They Are All Cultivating Immortals, Why Did I Become a Demon?

I've seen the latest one, and it's really slow to pick up, but I don't really know the main line of the story or what the protagonist's ambition is. Want to change the world? The protagonist's moral character is not like this either. Seeking immortality, transcendence and personal greatness? Or complete the current small goal and avenge your parents?

Keep up the good work, I bet you are a late bloomer! !

Mood Regulator

Mei Yingzi

Any comments are welcome, accept them with an open mind.

Luo Xinmei

I have read more than a dozen chapters, and the creativity and writing are very good. A few suggestions: The protagonist is older, and the psychological and motivational purposes can be described more clearly and with a sense of immersion, so that readers can get closer to the world in the book (I personally prefer protagonists with a more lively heart); Some world background and settings should be revealed from time to time, and the reader's perspective should not be limited to this city and county, which can increase the novel's appeal and readers' expectations.

The writing style is really good. It doesn't feel like someone who writes online articles has a serious background in writing novels. Is the author a literature major?

How can I put it this way? It feels so ingenious after reading it.

After reading chapter 50, I really can't stand it anymore. There is no main plot and the writing is too ink-y.

I know why it feels a little messed up. That is, between one plot and another, it is best to have a reminder of the time or place, for example, three days later. . . Or three strokes a day, Cao's Restaurant.

After following the update, the writing is very detailed and a bit confusing.

Keep it up, this book is good and indeed innovative.

A little more, I think it's quite interesting

Maybe it would be better to change the name?

The story is good, but the plot is a bit slow