innovation Reminiscing at night Tears from the corner of the eye Opportunity to become a god The pattern is restarted Sharp words in the sky With a nuclear explosion there is no doubt about life and death The center of anger surges Stick to this sharpness Invincible Whose sighs on the bed Bringing the morning light under the top of the tower The fame of martyrs in Venus Shen Jian Snow Halberd Here is Wuji "I am God" Myth interpretation of new gods The red star shines brightly and independently How can there be invincibility The truth that breaks the limit Three hundred stars are invincible People can reach it The sky is full of heroic spirits gathering and scattering How could it be meaningless That is a destined miracle "In the name of the galaxy, we can win no battle (Ji)" "In the name of the galaxy, we can win no battle! (Qi)"

First of all, the writing is okay, but in fact, you shouldn't add too many sensational plots. Everyone reads novels to feel comfortable, to be happy, and to see a different world through novels. The occasional provocative clip is the essence, but if you frequently include a provocative clip, it will lower people's emotional threshold. These are the dross. Just like the movie "Passing Through Your World". All the plots in the early stage are to set off the final sensational episode. This makes the overall plot of the movie very good. And yours is like an idol drama. The heroine is hit by a motorcycle, and then all her friends pray for her, and then they set it to sad music. Then the heroine recovered. A few days later, the heroine was hit by a car again, and it was the same story again. The heroine was hit by a tractor again, and then again. As the audience watches, they will wonder what kind of car will the heroine get hit by next time? Throughout your book, you describe how difficult it is to be an old man, how painful, how tiring, and how difficult it is. You completely put the protagonist in a vulnerable group and then have his friends sympathize with him, take care of him, etc. Even if he has physical fitness, kung fu, etc. That surpass those of young people. This leaves book lovers with no sense of immersion at all.

The ending is forced to feed shit, so stupid

I didn't expect the book to be so good when I opened it at random. I was hooked after reading the first three chapters. The author writes well and the character of Lao Ji is very charming. How can it be repaired! Why isn't it the final article? Although I have only read a few chapters, the negative buff of reading one less chapter has been hanging over me! I hate you oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow ( (woww), author, come on! Go, go, go!

This is a long story about the rise of the apes and the mecha war between humans and humans. Changing a movie like this is also a talent. I originally skipped watching to see if there would be interstellar development or intensive imagination development in the future, but I found out that the captured human being was the son of the protagonist. This is really poisonous and a big mistake. It is far better to die directly!

The setting is amazing, and there are many wonderful things to discover if you look closely. Following up to Chapter 101, although there are some hard and sensational parts that look a little awkward, and some sentence patterns are repeated many times, which is a bit inexplicable. But with good books and good stories, 12 double monthly passes are given.

I don't have much money, and I can't provide much strong support, but what I can do is order it all, write your book well, and I will silently support you.

I was banned from the whole site for a week just for saying three numbers😭😭😭

I read more than a hundred chapters during the limited exemption period, and now I have fully subscribed. This work is worth it. By the way, author, you are so handsome!

This is a good book that has been buried. I saw someone recommend it once before, but I stopped reading it when I saw the main character was 65 years old. I thought it was just a short article. I didn't expect it to be so popular. It made me cry several times even after reading a few chapters.