I Realized Immortality in the Great Zhou Dynasty

The protagonist's family is one of the four major families. However, it was killed by slaves and the whole group was wiped out. Only the protagonist is left. The slaves can be eighth-grade, and the casual cultivators can also be eighth-grade. The protagonist's family does not have a single grade, and there are only four major families. What's the point?

No logic. The housekeeper and son want to kill you. You have mastered poisonous skills. Instead of looking for an opportunity to poison two people, kill a horse to scare people. OMG. Elementary school students and upper grade students would not do this.

The pig's trotters at the beginning are very stupid. When others poison you, you point it out directly? What are you doing? If you have the ability, just kill him directly, but if you don't have the ability, what would happen if it were you? Zzah

There is no need to read it, because the author doesn't want to make money, he just wants to read it for himself

This poisoning method is really bad. If there is no shadow, isn't it a sure death? How far can a broken shadow go? A long-range one will kill you.

The protagonist's IQ is worrisome, and he becomes a brother of the opposite sex to someone he has only known for a day.

As proof, this book can be popular 🤓

I can see that your book has a slow pace.

It's a bit new, the writing is good, keep it up

If you write like this, there is something wrong with the setting. In the early stage, your state is easily poor. In the later stage, your cultivation level is high, so why is it so bad? Is it possible that you are going to have another one, where the gods and humans are in decline?