The Wizard's Journey to Infinity

If you feel depressed at every turn and have tears in your eyes, you should switch to a female channel

To be fair, it is readable, the creativity is very good, and the story is relatively strong. It is considered to be the best among new books. But the writing style actually needs to be improved, and Pig's Foot's character is not pleasant. Even if it is selfish, today's readers also require some intelligence. It is impossible to say that Goldfinger forced his life to save his life, and the author forced cheating to advance the plot. Even if the book has this ability, it can be set so that Pig's Foot knows and then uses Goldfinger. I know that the author wants to write about the feeling of continuous progress through the book, little by little. But the reality is that the performance is a bit poor. The first world, Tinder Box, was too hasty. Since Pig's Foot has traveled through time and has a formal identity, why not further expand on the worldview and values. There is so much to write about in the protagonist's life and the characters around him. It is entirely possible to wait for half a year after getting the silver coins. Since there are sailors, learning swordsmanship and increasing the background is a good plot. Even if the number of words is water, it is a necessary skill to become a great god Although some plots are vulgar, it is really impossible without them. Suddenly forced to flee, modern people have no vision at all. And since the king is bound to die, why not just say that it is better than the prophecy of the ancestors. If you want to scheme against others, don't leave any traces. It is better to be the mastermind behind the scenes than to do all the dirty things yourself. In the second world, the Queen is really outstanding, which is why I am willing to comment. It can be seen that the author has the talent to eat this bowl of rice. Please continue to work hard and look forward to the future development of this book.

The character design of the protagonist is really disgusting, and the villain too

The protagonist's character is not good, he has no charm and no brains. Chapter 9 is even more unlike a time traveler, acting more like a native than a native. Defeated😜

The first 6 chapters are written like this. Do you have any misunderstandings about writing novels, or do you think you are a master and have a fan base? Even if you write poorly at the beginning, there will still be people who will read it. Nowadays, if a novel is not gripping at the beginning, many readers will not have the patience to continue reading. You can already see the problem if the number of comments is less than the number of chapters. It's not terrible to be scolded. At least there is traffic. If no one scolds you, then it's over and the popularity is gone.

I have read a similar book before. In fact, this type of writing is difficult because the magical standards of fairy tales are too high and it is difficult to write well. Anyway, I have never seen a book that can be written in a self-consistent way.

The main character is poorly designed. The world book butler settings are also very old-fashioned, just like the system intelligence!

Even after reading it, it's not finished. The author should just stop writing and practicing his techniques. I feel that this book has almost stopped. After seeing that the world book requires the story development to be carried out without changing the main story, I feel that there is nothing to write in the back of the book.

As far as the protagonist's character and way of doing things, I can do it just fine.

To be honest, I feel like you haven't modified it at all! The poison points and the like from before are still there, but the character of the protagonist is still not that good? In the second chapter, the protagonist was crying and wanted to go back. It was so pretentious. It was quite disgusting. I didn't seem to see any modifications.

The protagonist has traveled through time for a year, and behaves as if he had just come back. It feels like the lead pig is almost the same as the protagonist when he comes here. I can only say that he can't see the front and how to see the back 🤔

I really want to be fooled by pig's feet! Die! Got it! ! !

Do you feel that you have been in a bad state these past few days and that the quality of your writing has declined? Or is it just not that good in itself? Posting a post is a collection of shortcomings, asking everyone to speak freely.

This book, this character, is destined to be unwritten. If you are black, you have to be like Master Gu. If you are not black, don't use poison. What a hypocritical clip! It's a good subject, but it's a pity

The protagonist in this writing is too selfish. Don't tell me. If the protagonist is generous enough to give the supporting characters a little bit of local influence under the development of soup farming, wouldn't it be interesting? The writing is not good at theoretical knowledge? The magic technology of three acids and two alkali walking on two legs has standardized production lines and automated spell scroll production lines. Is there a boss? Look at my pile of fireball scrolls. Is it scary? And look at my 4-barreled 30mm cannon. Is it powerful? My method is to walk on two legs. Look at the protagonist you wrote. He is such a good person that you have to tie his legs to a wheelchair and have his hands rowed to walk in the wheelchair. Moreover, the protagonist he wrote has ideological problems and is not likeable. The hypocrisy can be seen from the tinder box and sailor at the beginning. All actions that seem to be for the sake of others are actually for yourself. What appears to be helpful is actually harmful, but you can't tell that from the perspective of the protagonist in the novel. But from a God's perspective, we can see this inappropriate hypocrisy, small favors in daily life, not to mention the important ones.

A kind, honest and sinister protagonist who relies on cheats and destiny to run rampant. The writing and plot are average, but his imagination is good.

There is an old book about a wizard who travels through the infinite world in a carriage, and there is an old book about a wizard traveling through the fairy tale world.

I feel that the protagonist's gold finger is like a mountain of gold and silver placed in front of the protagonist, but the protagonist can neither take gold nor silver, and even only a small part of the soil buried on it can be taken. I thought it was funny at first, but now it feels so disgusting

I seem to remember seeing a similar one before in Qidian. It was a combination of fantasy and fairy tale, and it was also a tinder box. The protagonist later swallowed the soul of a witch and gained magic. Does anyone know the name?

This idea of traveling through fairy tales and relying on the resources in fairy tales has an inexplicable sense of familiarity. A "Super Pocket Watch" was of this type back then, and it was far better written than this one. Unfortunately, the author wrote that when entering the world of One Piece, it would be easy to kill Kaido and become one of the new four emperors. However, not long after writing this paragraph, Oda released an article about Kaido's appearance. As for the content, as soon as the complete setting of Kaido and the Beasts Pirates came out, what the author wrote was in conflict with Oda's setting, and it could no longer be justified. As a result, the update was discontinued. As soon as the complete setting of Kaido and the Beasts Pirates came out, a large number of books were published, especially the fan classification was simply wailing.

This article combines the fairy tale of the wizard + the journey of the infinite wizard.

This. . . . . Was the author inspired to write this book by Tao Mu's "The Wizard's Journey to Infinity"? After reading a few chapters, I suddenly felt like I had read it years ago.

This book has been internally invested and signed, and it also has a complete outline and world view. Please feel free to invest and read. In addition, please be sure to follow up on reading. It is very important to follow up on new books.

Why are there no comments? I think it's okay after reading it.

What is the main thing to watch when watching Across the World? The fairy tale world is mainly for fun, while the dangerous world mainly depends on the ability of the protagonist. For example, if you directly abandon the setting of the fairy tale world and replace it with your own second setting, it still feels uncomfortable. This is why I abandoned the book. You can change the setting as you like but the result is fun. The dark fairy tales I read before were quite good if they were not written.

It's a bit embarrassing to see him jumping sideways repeatedly

Author, you must be as disgusting as the protagonist you wrote

What's wrong with logging out the author's account ಥ_ಥ

When I saw the name of this novel, I thought it was The Journey of the Infinite Sorcerer that was updated here, but unfortunately it wasn't. That novel The Eunuch has been around for a long time.

The book is good, but the writing and plot are a bit lacking, but it's okay. It's a good idea You can take a look.