The Game Became Reality, and I Became an Immortal in the Real World

I understand, the people around me are all reincarnations of people related to the protagonist in the game...

The plot structure of this book is good, but there is too much nonsense. A book without a sense of rhythm will never be successful.

It is possible for ordinary people to become idiots, but it is impossible for those who are cultivators of immortality. Generally, idiots have cognitive problems. If there are cognitive problems with cultivating immortals, can they still cultivate immortality?

Luo Liba Suo's "Zhen Shui" has written a lot of irrelevant plots

It's a bit interesting, but this kind of book is afraid that the speed will be too high to stop the car, and the combat power will be directly reduced.

I read the Dharmakaya written in Chapter 322, the Supreme Purity and Many Treasures Heavenly Lord. If I remember correctly, they should be the Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun, Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun, and Taiqing Daode Tianzun. There may be the title of Duobao Tianzun, but Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun will not change. I hope the author can change it

There are too many sensational plots in the early stage. There is really no need to sensationalize this when taking an exam 😅

Before Chapter 160, Shanhaisi set up all kinds of high-ranking ones, the entire Yilong Group, mysterious, and one or two people from a bunch of people (about 100), carefully selected. 162 told me directly, "Taoist students from the Taoist Academy will not be able to graduate without joining Shanhaisi?" The selection of the national elite team will directly become the CET-4 and CET-6 exams? Imagine a national elite security team, the kind of giants. And now, as long as the Qingbei people have resumed diplomatic relations with the graduates (I am taking into account the setting of the "four majors" in the book), they have all done internships there? They are also issued standard weapons (parchments). This team may not be able to catch up with the standing army🙄, how can it be considered elite?

The protagonist is a program with infinite trial and error. If he dies, the parallel world line will die. Only by clearing the dungeon level can he continue. I am ready to abandon this book because the author's writing skills are limited. I don't have to think about it to know that the protagonist will try and make mistakes all the way to successfully pass the level. It is very boring to play dungeons to upgrade. It is mentioned that the first enemy you kill in each dungeon will give you experience. The second time you kill the enemy, there will be no experience. However, the protagonist can be resurrected infinitely in the dungeon, and you can also keep improving your skills until you kill the enemy. It is a very boring setting. If I was stuck with this bug, I would just activate a new skill and continue to use it after I have fully trained one skill. The protagonist system is like a multiverse resurrection machine, connecting to the upgrade of world activities thousands of years ago. It controls the person of thousands of years ago to go to the dungeon to get stuck in the dungeon and practice skill upgrades. It is so monotonous that it is unbearable. The protagonist's system contains various elements such as time, space, cause and effect, fate, reincarnation, etc. I don't know how the author can complete it. How did this system come about? Can you explain it after reading it?

The author becomes less and less careful as he goes on.