Vientiane Tianheng

God, I'm devastated. This book has been at the top of my list of recommendations based on taste for almost a month. Damn it. I'm thinking that this book doesn't suit my taste. The algorithm of Qidian is irritating, right? Forget about daily detoxification, the taste recommendation is so virtuous... Please, don't let me see this book again...

Summarizing the main highlights of the next book: [Technology (magic?) Farming] [Self-built sky city (space jump mobile industrial fortress)] [Steam revolution]] [Using space gates to trade across continents (or planes?)] [Rune technology automated production line] [Harvesting resources from multiple continents (such as the beast-eared girls on a certain continent)] [Developing forces] [Bringing steel machinery to religious civilization] [Cross-continental immigration, building a country from scratch] [Continental hegemony war] [Rare wars] Pet Collection] [Protagonist Lolita Control] [Lolita Collection and Development] and the like. It is more like a wizard-style + hegemony novel. The author spent a lot of ink on inscriptions on black technology, making a bunch of magically modified mechanical creations, such as a thousand-meter-long aerial giant structure, a magically modified shield machine, as well as magic potions, spiritual potions, bloodline modifications, etc., Which are all used to develop the power like the previous book. It will also be transformed into a mobile world. The plot currently explores four continents. The main continent controls a population of about 500 million and is in the midst of the industrial revolution. The alien continent has been colonized and developed by itself for many years. It currently has a population of 80 million, including multiple races. There are also two other continents that are being conquered, one is a place ruled by dragons, and the other is a place ruled by religion. The timeline of this book is quite long, and the current protagonist's power population has passed through several generations. Currently appearing realms: First level (birth of fighting spirit, wizard entry) Second level (Sword Saint, legendary strongman, inscription wizard, alien continent level lv.16+) Third level (saint, curse wizard) Fourth level (god?) However, the author's lack of quotation marks is indeed a big problem, maybe because of the voice input? But it's free and the update volume is quite high. It doesn't matter anyway. Finally, come on, author!

It's quite beautiful, but it's a pity that not many people see it.

I have read about forty or fifty chapters so far, and I feel like I have grasped some of the context. I have read the author's books before, and what impressed me most is that they actually calculate building materials data for you. This book currently does not seem to highlight the role of the protagonist's gender. There is actually no difference between the author's creation of a female protagonist and a male protagonist. At present, it is just a very super model, and then it is constantly described and upgraded. There is a limit to the upgrade. After that, it will inevitably bring about stacking boxes, which is not interesting. In addition, the author should not think that it is very unimportant to describe the dialogue without quotation marks. The dialogue without quotation marks cannot be highlighted at all, which will make the entire page without any fluctuations. The protagonist's words and explanatory text are completely mixed together. The author's portrayal of the protagonist's personal personality and character arc is very weak, and there is no analysis of appearance and psychology. In addition, the dialogue does not have quotation marks to highlight, and the protagonist is even paler, like a machine that only upgrades, completely devoid of character charm and femininity. Since you have chosen a female protagonist, you have to take advantage of this. The lack of outstanding characterization of the protagonist is the biggest problem in my opinion. The sense of agency is completely missing, which is directly related to the dialogue without quotation marks. Continuous upgrading will only bring temporary pleasure. Powerful plug-ins will inevitably upgrade too quickly. If you want to maintain it, you must expand new maps and start stacking boxes, which will eventually exhaust the pleasure of upgrading. If you don't work hard on the protagonist himself, there will definitely be no sustained appeal. In addition, the plug-in is too powerful. The protagonist is going smoothly now. If it continues, an enemy will suddenly be defeated, which will bring a huge sense of disparity and anger to the readers. Unhappiness is inevitable. How to make readers accept it is another difficulty. If the author wants to dilute the overly frequent upgrading and stacking of boxes, he must add a large number of event branches, which goes back to the above topic. If it is deflated, the reader's experience will explode. If it keeps being crushed, the reader will always get bored.

Since the protagonist is a female, why not put it on a female channel and specifically put it on a male channel? It's okay if you don't know about it if you haven't seen it. It would be better if you only realize that the protagonist is a woman after watching half of it. I want to know the psychological shadow area of ​​those readers, but fortunately I didn't read it.

It's so outrageous, I wrote fifteen chapters of the past life that were unnecessary, and then changed it to a modern fantasy, with the male protagonist becoming the female protagonist. The magical one is gone at the beginning, the modern one is also gone when you watch the magic, and the male protagonist is gone when you see the female protagonist. Can you recommend a book like this?

Don't hold back, this way of writing really doesn't take the characteristics of Internet articles into consideration. Chapter 15 has just begun? Why can't we move the previous content to the back and explain it through narrative? Current Buffs: 1. Transformation 2. Super slow warming + confusion for some reason at the beginning of Chapter 14 3. There is no "" prompt in the dialogue

Without punctuation, it challenges people's reading habits If you can tolerate this, you are a real fan So, author, are you accurately selecting readers?

Boss, do you really not consider punctuation in dialogue? I'm sure my grades would have improved a lot if I took extra classes in the last book, but it's not too late to start taking extra classes now.

There are no punctuation marks, no matter how good the writing is, there is no desire to understand.

It is in a pure Japanese comic style, with no double quotation marks in the dialogue. Some book friends said that it looks like a foreign novel or comic translated and polished. It does look a bit like it. It is worthy of being a daily guide.

From the previous book, to be honest, I feel that the previous foreshadowing is a bit too lengthy, the title and introduction of the book are too high-minded, and the current chapters are just like an urban soldier king, the contrast is too big.

First of all, [the first 15 chapters are all nonsense] [character dialogue has no double quotation marks and lacks punctuation] [the male protagonist travels through time for the second time, and his gender changes] [the illegitimate child of the Japanese consortium in the first time, died as a tool] [the daughter of the lord in the second time in the Western Fantasy] [a golden finger appears in Chapter 16, as in the title of the book (Heaven) Constant)] [The specific explanation is to consume physical strength and maintain a certain state that belongs to you the next day in advance, such as locking blood] [The ability is too broad, and it is invincible and refreshing to write it well] [However, the protagonist believes that the ability to lock the state cannot avoid pain...] [Your blood is locked. In other words, you are locked in the normal operating state of your body. The enemy cannot even break your skin (breaking the skin is also damage and reduces your blood)] [But the enemy can still over-stimulate you without damaging the epidermis and receptors. Subcutaneous receptors, they make you hurt, right?] [This doesn't count whether stimulating the nerves is harmful or not] [I know this, I'm not hurt ≠ I won't feel pain] [The mother-style question, it's seconds, it just fits the theme of the text, the transformed woman is also a woman. Then, I stopped reading after chapter 17. As for the advantages, I hope it can help you who are trying to find good books to read.

Apart from anything else, you are not even outrageous about the double quotation marks. No matter how bad your writing is, it will not be like this. How do you write it in such a way that we can follow it?

I saw a lot of posts that were posted in the past two years, but the purely free power generation for love can still update so steadily. I have written more than 3 million words in 2 years. I really admire the author.

This novel gave me the feeling that it was directly translated from a Japanese novel, without even inferring the deeper meaning of the words.

This book is quite good, but the problem is that it starts with a modern male protagonist and then switches to a western fantasy female protagonist in Chapter 15. The readers were screened twice in a row. Those who wanted a western fantasy female protagonist left after reading the beginning, and those who wanted a modern male protagonist also left after Chapter 15. In addition, there are no punctuation marks, and it was really hard to read.

Those who read the previous book left because of the male protagonist at the beginning, and those who read the male protagonist also left because of his transformation. I was filled with questions.

Weird, he didn't even put double quotation marks in his words

Can I put the female protagonist in the introduction? I read it very well and invested in it, but suddenly it became a female protagonist?

It's all free. The author does it for love, and doesn't need to listen to some stupid suggestions. After all, it's not for making money. The author just wants to have fun, and there is no need to complain about any modification suggestions. It is very pure "read it if you like it, and get out if you don't."

Brother, if someone hadn't said about the transformation in Chapter 15, I would have given up on it. The first dozen or so pictures are completely about past lives. What is the need to write it?

Besides commas, what other punctuation marks does this thing have? Are you sure this wasn't written by AI? Well, even AI can't write this thing. I'm a little reflective, why did I get this?

I have been writing free online articles for two years. It is really out of pure love.

The ending is full of flowers! When does the author plan to publish the next book?

Asking about the progress of the new book It's really like not seeing each other for one day, it's like three autumns.

The author is coming back soon, Qidian is a rare good book now.

I'm going back to read it again, but this book has never been on the shelves. I don't know how to give it any support. In fact, the last book "Control Probability" felt a bit like déjà vu. Looking through the bookshelf today, I felt that it had a similar feeling to the ancient book "Transformation Eternity". I hope I can continue writing it.

Why is it all free? See you for the first time. It's too arrogant.

I've finished reading it. The novel is very well written, but the beginning is a bit discouraging, otherwise the results will definitely be better than your last novel.