A Wizard's Infinite Journey

If you feel depressed at every turn and have tears in your eyes, you should switch to a female channel

To be fair, it is readable, the creativity is very good, and the story is relatively strong. It is considered to be the best among new books. But the writing style actually needs to be improved, and Pig's Foot's character is not pleasant. Even if it is selfish, today's readers also require some intelligence. It is impossible to say that Goldfinger forced his life to save his life, and the author forced cheating to advance the plot. Even if the book has this ability, it can be set so that Pig's Foot knows and then uses Goldfinger. I know that the author wants to write about the feeling of continuous progress through the book, little by little. But the reality is that the performance is a bit poor. The first world, Tinder Box, was too hasty. Since Pig's Foot has traveled through time and has a formal identity, why not further expand on the worldview and values. There is so much to write about in the protagonist's life and the characters around him. It is entirely possible to wait for half a year after getting the silver coins. Since there are sailors, learning swordsmanship and increasing the background is a good plot. Even if the number of words is water, it is a necessary skill to become a great god Although some plots are vulgar, it is really impossible without them. Suddenly forced to flee, modern people have no vision at all. And since the king is bound to die, why not just say that it is better than the prophecy of the ancestors. If you want to scheme against others, don't leave any traces. It is better to be the mastermind behind the scenes than to do all the dirty things yourself. In the second world, the Queen is really outstanding, which is why I am willing to comment. It can be seen that the author has the talent to eat this bowl of rice. Please continue to work hard and look forward to the future development of this book.

The character design of the protagonist is really disgusting, and the villain too

The protagonist's character is not good, he has no charm and no brains. Chapter 9 is even more unlike a time traveler, acting more like a native than a native. Defeated😜

The first 6 chapters are written like this. Do you have any misunderstandings about writing novels, or do you think you are a master and have a fan base? Even if you write poorly at the beginning, there will still be people who will read it. Nowadays, if a novel is not gripping at the beginning, many readers will not have the patience to continue reading. You can already see the problem if the number of comments is less than the number of chapters. It's not terrible to be scolded. At least there is traffic. If no one scolds you, then it's over and the popularity is gone.

I have read a similar book before. In fact, this type of writing is difficult because the magical standards of fairy tales are too high and it is difficult to write well. Anyway, I have never seen a book that can be written in a self-consistent way.

As far as the protagonist's character and way of doing things, I can do it just fine.

Even after reading it, it's not finished. The author should just stop writing and practicing his techniques. I feel that this book has almost stopped. After seeing that the world book requires the story development to be carried out without changing the main story, I feel that there is nothing to write in the back of the book.

The main character is poorly designed. The world book butler settings are also very old-fashioned, just like the system intelligence!

To be honest, I feel like you haven't modified it at all! The poison points and the like from before are still there, but the character of the protagonist is still not that good? In the second chapter, the protagonist was crying and wanted to go back. It was so pretentious. It was quite disgusting. I didn't seem to see any modifications.