Priest Dad

I can still read the first part. I read it with a frown when I first came to college. It was disgusting and not interesting at all. I read Chapter 273 of the poisonous death. . .

I usually don't want to give negative comments, but I was really disgusted. The other party just broke the rules and was disgusting. My girlfriend was almost beaten to death by the other party, and the other party let me go after compensating for a skill difference. What's wrong with this?

The protagonist is a shameless saint. His wife was beaten almost to death. He spared his enemy for the sake of a skill. His wife lies on the hospital bed, goes to break through and level up, and leads others to break through. Others are parasites who only know how to take. No one cares whether his wife dies or not. The senior brother just asked him to work to realize his ideal. It is estimated that her wife will not wake up until she graduates from college. The family was not notified. It's all about dedication and leveling up! So disgusting.

What you wrote is very contradictory. The official trial is to raise Gu, and the university is to fight in the palace. What is the need to save the protagonist of this B country? Just like Aaron Bushnell, the country is so rotten that I would rather die than join in the corruption. You can either just write about the dark forest, and the main character should not be the Virgin, because today's readers don't like to read salvation stories. The more unhuman and self-interested your main character is, the more likely they will be able to relate to it. Emotional scenes are a piece of shit. I have always been intolerant of romance scenes. I love to watch Minotaurs die when there are multiple female protagonists. But I skip all your emotional scenes. You are the only one who can make me leave.

After reading Chapter 267, I feel that this school is like a mental hospital. Teachers fight with each other every day. Students think that cult lunatics are bewitched and charge into battle. In this way, people who graduate from military schools are expected to fight to the death when encountering each other on the battlefield before going on missions 😳

I just hope the author can see it. It has been on the shelves for a month now and has nearly 100 chapters. It is estimated that the author's data has dropped significantly recently. Here I ask three questions. One is that the pace in the chapters before it is released is a little slower, and it does not matter if there is more description of character attribute data and skill buff increase. However, after it is released, many chapters are still written around these, and there is often no substantive content after a few chapters. Although the amount of updates is large, the pace is too slow. The second one is the currency system structure. The primary life potion is 30,000, the intermediate life potion is 30,000, the advanced life potion is 1,000,000, and the small colorless crystal is 1e. In the early stage, a focus of light is worth 5,000. The family has only 7 or 8 elementary life potions in total. Now I am a martial arts instructor and I get 25 colorless crystals a month. There is also a second-level purification that is effective on Lu Mei's legs. But so far, except for the protagonist, Lin Mengmeng, and Lin's mother, I have never seen any other auxiliary characters, and I have never seen other auxiliary professions take action. The skill performance and combat of advanced professions are all missing, giving people a sense of fragmentation. Do you rely entirely on DNF to make up for it?

Everyone, you can delete books when you get to the college entrance examination. I was disgusted to death when I saw the college plot.

To be honest, I really can't stand this university anymore. There are all kinds of palace fights, and all kinds of people are forced into mindless provocations to give the protagonist a slap in the face.

I have read Chapter 142 so far, and I feel like I am still in the novice village. The background of the game is not as exciting as the strategy copy. The baby equipped with weapons has not been seen yet. It is almost the third level and there is not even a weapon or equipment. Is that reasonable? It is recommended that the author speed up the pace greatly. The skill of the fox-headed daddy is the same. Currently, he doesn't even have the Holy Spirit Hammer. If the fox-headed daddy doesn't carry the hammer, it will be very uninspiring 😆 Overall, it's good, but the pace is a bit slow. I hope the pace can be faster in the future.

The internal fighting in the academy is worse than the Warring States Period, even if you bring hell out of here, it won't happen. Before, the state took care of most people, but now that there is no backing in the university, they are destined to be cannon fodder. Is this still a military school? Within the school, leaders fight, teachers fight, and students are gangsters fighting for turf! What did you write? Graduation from high school was chaotic. Why should I become the principal's student? Did it do you any good? I guess all the assistant departments were killed in the university! If it were written in AI, it wouldn't be so rubbish. Nowadays, many books are written in this way, and the outlines are completely messed up! What kind of university should I go to if this is the case? All resources must be earned by oneself. It is better to graduate from high school and open a martial arts gym to earn money and upgrade. The author might as well write a chapter about graduating from college in five years.

The biggest poisonous point of this book is that it blindly belittles support. There are people who use support family members to threaten others as support. Isn't it true that the skills of support in the game world can only be used on people? If you don't top up your boos when fighting boos, you will be sorry for your family.

I really don't understand why game protagonists must be ridiculed by passers-by in class. If they are not ridiculed, it will not affect the plot at all. The halo of ridicule should be regarded as more poisonous now, right? Or is it just like the emperor who has not handed down the national jade seal, and the protagonist who does not have the halo of ridicule is unfair?

... The writing I wrote before college was okay, and I am interested in reading it... I think I have changed my brain after college... I feel a little arrears... It stopped at chapter 272... Deleted

Any novel with a school background must feature a school beauty, and it is rare that this school beauty can be written in such a way that readers like it. . . So, why not write about the school beauty? I have been going to school for nearly 20 years, and I have never encountered a school with a class beauty. I don't know what other people are like.

Many chapters are messy, couldn't they be written with AI?

Just keep upgrading in school, upgrading and upgrading again, writing in school until the end

Really, it's really annoying to write about women engaging in minor ambiguities and making the protagonist look like a straight man. You can either fight to the end and use martial arts as your companion; Or you can get along as normal men and women and refuse gambling and drugs! Currently, the author inserts some male and female plots from time to time. There should be female protagonists (single or multiple). In this case, there is no need to write the protagonist like a straight man with cancer. Moreover, the protagonist has eaten meat in his previous life. Writing this way makes the protagonist stupid and very discouraging! If you really want to write about straight men, then don't engage in these fancy emotional dramas, they won't please both sides!

It was fine before college, and the writing was quite good. But after college, why can't the author's mind change? Is this just a waste of writing?

Why include it in the game? How important are the main tank and nanny in the game? In reality, they are mostly targeted by the enemy. You will be the first to be killed. What would you choose if it were you?

I hope the author is not simply belittling the auxiliary to highlight the strength of the protagonist, but can use some words to make readers feel that the times create heroes.

I couldn't stand the first chapter since I started college. I skipped through the next few chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. The only military school with three battlefields. The atmosphere inside the school is one of infighting? There are all kinds of intrigues and intrigues, what kind of battlefield is there? Let's go fight the Landlord.

The writing is very good, but the last few pictures have been a bit watered down... I hope that after college it won't be just about training... Competitions... Shocks... Repeated accounts will make people tired, so it is better to go directly to the battlefield (I am a little afraid that the generals are going to repeat a round now). You can write about some unexplored secrets or missions or other developments.

I couldn't watch the university after seeing it, it was too messy, the plot was all messed up, it felt like it was written by AI

I'd like to give the author a pie. I'll give you double the monthly pass at the end of the month. If you don't get more, this is the only book about job transfer for everyone that I can read. I feel like the author is trying hard to enrich the plot, including the cult bait incident and the martial arts hall recruitment incident. In addition, I would like to mention that the protagonist acts in a high-profile manner throughout the whole process without considering the risks, and it doesn't matter if he is completely unscrupulous. It can be regarded as the country's secret protection power is very strong, and it is enough to pay attention to the protagonist. Then, make the protagonist's protector strong enough to go all the way to the dark side. Don't write anything about lack of power or laxity behind it, that is purely disgusting. The extreme difficulty level of the dual magic in the previous plot can bring out a thousand people in one month. This is equivalent to telling the whole world that a child is carrying the elixir of life.

As we all know, the fox-headed daddy is yyds😏

The cover character of this book and the paladin profession are both set in the dnf game. This profession is very fleshy, can restore blood, adds various attack buffs, can be resurrected, and has an invincible shield. The output is also good, but the output skills are few!

It feels pretty good after watching it for so long, but the emotional line looks weird here. It seems that by default the square is the object of the road. Fang's emotional journey is quite there, but the journey is a bit confusing.

Sledgehammer 80

Here is the original picture 😃 I saved it when I was playing with breasts, but it disappeared later.

Where's my daddy? Isn't she a human?