Rolling Dice in the Wizarding World

A battle training goes from chapter 34 to chapter 60, really 6

Let's talk about the good points and conclusions first: 1. The world view is very large. There are many planes in the world background of the Sea of ​​Souls, the wizard's origin world, the abyss, etc., Which is very attractive; the levels are complete: three levels of apprenticeship, wizard, great wizard, legendary wizard; ten levels of nightmare beasts, etc.; Although the first copy is relatively long, some metaphors about the formula, fairy tales, etc. Are quite interesting, involving the history of the tutor's fortune, and it seems that there will be more to write about later. 2. The strength grows very quickly, without deliberately suppressing the level. The protagonist plans all the way from the crane tail who was almost eliminated in two months and finally becomes the first among his batch to advance to the second level apprentice. High risk and high reward. 3. Update speed: normal. There are now more than 90 latest chapters, which should be on the shelves soon. I wonder if there will be a burst of updates. If the update speed is average after it is released, some readers may choose to start keeping books. 4. The structure and writing style are still very rigorous and worthy of scrutiny. There is a high probability that this is an old author with a new vest. 0 Interaction, multiple openings are not ruled out. The current score is 5,000 collections. It is possible that the author is not satisfied with the score. Comprehensive of advantages and disadvantages, this is a standard online article. Different people have different opinions: 1. The wizarding world created is currently an absolutely dark, cruel, cold and bloody world from the perspective of the protagonist, an apprentice. There are at least three life-related assessments for first-class apprentices, who are usually in a developmental stage. The last one is eliminated through a system. If you don't meet the requirements, you will die, and your life will be lost in an instant... The relationship between the apprentices is also intrigues and intrigues. Objectively, it exaggerates the cruel atmosphere. Some chapters say that readers have heated discussions about the development of the wizarding civilization. The author has more or less given explanations later in the article. It may be a little unreasonable, but I think generally speaking, as long as it can be justified, it is okay. After all, it is an online text, and the world background can be regarded as the author's setting. Little poison. 2. A lot of rhetoric is used to describe the wizard's strength and realm, and the repeater machine. Sometimes it's tiring to read. There is a feeling of overexertion, which may be due to personal writing style. It may not be very friendly to readers who follow up on updates. Sometimes you may feel the same after reading a chapter as if you haven't read it, or you may have to recall previous chapters. I personally think there are a few poisonous points: 1. The promotion of second-class apprentices to apprentices requires rituals from the wizard tower. For such a large wizard tower, the number of places given in one batch is 3... Well It is reasonable to need rituals to break through to the official wizard, but the breakthrough from second-class to third-class is still in a process of accumulation of quantitative changes, and has not yet reached the stage of qualitative changes. It is equivalent to the fact that disciples in the middle stage of Qi training need a certain ritual to break through to the later stage of Qi training, and only the sect can provide the ritual. No matter how talented you are, it's useless? This move basically eliminates the possibility of wild wizards practicing sporadically, 6. 2. The second-class apprentice began to get in touch with the evil god. It was very similar to the fact that I had read a book by Rhea before and had been working with the evil god during his apprenticeship. How can I put it, the span is quite large 3. In the first chapter of the opening chapter, the number of destiny points is mentioned as 4/4, and there are also words 100/100 in the introduction, indicating that there is an upper limit to the accumulation of destiny points in the setting. But it will not be mentioned in the following article. Generally speaking, daily automatic recovery will be ineffective when the upper limit is reached. Even setting an unlimited limit directly is better than this half-pull.

From the inexplicable targeting in Chapter 5 to the intensification in the latest chapter, the Riddler has not given the protagonist any information at all. A battle test has turned into a one-on-one bloody battle for the protagonist. Or is it because the opponent occupies various favorable conditions of the environment, equipment, and off-site assistance, and also says that the Wizard Tower pays attention to the rules in order to create a comeback for the protagonist? The pressure was too harsh, too deliberate...

The writing is quite good, but I wasn't interested at all when I saw the recommendations and introduction: too many chip wizards have been produced in recent years, so that the gimmick of the wizard world is vulgar and bad, and there are too many dramas such as the wizard tower plane war, which have long been stale. Unexpectedly, although this book is vulgar in terms of its large plot structure, the author is more meticulous in its actual writing. At this stage, the wizard's battle is not just a vulgar energy explosion; the plot about dice even adds a touch of magic-modified DND flavor to the book. It looks pretty good so far.

I've read a few chapters, it's a traditional weird and cruel wizard novel, and the choice of plug-in to play group dice is a bit new. It seems that the writing is also good so far. You can continue to read it. Good luck to the author.

There is no civilization at all in this wizarding world, and it feels worse than the animal world. Why do the wizarding world cultivate new wizards? Are they cultivating enemies for themselves?

In Chapter 5, Xie Lin came over in advance and wanted to enter the protagonist's room. The protagonist conducted psychological activities for a long time and felt that it was inappropriate and that the woman should not be allowed in. But the protagonist wanted to think about it, so he made a move to open the door, but was stopped by the plug-in. So, why have you been mentally active for a long time? If a long paragraph describing psychological activities is not to guide action, is it to fill it with water? Chapter 6, the first place Fular is waiting for the protagonist again. In such a cruel and ruthless wizard tower, a female student who is ranked number one has to show her kindness to the protagonist who is below average. Is this a distortion of human nature or a loss of morality? Doesn't it mean that the novel can't be written without the forced inclusion of a woman's role? There is no mention of the friendship between this woman and the protagonist in the previous chapters.

The book is very interesting, and the weird feeling of the wizard is very strong. However, each dungeon is too long, and the main plot advances too slowly, especially the library dungeon. Dozens of chapters have been written. Has the protagonist gained a lot, and has it been of great help to the plot? 😥 If written like this, it will take seven to eight hundred chapters to advance to the first level wizard. More weird and colorful stories can be written after you reach a higher level. It would be better if the stories in the apprenticeship stage are shorter and faster.

After 100 chapters of brainlessly suppressing pig's feet, he is still a first-level apprentice, and he directly studies strange creatures. How about becoming a god at the second and third levels? For the sake of low word count, the author doesn't give up any bottom line now, right?

What does this woman mean? Showing goodwill is too high, even if you have the same research idea, isn't it right?

According to the author's world view, the wizards who come out of this world all kill for fun. The strongest one is assumed to be level 9. Depending on his mood, he will kill one level 8 per day on average and a bunch of level 7s. If he is level 8, he will kill a level 7 every day. If he continues to kill a bunch of level 6s, he will destroy the world if he is not happy. This world should be destroyed in less than a year...

After reading the beginning, many bad points have been pointed out by book friends, so I won't go into them. However, the protagonist only has 4 points of destiny, which is difficult to add and subtract. In just the first few chapters, there are serious errors in the calculation of destiny points, and the settings are messed up. This makes readers seriously lack confidence in the subsequent construction of the book, because they are afraid that the author will just open his mouth and take the settings as he pleases.

Everyone wants to harm the protagonist. Each mentor student is specifically targeted at

In my mind, wizards pursue truth and equal exchange. This kind of conspiracy and trickery for the sake of power is not a wizard. Family ties are also part of the truth. Losing human feelings is not a wizard. And this book is full of this disgusting atmosphere. Wizards are more about cooperation than calculation, losing the essence of wizards. There is a high probability that this book will not have a later stage. Even if it is written to the end, it will be the same plot of repeated calculations and calculations. This kind of novel that is purely for the sake of word count is not worth subscribing to.

Don't just go through the spell judgment first to see which ones can be learned directly, staring at a spell that is so different

It's too shabby. I've read more than 50 chapters and made a lot of money. My level hasn't changed at all. My mental power has increased by about 10 points from 20 points. I haven't learned any spells. I can't move the meditation method. My body is not good. I have poor qualifications. I'm being targeted at every turn. What are you doing living? I'm so tired. I can't even sleep well all day long.

In the clouds and fog, going around and around, all kinds of bells and whistles

Oh my God, I read and updated 3 books at once. .