Jockey Girl: Cinderella Club

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The writing, plot, and supporting characters of this book are all very good, but at its core it fails to capture the excitement of a novel biography. In the chapter where Tamamo Hyogo loses the Triple Crown, I knew this book was going to die. It's not that the protagonist cannot be defeated, it can be passed over in one stroke. Who can bear it after so long of preparations for Tamamo to fail? Is life too sweet? I've been feeling aggrieved for a long time, and I'm even more aggrieved now that I'm unhappy with the ending. Not to mention the medium of online writing, even if I publish it as a compilation album, I'm going to die in a ditch. I didn't read the later part. The author's style is just like this. It's likely that the problem of Wenqing will recur in the later part. The problem of Tamamo + Oguri Hat + Inawaichi has been a famous horse of the same period from the beginning. At the beginning, I was still imagining how the author would deal with it. No hope at all now. As an official, CY cannot drastically change history, but at the same time, it has to resurrect Suzuka and let Condor and Spei-chan tie for first place. Fans are more timid than the official, so they give in. Just imagine, after taking the first defeat for a chapter or two, putting the group portrait scene after the first defeat, and then letting Tamamo win, wouldn't the group portrait and the coolness stand up? Will Dou Po break off the engagement and withdraw from Chapter 20? Give it to Goldfinger immediately after returning it. Everyone is complaining and trying to save people. Isn't that the feeling of being depressed? Zhetian said at the beginning that the holy body is a waste body, will the protagonist be bullied for ten chapters? No, let's have fun first, and it'll be useless later. The current protagonist is invincible at the same level, and he will solve his flaws through adventure later.

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I've finished reading the Tamamo Cross chapter, so that's it. Reading an article on the Internet, I have to commit literary youth disease, and I have to let Tamamo Cross leave the club. I laugh to death. If you are a literary youth, please go to some traditional literature instead of writing online novels. After reading so many chapters, the writing is okay and the emotions are described delicately, but the final ending has to be a mess, which is disgusting.

I seem to have seen Gojo Satoru, spending so many words writing about Tamamo, and then Hayate won Tamamo but couldn't win, and the plug-in was useless, and finally left. I felt like a chicken feather when Tamamo left, and it was so unpleasant. If I wanted to write about bitterness, I could write about Urala. The protagonist's plug-in was turned into krypton life, and Urala broke her leg when she ran away.

I completely don't understand why I wrote about a gangster. There are obviously a hundred plots that could improve the logic, but I chose the most disgusting one. The impression of this paragraph is really bad. Is this trying to purify readers?

I can accept a typical self-pleasure essay. It doesn't matter if it's not good at the beginning. But they forcibly restrict the protagonist, and they are not allowed to win the Triple Crown. The first one is understandable. There is so much foreshadowing, and it is necessary to break the limit or something. But why not let me take it the second time? Because the supporting roles have to be forcibly prepared. The well-known racehorse girls from the central government who specialize in running on dirt fields can't break the momentum, so there are two of them randomly popping up in your place, right? The preparations are so extensive that they forcefully suppress Tamamo and prevent her from winning the championship, right? In the game, Tamamo was always in the lead, and then the final momentum limited the speed of the Silent Hayate, and then the Silent Hayate broke through. The distance that had been opened during this period of time was closed by the Silent Hayate in two or three seconds? What is the true identity of such an awesome horse racing girl? You might as well just call Silent Suzuka. I can still understand the huge gap. You said that Tamamo's body has not grown and her strength has not reached its peak. Then what did you write for the first scene? There was so much foreshadowing that the first game pushed the limits, but it's understandable that he didn't win first place. After all, the plot needs foreshadowing. Why not let Tamamo win the second game of the Triple Crown? Just to compliment your supporting role? The appearance of Hershey's dream is even more inexplicable. It suddenly appears, something I haven't written about before, and the Triple Crown suddenly appears. I can only say that it is a typical self-pleasure article. If you like horse racing girls, I don't recommend reading it. It is completely illogical. Write wherever you want for your own pleasure.

In the end, it was still the eunuch. After all, you were good at one and then abused. We no longer want to see the victory later. Because it's useless

I'm unhappy, very unhappy. Even with cheats, I can be tortured like this. I want to see changes, instead of constantly losing, losing, and being tortured. I often describe several tama cheating and the process of blowing my ass off, thinking I'm going to win, but the result is still losing, losing, losing.

Tamamo Cross

Advantages: The novel worldview structure breaks away from the traditional Jockey Girl worldview and cleverly combines real history with Jockey Girls. It is not so much a Jockey Girl fanfic as it is the personification of the horse racing girls in real history. The emotional description of the characters is very delicate Disadvantages: The quality drops off a cliff after Chapter 110, and the logic jumps further and further, the connection between chapters is very weak, the logic of character behavior collapses, and there are a lot of plots that are dense and disgusting for readers. It is not recommended for people with mental mysophobia (for people like n tr sensitive) ordinary people watching It is inferred that the author was severely stimulated, and among all the means to advance the plot, he chose the most destructive writing method Due to the dense poisonous spots, Shennong died Watch with caution after Chapter 110! ! !

The result is still losing, losing, losing even in the derby, leaving the protagonist and the Tamamo family ruined. Now only the deus ex machina can allow the protagonist to enter the center.

He went through many disgusting twists and turns just to get his horse racing girl to leave him. In the end, there was a plot to kill, which was absolutely amazing.

It's so funny, I wrote this author's plot synopsis in the comment section a month ago, and sure enough, this way of writing, and a new chapter, were not unexpected at all. What is this? Tamamo is about to have a classic year, and Oguri Hat is a two-year-old in 1986. I wonder if you go and look for Oguri Hat. At the beginning of 1987, Oguri Hat was a three-year-old new horse. Slow down and it depends on whether you can beat Kitahara. In reality, Oguri Hat cannot run on the classic front. It depends on whether the author will be stubborn this time.

If you don't have any special hobbies, you can leave after reading the free chapters. The summary of the subsequent plot is that the game is basically lost, and then the gangsters appear and the family is destroyed.

The plot moves too slowly, there are too many scenes with supporting characters, and there are too many love scenes. Some supporting characters' competitions take up a lot of chapters, and there is also a bloody drama in which the supporting characters, a rich man, secretly steals the heart of Ma Niang. The protagonist has no hang-ups and is often abused. You said you don't do it to make money, but you still charge for writing a summary at the end of the paper. If Tamamo had to go through history, the plots of the supporting characters would have been filled with better writing. It doesn't break out of the original historical framework, it just crams things into this framework.

Refer to the life of Tamamo Cross Shima and the foreshadowing of the previous author. The Tamamo family is based on the real ranch and has huge debts. At least it is completely useless to rely on Tamamo's current bonus and victory efficiency. The only way to save the Tamamo family and get a huge sum of money can only rely on Tamamo's signing fee and the transfer fee for the protagonist to transfer Tamamo. The Yuansheng Group, which has been paved the way for a long time in the previous article, has money but no heirs and connections, so it is the best buyer. It's just that the decision-maker is the eldest lady who puts interests first. She will agree for her brother's sake, but she must let Tamamo show her own value. The next game is the Hyogo Derby. Tamamo must win this game. If he doesn't win, his family will be destroyed. But winning means separation from the protagonist. This is also in line with the foreshadowing of the protagonist's dream at the end of the first part. Inari didn't know the situation in Tamamo's family, and regarded Tamamo who left as a traitor and wanted to clean up the house. In the middle, the author can shed light on Tamamo's pain and confusion, and the protagonist can comfort and resolve it. After that, as long as you control the money given by Yuansheng, you can control whether the protagonist goes to the central government. If the money is small, the protagonist has to pay the transfer fee to Tamamo to pay off the debt, so he can only stay in the place. If you give more money, you can go to the central government. No matter how much, you have to thank Yuansheng Group for providing help in times of need and saving Tamamo's family from disaster. As of this writing, unless the author lets the protagonist get a fortune from a mechanical deity, Tamamo will definitely leave. At most, Tamamo will retire and come back to run away. Poor protagonist Takeda, keep your hat on.

There's a twist, is this a winning streak starting early? Although it is not a cool article, everyone likes to read cool articles. Moreover, this is a horse girl story. This thing has a prototype. It is not just a random passerby who comes out and plays the high-end game 😒. If you join the team as a passerby and rely on the protagonist's training and plug-ins to get good results, isn't it extremely poisonous to just come and overpower the protagonist horse girl? 😒 And this is still a local competition. Horse racing girls are data flow or cool writing flow. If you are guilty of literary youth, you should change it. To keep up with the popularity of horse racing, you must find the right track. We want to win, win, win, not lose, lose, lose. I will put it on the bookshelf for another month and wait and see, and I will say goodbye to the literary youth. I won't read the book on the bottom of the sea when I am watching the literary youth 🤫

After harvesting Inari, I should go back and run for the Hyogo Triple Crown. Take a fan popularity poll and guess who the author will win. The maximum number of votes is six, and there is another one: the author is out of his mind and let the miscellaneous fish win the championship.

Can she remain competitive after the Tamamo Cross is taken away? Although I have mastered a bunch of skills first, I can't always rely on showing myself to the protagonist and beating the protagonist's horse to maintain my fighting spirit.

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