Dragons: Return of the Fire Thief

Actually, I am a little disappointed with you. The recommendation vote I gave you was at a higher level than when you updated. I hope that after joining, you can work hard and grow up quickly. At this level, it's not just about getting things done. You need to have the ability to think systematically. What is the value of what you do? Have you created barriers and formed core competitiveness? What is the difference between the novels you write and other teams within Qidian? Do your articles precipitate a set of reusable physical data and methodologies? Why do you come up with some and others can't write them? You need to have your own judgment, not just do what I say. In the future, put your thoughts into the ten chapters of the daily update. I hope to see your thoughts, not just the progress. Just a reminder, your output is a bit meager compared with authors at the same level. It's almost the end of the year, so work harder. Look at the person on our monthly voting list. Before he was banned from the list last year, he could have been playing in front of the keyboard for a whole year. Growth must be accompanied by pain. When you are in the most pain, you actually grow the fastest.

Can the author find someone to copy it, especially the Dragon Clan fanfic he is writing? It is obvious that many people have not read this book now. It is indeed not that exciting before entering school, but if the author obviously has good writing skills, then you should be patient when reading the Dragon Clan fanfic. There shouldn't be so few people. After all, I feel that the author can still eat half of Jiangnan in one meal.

I read more than a dozen chapters, and to be honest, I didn't understand what it was about. Each paragraph is very long and contains almost all kinds of descriptions, giving people a feeling that it is very watery and has little content to read. Jumping back one by one does not affect reading at all. If it weren't for Dragon Clan's lack of books to read, I wouldn't have read more than a dozen chapters without knowing why. After reading these chapters, I can only know. The protagonist's interpersonal relationships, the causes and consequences of the protagonist's entry into Kassel. The writing on interpersonal relationships is also quite fascinating. Can't see clearly. Hope there will be improvement in the future.

As long as you write about a few female protagonists, you won't be able to hype the female protagonists who are fighting for the party, the popularity will only be a little bit

😠 I don't quite understand it. I feel a bit young. The bandit wiped Anat's chest. Is it appropriate to write it in this way? It also has a bit of a scar literature flavor

The protagonist is not Lu Mingfei. The protagonist is not invincible and will occasionally be stupid. Some chapters will be very frustrating to read. Brothers who mind can withdraw.

I feel that when writing fan fiction, you should write in your own style and blindly imitate Jiangnan's writing style. This may attract people in the first batch, but in the later stage they will realize what I read. Also, I wonder if there are people like me who have no feelings for Eri Uesugi. I really don't understand why so many people like her. Being a fool is against the law.

The writing is indeed very good. The author said that my sister will only be a family member, which caused my pseudo-science fiction fantasy to be shattered. The only fly in the ointment is that some of the descriptions of the sister are very similar to the feeling of a couple, which made me feel very strange when I saw the sister. By the way, the sister is also very good 😭

In fact, judging from the author's writing skills and skills, it shouldn't be in this tepid state, or to put it more bluntly, in a state of neither death nor life. However, the author's writing is too "heavy", which is more suitable for physical books in the paper media era, but it is a shortcoming for online articles. It's hard to tell whether this is the reader's misfortune or the author's misfortune...

The protagonist is not Ming Fei, and the sense of immersion is not strong

Wenqing is seriously ill and his words are meaningless and empty.

At first, I read this book mainly because of the character Xia Mi. My favorite among the Dragon Clan is Xia Mi. I am not a traditional Chu Xia fan. After all, I am reading a fan novel. As long as Xia Mi is the heroine, it will be fine. After reading so many dragon fics, this one is the most amazing to me, because the character of Xia Mi he portrays is very close to the image of the original work. Maybe Xia Mi is a bit love-minded, but Yakamundo has the dignity of a dragon king, which is like a schizophrenia. She has humanity and dragon nature, but Xia Mi is Jiamunde, and Yakamundo is also Xia Mi. In many dragon fandoms, Xia Mi doesn't look like her, but looks like a female version of Fingel. She is a body of contradictions, and I'm glad to see this in this book.

If Jiang Nan started writing Dragon Race 20 years later, I think the Bugatti, Bentley, Ferrari, and Maserati in the original work would have become cars like Pagani and Koenigsegg.

I have finished reading 640,000 words, the plot is quite good, there are many original plots, and the author's writing style is also relatively delicate. There are also a lot of secondary designs, but personally I think they are all acceptable as long as they are not too ridiculous. The author likes to be the Riddler, and I personally don't dislike it. After all, being the Riddler is a major feature of the Dragon Clan. If the plot of this chapter mentions the foreshadowing I wrote before, the author will mark which chapter mentioned it. This is a better point. After all, sometimes I read a book very quickly and overlook some details. In general, it is a relatively good Dragon Clan fanfic. Shen Nong has read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics, and thinks that the best one has the money to go to college, travel through the world, and become the Dragon King in the Dragon Clan (Fu Nian, King of the Earth and Mountains). There may be others, but I am not impressed anymore. As for why not many people watched it, I personally feel that the previous plot may be relatively dull. After all, the first battle with a pureblood is already 400,000 words long. It can reach 5 or 6k every day, but not many people read it. The author can find other authors to recommend it at the end of the chapter.

When Xia Mi was Jörmungandr in the original work, he was able to let Chu Zihang kill him. Here, the author seems to have divided Xia Mi and Jörmungandr into two parts. There was never Xia Mi, only the Jörmungandr who wanted to be Xia Mi.

It was said earlier that Su Qian would not be given to Chu Zihang, and it was also written that Su Qian would be jealous for the protagonist, but later it became a pure family bond; secondly, in Japan, the girl in the protagonist's body can directly snatch the protagonist's body and speak, and even during this period of time, the protagonist has no memory at all, which is a bit poisonous.

I hope the heroine is Teacher Daye 😍

This is a pitfall avoidance post. Readers who like Eri Yi don't need to read it. The author's early descriptions have been targeting Eri Yi. The author seems to dislike her very much. Every few paragraphs, he hints or expresses that Eri Yi shouldn't live in this world.

It's better to write a novel than to write an essay. You don't need so much preaching

The trip to Japan was all dead.6666

There is no continuity in the plot. It moves here and there. It is clear that the protagonist is still the protagonist in the previous chapter, and then becomes Chu Zihang in the next chapter, and then the protagonist again in the next chapter. Each chapter is a small story, which is very uncomfortable to watch. I wanted a montage-style storyboard, but it was a failed imitation.

It's so uncomfortable to watch this segment.

Polite self-recommendation, Dragon Clan fan "Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Restarting Life". If you are interested in reading it, welcome critical comments🙏🙏🙏 Friends who like Dragon Clan can come to criticize and give advice, and communicate more

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