Konoha's Mediocre Ninja

A proud figure! As a time traveler, we are noble! Although there is no golden finger except for knowing some high-level secrets that cannot be accessed by his own identity; Although he generally has no background in physical skills with thin chakra; Although he has amazing wisdom that can be deceived by children less than a fraction of his actual age; Although as an "adult time traveler with a broad vision", his ideas and efforts to change the status quo need to be taken care of by Nonoyu; But! The protagonist is confident and arrogant! It's just superior! I just look down on you natives! No Naiyu? Just a tool man! Although she, a child, far surpasses the protagonist in all aspects (strength, communication, learning) and takes care of the protagonist in all aspects, how can the noble time traveler take the cricket indigenous supporting character seriously? At the beginning, he said that he deliberately distanced himself from Nonou because he was afraid of Danzo. Within a chapter, he felt at ease and ate all the two rice balls sent by Nonou without even asking if she had eaten or thanking her. No Naiyu lost the fight because he was hungry because he gave all the food to the protagonist. He showed no concern or apology, and only had a psychological activity to avenge the passers-by who laughed at Nonaiyu. So which time-traveler who is a psychologically mature person ate all the food brought by a child without asking any questions, causing her to starve? The protagonist was playing a practice match with a little girl. He had some free time to think about being cool, but was deceived by the little girl and took the opportunity to take him away. Have you never thought that girls develop earlier than boys of the same age and have more physical advantages? Wouldn't you have thought that since you were a child in an orphanage, your nutritional conditions would definitely be inferior to those of your peers? Then you should remember that your chakra thinness and physical skills are average, right? In the first few lines, it was still said, "Because Nonoyu gave him food and he was hungry and lost, if he wins, he can repay Nonoyu." He underestimated the enemy and lost to the little girl. The protagonist has no guilt or sense of shame and just brushes the matter aside. Later, he mentions that the little girl is a "bad woman"? Are you okay? What you mean is that you, a well-informed adult, were deceived by the acting skills of a five- or six-year-old child. The child is really bad! Do you want me to praise you for your simplicity and honesty, which has not been polluted by knowledge and wisdom? Knowing shame and then being brave has not been written into your own dictionary at all! I really haven't figured out what the protagonist's strengths are yet. Do I just rely on his confidence? Is he just optimistic? Is it because he is so shameless that he can be taken care of by children without any bottom line? Is it just because he doesn't reflect on his own self-awareness that all problems are caused by external factors? Of course, in the ninja world, being as ungrateful and shameless as the protagonist is indeed a good talent, but it is not enough. Writing the character as it is now will only result in a piece of rubbish with no personality and strength after stripping away the golden finger given by the author. If you want to stand out, I suggest you dig deeper and reduce the immorality to the level of inhumanity. It is a kind of originality.

The six moves that the protagonist couldn't master for several years were learned in minutes. The protagonist without cheats could only work purely for Konoha. The protagonist has not learned the things he has studied for several years. Others are proficient and even evolved. In a world like Naruto, where blood cheats are so ruthless, the protagonist will only become weaker and weaker👎

The protagonist is a weird mama boy with a weird personality and no intelligence. Practicing in the open space of the orphanage is called sneaking? Danzo really needs to pay attention to the children in the orphanage. The protagonist is hiding his ears and stealing the bell. Children in the ninja world are all precocious, not to mention a person like Nonoyu who has both high business intelligence and meticulous work. If he tells her the truth directly, the plan he makes must be more reasonable and rigorous than the novice protagonist.

I'm speechless. Who wrote the introduction? It's so deceptive. You came in with great expectations, and you just show me this? On the one hand, I don't want to express myself, on the other hand, I always think that I am different. Currently I have no ability and I need help from others even to eat. The protagonist is reborn as a child, not a child himself. I have to behave well. Ah, I'm scared, but I don't want to act too good. What is the soul of an adult, knowing that neither of them brought food, yet you didn't even ask when someone brought food to you? I really don't understand what the author wants to express. The protagonist has an awkward personality. He cannot owe favors for fear of being implicated, yet at the same time he keeps accepting help... I haven't finished reading three chapters, and I feel like the protagonist is going to have a schizophrenia. Withdrawn...

Looking at the comments with the most likes, they were very poisonous, so I clicked on them to see if they were true, but I didn't expect them to be true. After eating Nonou's rice balls, I saw Nonou lose the fight and realized that the others were hungry. Then I went to the protagonist to fight against a female classmate of the same grade. Before the battle started, I saw the teacher named Shimura wondering whether he should hide his strength. Seeing this, I also thought about the background of the protagonist. He is an orphan who cannot eat enough and can only recover chakra by himself. What kind of strength is hidden? The protagonist thought again that he would not hide his strength for the two rice balls of Nonoyu, and then rushed towards the female classmate, and was killed by the female classmate pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger with one move. I laughed to death. Even the clowns in Gotham felt that the protagonist was the real one🤡. The funniest thing is here, and I also wrote a sentence about the pride of the protagonist as a time traveler The above is the content of the three chapters of "Gold", gold is the same as shit.

It's okay. How could Danzo, who has no roots, play such a big game in ten days? There isn't even a twenty-five-year-old boy down there? Do the other Kage fools into believing his information? Even if the Uchiha rebelled, would the temper of the hawk be such that you, a member of a small clan, would be so mean to you? Doves report him immediately! Is he worthy?

The protagonist is arrogant and mediocre. He should have been of a certain age before time travel, but he behaves like an imbecile. He has experience in making money in modern society. It doesn't matter how much he earns, but at least it shouldn't be too difficult to make a little money. The protagonist just didn't do that and asked the pharmacist, a little girl, to make money to support the protagonist and the orphanage. I don't know what he was thinking. But this paragraph is really disgusting. The most disgusting thing is that there is no due gratitude to the pharmacist. It seems that people should take it for granted, and I owe you. Yes, the paragraph about creating the Six Styles cannot be shorter, and then write more interactions between the characters in the plot, and develop your own network resources. There is no need to write so many words on the Six Styles, and doesn't the protagonist want to be a low-key person? Why did you have to wear the Eight-door Dunjia together when you were creating the Six Styles? They haven't taught you the Eight-door Dunjia yet, but you've been tearing yourself apart. You don't know whether to call the protagonist stupid or selfless.

Why can you write so embarrassingly? . .

What is written is really nonsense. Do you develop it if you know it or have seen it? Do you have a body with that strength if you are still in the Sixth Form of Navy? The Fourth Hokage doesn't have more theoretical knowledge than anyone else. Why doesn't he open up ninjutsu every day? It's really nonsense. You also know about nuclear fusion. It's not enough to just create cores. He also developed a urinary ninjutsu.

Tmd Obviously, this is the author giving the protagonist the power to think. If the protagonist didn't realize it the first time, he still won't realize it after so many times. It can only be said that I didn't realize it. After all, the protagonist is not Newton. Can you figure out why this phenomenon occurs? What's more, the protagonist has never even witnessed this phenomenon.

Attacking Orochimaru to attract attention is almost equivalent to attacking a provincial leader. You are still alive to show off your talents. Are you stupid?

One Piece system? How come the protagonist, who knows all the information about the plot, is still running wildly in this system, and finally becomes the nourishment of divine magic, and the chakra is very similar to the Qi of Hunter and Dragon Ball. After working on it for a long time, the protagonist is still a weakling with a short life. In fact, when the ultra-electric disk comes out, come The first plot kill has been sealed. It's awesome. It's not that we are still fighting. A team of 4 ninjas just turned into a sniper rifle. They can have roots and ANBU. Why can't they train and select special long-range troops? The plot should be advanced and evolved more reasonably. There can be less inner monologues from the protagonist. Come on, author.

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I compiled a cheat: the sealing technique development system! Use the computer language of 0s and 1s to program sealing techniques! Provide knowledge to the system and deduce the results you want! For example, enhancing the perception system of the five senses of the human body! Wait a minute, after all, in the world of Naruto, the sealing technique can seal away six-level characters. It has high potential and is a weapon for ordinary time travelers to rise against the sky!

Six postures, except for Dai and Kai, it is possible for Hokage to master this skill. Anyone else who practices it will die because their physical fitness cannot pass.

The title of the book is enough to persuade you to quit. If you are mediocre, what else should I read?

Author: I have an immature idea. I read Naruto books these days and suddenly found a problem. Why do you all start in Konoha? Too many people have written. There is nothing new. I read that someone in the fanfic has come up with a way to start with Kumogakure. Take the thunder escape path because it is a rare one in Naruto that has been passed down from genin to shadow. Later, as long as the protagonist perfects the thunder escape chakra touch, it will be a super shadow. It is hard to fight head on. It is cool. There are not many changes (many Naruto fans have either one technique in the east or one in the west, which is a mess. For example, there are many flying thunder gods, none of which are used for fighting, and there is no system)

It feels okay, a bit interesting. It's a little better than those conspiracy theories that are flying all over the sky. Conspiracy theories are not so easy to write. Those who write conspiracy theories are basically thrown into the street.

It turns out that developing new abilities means gathering chakra in designated parts of the body? Gather chakra into your fingers, and you'll be able to point the gun! Haha, laugh to death. I can do it if you change me!

This is the most harmonious and friendly Naruto fan fiction I have ever read, and their tragedy has finally been rewritten. 😭😭😭

This is Ritian on the mountain 😤

Konoha-ryu is donating his own things.

Is it Mr. Shan? Are you going to open the Hokage's eyes?

Is the protagonist dead? I think I haven't seen it for many chapters.

After reading the comment section, it's really just ordinary, and it's the title of the book.

Developed: Six-type Ape King Gun, Railgun