A Journey to the Heavens Starting from Cyberpunk

The author who wrote so well before, you have to do this to the death. Although this is a novel, why would you follow a girl to someone else's house if you have no purpose? I also saw things I shouldn't have seen. You said you just looked at it and brushed it off. Why did you blush and slap yourself? Who are you showing it to? I suggest you change it. If you don't change it, you will delete my comment. The reply told me that there would be an explanation later, and I read it. I roughly guessed that what you wanted to write was to prevent the butterfly effect in the plot from happening beyond the protagonist's control, so you came up with this strategy. Use a stealth device that can last for a day to follow a beautiful girl, and at a critical moment, a hero can come to save her. You can hug a beautiful woman, right? Is it true that you have this ability and you would use it to stalk the girl you like? Everyone has a love for beauty. If you like it, pursue it openly. Don't do this obscene thing, it's a moral issue (Also, I've saved it, you delete it and I'll post it again)

After reading the latest chapter, I don't know what the author wants to express. The protagonist is now close to semi-invincible, and there is no sense of involvement at all. Like the previous post, it's a little bit up-and-down. If you want to chase, just go for it. It's really funny to be trailing behind and blushing at the same time. You're already stalking others and you're still blushing like a chicken. Author, do you want to take a look at what you are writing?

I haven't read the book yet, but I know from the reviews that the author listens to advice and will really change things that are unreasonable (´O｀)

It is recommended that the author check more information when writing a book, otherwise it will be easy to make jokes if it does not match the game settings. Also, the author's writing is too literary and it feels wrong to read. To be precise, the main character is too pretentious. To be honest, it's not surprising that the main character is an ancestor. I just don't understand why the main character is so cowardly. It doesn't matter if you meet a coward who is more awesome than the protagonist, but all the cats and dogs are on your face? The protagonist plans to be a coward for the rest of his life?

I am slowly revising some unreasonable content I wrote starting from the first chapter. Forgive me. I want to write good stories.

Author, can you write about the movie version of Game of Life, One Punch Man.

Your updates are too unstable, right?

I hope it won't be like some books, which say that this world is written from the beginning to the end without changing the world.

Sorry, it is the first time for a newcomer to write a book. The more I write, the worse my previous writing becomes. It's being revised every day.