The Secret-Seeker Lurking in Konoha

The second author set up a Hyuga family secret technique "Blood Wine" Spending a Byakugan and the blood of some Otsutsuki descendants to get one cup (the protagonist can optimize it into three cups), which will absorb the pupil power of the separated family through the caged bird Each cup can create a pair of Mangekyo Sharingan. According to the book, there are five lineage clans. According to two people per line, it is 20 cups. This does not include the possibility of preserving the Byakugan of previous generations People who are not from the Hyuga family take five. Mortality rate 20 cups, half mortality rate, that is to say, if the Hyuga family is drained, ten pairs of kaleidoscopes can be made And now the protagonist has exposed this secret technique, and there are Hyuga branch families, Uchiha people on the scene People from the Fugaku and Uchiha clans, and people from the Senju clan There was also an example of the Hyuga branch opening a kaleidoscope The protagonist made three cups, the branch grabbed one and drank one, and the remaining two cups were in the hands of Uchiha. This...

The author sincerely recommends that you revise these two paragraphs. What do you say? It feels very funny. The branch guy has tied up the clan with other families in Konoha, one Uchiha and one Senju. This is forcing the branch family to death. Brother, can your protagonist represent the clan as a whole? Let's just say, this happened. First, Hinata must have shrunk the tribe, resulting in fewer Hyuga ninjas on the battlefield. Second, the suppression and confinement of the branch family, restriction and exclusion prevention, and third, it gave the branch family and Konoha how to deal with Hinata. As soon as the fourth chapter of the Golden Three Chapters passed, thunder exploded, and Uchiha Shisui came to snatch him. What is his identity? There is another Senju in the Uchiha family, how about you? Hinata, is it because they should or can participate in helping the branch family to kidnap the clan family? Also, he rushed out right after the secret technique was finished and didn't even have time to get three bottles of potion. So they ambush there, and what family does Shisui belong to? Uchiha, so did he copy? Bet on his character? Isn't this a joke?

After reading three chapters, I was speechless, but the secret spy exposed himself in front of everyone. The settings were flying, and he said everything with his big mouth. He performed a secret spy ritual to create a secondary blood wine to improve himself. He was actually raped. Then everyone knew that something made of pig's feet can make Hinata and Uchiha open kaleidoscope. It is extremely poisonous! …I can't stand it, block me again

If you write fan fiction without reading the original work, you are really talented!

It's rare to see the Extraordinary Goldfinger in Lord of Mysteries, so don't be a eunuch.

The plot is okay, but it's basically an unlikable and funny protagonist who keeps licking Naruto, with black written in white. The cheating protagonist can't defeat the so-called Itachi? There has never been a plan, just like a dog in the upper echelon of Hokage, the family cannot rely on it at all. Normal people have enough scientific research and can rely on the most loyal force, their own family, and the setting of this book is still the main Hyuga lineage. Obviously, he has the ability to open the reincarnation eyes for all his so-called clan elders...

Persuading you to quit at the beginning, drinking with your mother

I don't understand. People who peep into secrets shouldn't have fun hiding themselves. The more things you know, the more dangerous you are, especially if you put yourself in the sun or let the crowd focus on you.

It is best for the author to give each chapter a chapter name, otherwise many people will not read it at all.

No, you were just a rookie at the beginning, but you directly wrote about Otsutsuki in the required materials, and also directly exposed information about the Otsutsuki blood family? Is the protagonist really not afraid that Hei Ze will come to your door tomorrow?