Lu Bu's Journey to the Heavens

When it comes to the biggest problem for one person, it is already obvious. How does this look like Lu Bu? Pretending to be a coward in front of Zayu, being beaten by a master and then learning skills from a master, this plot has been repeated twice. His performance has failed to convince me and most readers that this is not an ordinary high school student but Lu Bu. The two biggest parts of Lu Bu's literary image in modern times are nothing more than repetition and martial arts. Repetition is the most difficult to write, and it is a label suitable for a buffoon. As for Wu Yong, the scenes you wrote only reflected half of it, and then the excitement faded, and now I actually see that "Lu Bu only knows how to rush on the battlefield, and he is technically not as good as Putty." If one person removes system enhancement, he is technically not as good as the masters in the dungeon. What difference does it make if I go to this scene and you go? What special interaction does this scene have with Lu Bu? I don't know what is the charm of one person, so many people couldn't help but sacrifice their own protagonists to gild the original characters when writing this copy. However, the selling point is something that the author must keep in mind, and it is a structure that must be handled well in the design stage.

Your writing, Lu Bu, is really bad. You might as well say that the time traveler became Lu Bu, then Lu Bu, and then he was selected by the system.

Because the thinking is different, there is no sense of substitution. And if you travel to the past, will you let him know the plot? If you don't let him know the plot, he will be like an out-of-place native. If you let him know the plot, it would be better to just write about dog netizens. After all, dog netizens have learned a lot of miscellaneous chores.

I feel that Lu Bu's writing is not domineering at all.

The character is ooc, this is not Lu Bu at all

I just like to watch people traveling back in time from modern times. People from ancient times don't have a sense of immersion when they travel back in time.

The protagonist written by the author is either the self that the author longs for in his heart, or it is the projection of the author's own character background. How can you write Lu Bu like this... Brother, even if it is imagination and fiction, you can't find the slightest bit of domineering in your heart.

The logic in Chapter 1 is wrong. When a person like Lu Bu sees the future, he will only change the future in his own favor. How could he possibly say such things as Kuang Fu Han's house? He is a brave man who is greedy for money and lustful. He does great things at the cost of his own life. His adoptive father is stabbing his adoptive father in the back. There is no problem with this path. Yes, when he stabbed Dong Zhuo to death, the whole world praised him. At this time, his reputation was considered to be the peak of his life. The follow-up was nothing more than killing Cao Cao when he was a warlord, or imitating Sima Yi and surrendering to Cao Cao and finally seizing his body. What you write about Lu Bu is not like Lu Bu at all, and he even participated in the ghost killing. Shouldn't he join immediately? I think it doesn't matter to the generals of the Three Kingdoms. Didn't Cao Cao just massacre the city and make people into military rations? Lu Bu would be a messenger of justice. It's funny to think about it. Anyone who messes with someone like Lu Bu, either as a boss or as a colleague, will not end well. Ding Yuan and Dong Zhuo are dead. , Chen Gong was pissed to death, and the soldiers who followed Lu Bu didn't have a good life for a few days. If you want to write about this kind of subject, you should use Xiang Yu. The protagonist chooses a villain who is greedy for money, lustful, and repeatedly stabbed in the back. You said he went to the Demon Slayer World, but he actually went to the Demon Slayer Corps. Bu Piaoling has not met the Ming Lord for half his life. Now that he meets the Ghost Lord, if the Lord does not give up, he is willing to be his adoptive father. This is only right.

You don't need to read it, just look at the introduction and you will know that this is a hit.

Have you ever been Lu Bu and you can write about it? Even if you haven't thought about it, wouldn't you know how to watch Romance of the Three Kingdoms? Does it look like what you wrote?

This is a pure newcomer. I am too tired to read it in sections. The ideas are okay, but the writing style is immature. Anyway, I can write

He feels like an ordinary person, not like Lu Bu at all

I couldn't stand it any longer. After looking at a few pictures, he didn't look like Lu Bu at all. Why did he want to directly persuade others to surrender? Why couldn't he understand that the opponent was clearly stronger than him and still dared to resist? It just portrays Lu Bu as a cowardly person who is greedy for life and afraid of death. It doesn't feel like Lu Bu, but rather like an incompetent, useless, greedy and fearful bastard who is greedy for life and death, and forgets all righteousness and self-interest based on the author's own image.

Because there is no sense of substitution. The people who read the novel are modern people, and the people who give you money are also modern people. They are house slaves with three surnames, a loser, a loser who was hanged in Baimen Tower, and an alcoholic. Who would have a sense of substitution?

Isn't Lu Bu just a villain who is greedy for money and lustful, but also talented in martial arts? If you get a chance, you will have a foster father and you will be promoted without hesitation. You will accept all the gifts and beautiful women without hesitation. If you have the opportunity to backstab your foster father, you will be promoted at night without hesitation. The Lu Bu you imagined is actually modeled after Xiang Yu. Lu Bu is the garbage boss in life who is greedy for money and lustful, and will make you take the blame for something. The only difference is that this garbage boss also has a hobby, which is fitness.

The best writer on this subject is Saba Miyamoto Musashi, but it's a pity that

I don't understand the latest chapters. What does it mean? The Japanese are competing for hegemony in the Central Plains and are the saviors?

Take a look at Lu Bu in the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms

I don't understand. I won't watch.

I have read a few books about Lu Bu's time travel. Are there any about Xiang Yu's time travel?

When looking for an ancient person to time travel, you have to find someone with good brains. For Lu Bu, let him wear it. Does he know how to wear it? If you don't ask Zhuge Liang, you can even ask Uncle Liu Huang.

Lu Bu will find a big boss in the first step. When the secretary understands the current situation in Japan. Then the boss will take over.