Douluo: Starting from the Wuhun Insect of Time

From the perspective of Douluo fan fiction, this is a unique book. First of all, the writing style is relatively sophisticated, not at the embarrassing level of most Douluo fans. Different from the scientific research flow of Soul Guidance Horror Beast and Blue Silver Grass, this book is more inclined to the behind-the-scenes flow, but it is not completely hidden behind the scenes. The development strength is hidden in the early stage, but the strength in the later stage is enough to make a blockbuster. There are all the fight scenes that should be done to show the strength, the writing of the sage in front of others is not inconsistent, and the writing of the intellectual battle scenes is also reasonable, and there are no major flaws. The cool points about Douluo have basically been written down, but the occasional choice of words and sentences still needs to be pondered. As for the characterization of the protagonist, I have not watched Lord of Mysteries, but I have deeply experienced the terror of Amon here (who knows when the person closest to you will take out a monocle and put it on). The author based on the prototype of Amon, Lord of Mysteries, and merged it with the soul of the indigenous Amon, giving it a little more humanity, which is quite good. The absence of emotional scenes is a plus point, and the writing style is also a plus. Most of the Douluo fandom writers are not good at writing, but they like to write extremely awkward emotional scenes. I can tell that the author of this book is not good at this aspect either. Yan Jing, who is described the most in the book, is cute but still lacks spirituality. But the author avoided this aspect, and another reason is that using Amon as the protagonist is not suitable for writing emotional dramas... Finally, the space is limited. Judging from the current progress, the story of Douluo Dalu, which is more than one million words, will be over. This may be a big regret for book friends who are only dedicated to Douluo fans, but more people will be attracted by Amon's next story. Still looking forward to the fight...

Author, you gained Amon's ability, not became Amon. You can do whatever it takes to become a god. Release the rock embers quickly. Why would he parasitize and control Yan Jin for no reason? It would be of no benefit to a normal person. Would he attack a loyal friend?

The plot ending of Dou Po is indeed very well laid out. It feels great to lay out the foreshadowings one by one and then focus on revealing them in the last few chapters. The author has really good control over the overall situation. It is very misleading to say that the sword Xiao Yan is a real sword. The protagonist Amon is really fooled to the extreme. He simply harvests and runs away. I can only say that I personally have never read a Dou Po series book before and I feel very good reading Dou Po Juan. Amon has a status similar to the planner and chess player in Daqian. This perfect status is destined to make it impossible for him to do everything personally like Douluo Juan and Dragon Clan Juan. I personally stood in front of the stage, and there are still many parts of Dou Po Juan that Amon participated in and influenced the decision-making, but it is relatively trivial and cannot be strung together in one breath like Douluo. I personally recommend that Dou Po Juan is suitable for readers who have no impression of Dou Po series to read carefully, and skipping Dou Po Juan will not affect the viewing of Dragon Clan Scroll and Douluo Scroll.         7-8，，，It has been used to its best; and the mental game between the formation and the three great masters in Daqian is also unexpected and reasonable. However, Muchen's cultivation speed was very fast. Knowing that it was Amon who arranged to push him away, compared with Xiao Yan and Laohun, it was indeed faster than the sky: two years for the Supreme Master and three years for the Great Master. Another impressive point is the part where Yao Lao refines the ninth-grade golden elixir. The whole family of Longfeng and Phoenix are used as medicinal materials and the whole medicine world is treated as an alchemy furnace. Unfortunately, the author's portrayal of love is a bit blunt compared to the battle of wits between the protagonists and villains, and even the grudges between Lin Dong and Amon or Yan Jin's loyalty to Amon. There are quite a few female characters who are very instrumental when it comes to the protagonist or the main plot or important foreshadowing and branch plots. They play their due role and simply go offline. It can only be said that Amon is the leader (named Alia Binglan Bibi Dong) Little Doctor Fairy Medusa Mandala Xiao Qing Lin Jing~_^The main character Meng has broken off his love and is very human, even the little Yan Zi Muchen Chen and Ming Fei have restrained themselves a lot) and there are too few types of girls, irritable foodies, bold and stupid women The author of Dan Beauty is a true love. Needless to say, Yan Jin, the soul owl and the soul guard student of the Laohun family are also female eldest brothers. And the author's writing of the gentle little girlfriend category always gave me a feeling that it was not quite right (for example, Xun'er and Xiao Wu are a bit of a tea for me?) I understand, I understand that the little girlfriend category is really not easy to write. The author who writes a good plot flow does not develop the emotional drama, but the emotional flow of this book is really not big. In the end, I have to praise the author's control. He did not change the rhythm of the plot just because of the evaluation. The rhythm has always been very orderly in my opinion, as someone who has subscribed and read through it in the past few days to catch up to the middle of the dragon chapter. Amon's character has not collapsed. Although there are many twists and turns, it becomes reasonable again when I think that this boy is Amon. . . Lu Mingfei's transformation is gratifying and reasonable. Xiao Yan's mental fusion is indeed regrettable but I have to admit that readers will indeed foresee that day, because Xiao Yan faces Amon (;´Д｀). The scenes between the Soul Emperor and the Soul Palace are really well added. The Soul Emperor is established and established. In the Douluo chapter, Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue became gods completely, which is also a wish fulfilled (^^) In the beginning of the dragon chapter, Brother Mengzi collected Xia Mi brother and sister, and the two copies of Naga and Quetzalcoatl were really developed steadily. I hope that the author can maintain the rhythm of the early stage of the dragon chapter through the end of the dragon chapter and the new world. And: Congratulations to Concubine Ming for no longer having an unrequited love for her senior sister. She is free to be swept away by Senior Brother Amon. Congratulations! Congratulations! (^з^)-☆ It is recommended that all book friends take the full time to read it in one go. Only by reading it in one go will you feel comfortable and free from the depression and irritability of broken chapters. (I read this with Amon as the protagonist. Thank you to the author for controlling Meng Zizi so accurately. Every arrangement of the brainpower online did not fail. In the end, I harvested the loot and left. I couldn't be more confused. Thank you to the author for contributing to the wonderful plot development of Amon that does not collapse. D(^_^o) The explanation of the identity of Meng and the time traveler was a bit rough in the beginning, but later on, the soul combination between Meng and the original time traveler was almost as mysterious as Meng. During the process of reading the book, I regarded the protagonist Meng as having a little bit of humanity or understanding. Human nature, nature and secrets are vague and purposeful. Self-interest is pretty much the same. It's a bit of a time traveler's memory. It's only reasonable that what you do next is really Amon's doing. New book friends don't have to worry too much about Meng. Brother's humanity is still a time traveler. If this person's spirit is Amon's work style and logic is Amon's, his ability is Amon's and his appearance is Amon, then he is Amon (Happy Come on, author👏 Looking forward to finishing the book (>^ω^<)

This is the most Amon-like one I've seen written. Except for the lack of some weirdness, Amon's use of mysterious abilities becomes more and more monotonous later on. In the new world and the old Amon, Amon's abilities need to be diversified. I estimate that when the mysterious Amon comes, he will be awarded an Oscar. Although it's not that exciting. But from a certain perspective, the whole book is enjoyable. After all, telling a story is all part of Amon's plan. If A Mou's plan was turned into a short incident, it would be so exciting.

I still plan to wait for the dragon chapter. I don't know what will happen before I write the ending. If I buy too many chapters and end up with Amon swallowing Lu Mingfei, it will be a big loss.

The main point of watching Douluo fandom is to watch the protagonist torture Tang San. The original plot is not very attractive (at least I think so, after all, the original work is very dry). It seems quite boring at the moment. There are very few places where Amon takes action. Although Amon's abilities are secret and weird, the descriptions are really too little and too bland. I watched it because of the mysterious gimmick. I just want to see Amon torture the God King of Tang. I hope to have more interactions with Tang San and others in the future to create some conflicts.

It's a pity that the only supporting role in Douluo that was acceptable in the end was Yan Jin, and even her younger brother was not good. I felt that her sister was dead and she immediately rebelled. Finally, when I realized that the protagonist's plan was successful, he was worthy of being Mr. Amon. I felt that he was capricious. In the end, Yu Xiao just entered the divine world. I don't want to comment, I can only I personally don't like this character, and I have a lot of opinions about him. After reading the beginning of "Dou Po Chapter", I felt that I was too flattering to Xiao Yan. To be honest, I feel that this character is just like Tang San, and then there is a clone dressed as Xiao Yan's maid. I can understand the protagonist, but I feel that this kind of scene has a poor viewing experience. So I really can't stand the fighting chapter. Overall, the flaws outweigh the merits. Except for the last point, Douluo can be said to be very exciting. I wish you write better and better in the future.

666, even your own apprentice is parasitic, you Amon has pure blood.

Xiao Yan's character was okay when he was a child. Those who said that Xiao Yan relied on his talent and arrogance to look down on others when he was a child, so he was criticized after losing his talent, are all fan fictions. Payne here thinks that Xiao Yan treats their servants as gently and as before (this is under the premise that they don't know that Xiao Yan's talent has been restored), and even feels sorry for Xiao Yan's loss of talent. Xiao Yan Losing his talent and being ridiculed is a must-have characteristic of a potato protagonist. Lin Dong was ridiculed and bullied by his tribe, and Yuan Zun turned into a satirist; Your book is the best Douluo fan I have ever seen. I have always praised and recommended this book in post bars and other book review sections. What I like most about this book is that it restores the original character, whether it is an enemy or not. I hope the same is true for Douban Chapter. I personally think that Xiao Yan has some shortcomings in the early stage. After a series of growth, he is decisive in killing, taking soft rather than hard, and attaches great importance to kindness. Also, his intelligence has been certified by Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. Talents such as learning ability, creativity, fighting talent, and ability to break situations and seize opportunities basically belong to the ceiling of the Dou Qi continent, but his physical talent is average

How do you post Amon's monocle expression?

To be honest, Gou Sanjia is still not suitable as a martial spirit for Douluo fans who write about the Lord of Mysteries. The most suitable one is actually the Dragon of Fantasy of the audience.

Damn it, the little medical fairy has no background and relies on his own cultivation, and he still talks about friendship. The ending was not good in the first place, and why did you kill him?

Please follow up and read, please everyone🙏🏻. The number of follow-up readings determines whether there is a recommendation spot.

Douluo is well written, but the fighting spirit is out of place. After all, Xiao Yan is a decent protagonist, famous enough, and always has a status in the hearts of book friends, but Amon is a behind-the-scenes conspiracy person. Whether he is an enemy or a friend, it is a conflict that is difficult to reconcile. To write it well, you probably have to write a copy of your own world. I suggest writing a new book, a version with weakened abilities, about the world view of film and television. There is enough material, and most of the main and supporting characters are not likeable, so you can just mess with it.

It's so amazing. It's the first time I've seen a fan novel that instead of forcibly reducing the intelligence of the original characters, it actually increases their intelligence. I can only say that the average IQ of Douluo World is really worrying. The author can't continue writing without adding some intelligence to them. Otherwise, if they still have the same intelligence level as the original novel, Amon will kill them casually.

Late at night in Fuyuki City, an unknown ritual is going on. Holy Grail War... It is rumored that the omnipotent cup can grant any wish, and can even lead to the "root". The seven participants in this war control their followers as "masters", and the winner will receive the wishing machine. "Bang!!" "Ahem..." Webber Velvet, a student of the Clock Tower, personally intervened in this war for some special reasons. The diffuse smoke and dust were dissipating, and the shadows in it also made him breathe a sigh of relief. 'The summoning ceremony of the Servant was indeed successful. ' 'I just don't know which heroic spirit it is...' "Are you my master?" When he saw the face of the person in front of him clearly, he looked a little dull. The visitor has short, slightly curly black hair, a wide forehead, thin cheeks, and a monocle. He looks gentle. "Yes" responded nervously, and Weber was trembling inexplicably. "This is... Japan?" Without paying too much attention to Weber's reaction, he looked back at the surrounding environment. From the high platform, he could even see the beautiful night view of the city. "Eh?" Hearing the other party's words, Weber was stunned for a moment. Although the servant was a hero in history, it was strange that he could be recognized so quickly even with the knowledge he had been instilled. "Nothing, let me introduce you." "Occupation is Caster" "My name is Amon" Amon stroked his monocle and smiled softly.

Does the Thief's Ninth Soul Ring need a ritual to become a god? Does Tang San's divine examination count as a ritual? If so, can the divine status be passed on?

Name: Amon Gender: Male? Occupation: Assassin/Magician (Caster) Attributes: Chaos·Evil Characteristics: Last King, Tyrant, Blasphemer, Demon from Beyond ———————————— Inherent Skills Scammer: C- A soul skill derived from a two-thousand-year-old blackmail beast. Slows down the thinking of targets within 50 meters. If the opponent's mental power is far greater than yours, the impact will be very limited. Decryption Scholar: B- Originated from a thousand-year-old eyeless snake. Enhance perception, gain insight into weaknesses, predict the skills the target will use in one second, and gain insight into the effects of this soul skill. (Ps: Clairvoyance) Fire Thief: B+(EX) Originated from a ten-thousand-year-old soul dementor. Steal a soul skill from the opponent. You can only steal one and can only use it once. It will be automatically returned after 24 hours, and you can only steal it once in 24 hours. The characteristics of Amon's martial spirit are EX. Dream Stealer: A- From Adam's friend the Mermaid Princess. You can read what the other person is thinking, but you cannot read the memory. Destiny Trojan: EX Originated from the auspicious imperial beast - the three-eyed golden lion It can steal fate and make the other party unlucky, losing touch with reality and dying bit by bit. Parasite: A++ Origined from the blood-red nine-headed bat king in the killing city. Can steal life, steal body parts, vitality, soul bones, martial souls, and even souls of living things. ———————————— Class Skills Stealer: A- Improve the control of the body and the control of soul power. Stealing the expressive power of martial souls, soul skills, and soul bones, making them imperceptible. ———————————— Noble Phantasm: Gate across the World: EX Abandon your past and pursue that higher status. Effect: All abilities are temporarily lost, opening the door to a new world. Character details: The soul of the traveler took Amon's clone and traveled again. The original body was dead, but it was revitalized by the soul of the outsider and embarked on an unknown journey. Bond Story 1: The red-haired girl touched Amon's wallet and stole Amon's money. This is the first meeting between Amon and Yanjin.

First of all, the character writing is very good and the degree of restoration is very high. Secondly, the author is probably dead and it is easy to think of high blood pressure plots. Obviously Xiaoyan is the next Yanyan, and he will definitely have to pay a price later on, but if it is not written, it is not there. After reading it for so long, it is written that the protagonist has been paying for Xiaoyan, and Xiaoyan has not even given any subjective reward to "Amon". Yan Jin at least has good things. She really wants to give back to Amon. Whether she can use them is another matter. Such a description, at least in my opinion, is too unbalanced. The so-called price is like a carrot hanging in front of the donkey. After paying and paying, how long will it be delayed? As a bookkeeper, I am impatient. I don't dare to think what it would be like if I just followed it.

Suddenly I want to see what it would be like for those in the Black Church to suddenly find that the people around them wear monocles? Looking at those aristocratic families and seeing the people around them wearing monocles made Amon perform the blasphemous feat again

I couldn't stand it when I saw Dou Po Xun'er die. My friend told me that everyone was still alive in the end, which was a perfect ending, but I couldn't accept it! Treat Xiao Yan as a Japanese! Tang San didn't even get this treatment! All the hard work is on Xiao Yan! How disgusting! Disgusting! ! Nausea! ! Douluo also emphasized that he was not that Amon, but Dou Po stopped pretending! Do you really think that everyone likes to see Amon, that disgusting person who makes noises and dies? Fuck you! I spent dozens of dollars for nothing! ! I will never read another book by this author again! Purely disgusting people 😡😡😡😡

The protagonist has changed from Amon to Xiao Yan, right? Amon is actually a golden finger who gives gifts to girls

Name: Yan Jing Gender: Female Occupation: Berserker Attribute: Chaos·Good Characteristics: Humanoid, a person living in the present, dragon nature ———————————— Inherent Skills: Martial Soul Shaping: C- Originated from a century-old flame slime. You can freely control the shape of magma, enhance your control over the martial spirit, and consume less. Temperature adjustment: B- Originated from a three thousand year old mutant Fluid Lizard. Ambient temperature can be adjusted. Thermal energy blocking: A- Originated from a 13,000-year-old Yanwang dragon. Can control the flame to burn the target she wants to burn without harming others. Lava Giant Soldier: B+ Self-created soul skills. Transform into a huge lava giant and cause huge damage to the enemy. Consumption is large. Shen Shen: EX Original from the Red Lotus Orochi. Resurrect the corpse to have the same strength as before. ———————————— Job skills: Three heads and six arms: A Originated from the soul skill of the Red King. Strengthen yourself and increase the temperature of the magma. Elementalization: A+ The weapon soul's true body Immune to physical attacks. When faced with energy attacks, it can consume soul power to offset them. Quick recovery: EX Original from the ability brought by the left arm bone of the Ten Thousand Demon King. Absorb the vitality of surrounding creatures, store it, and release it when necessary to heal yourself. ———————————— Noble Phantasm: Dragon Transformation: EX Ability derived from Ditian's torso bone. Type: Noble Phantasm on oneself Effect: Transform oneself into a dragon body. Tianyu Zhenxing: EX Derived from the skull of Tianmeng Ice Silkworm. Type: Anti-army Noble Phantasm Effect: Lock on the meteorite outside the planet and throw it at the opponent. Stealing: B+ Yanjin once stole the gold soul coin of the God of Thieves. Type: Anti-personnel Noble Phantasm Effect: Steal the opponent's wealth.

Dragons is a bit slow, but it could actually progress faster or have more plot in one chapter. The author's description is good and has improved a lot, but readers who follow the update will still be anxious It was relatively slow for Amon to finish harvesting Star Maria and then take Xinjirifu on the car. Shouldn't it be said that after finishing Star Maria, Amon's evolution was very enjoyable. The layout of some places before the start of Japan was also relatively slow? Of course, the rhythm of the first few chapters is still good; after finishing the world restart, the chapters also feel slow. My personal experience is that readers who read the book in one sitting may find it smoother, but readers who follow the update may find it a bit slow. Therefore, in the recent update, the author may consider reducing the description of the original novel and then release the exciting parts in one go. Slow down can be appropriately slow, and seven or eight chapters of foreshadowing can also be used, but it is best if the twist is pleasant and predictable. Because from personal experience, there is too much foreshadowing, and the breath of chasing after the update is blocked and cannot be released, which destroys the flow of reading The author feels that a lot of effort has been put into Dragon Clan and new characters have been added to stir up the world line. See I really admired the part where Naga fights Odin, and the original plot of the exploration team looking for Quetzalcoatl is also remarkable, so I am also looking forward to the ending of the dragon chapter, and the clues about the old Taoist priest and the sword at the beginning can be put on the series schedule. It is said that Amon's blood is scattered everywhere and many people are chasing it. I feel that it has a great impact. However, in the subsequent chapters, apart from the effects of the extraordinary aggregation law and the evolution of the feathered serpent Naga due to the divine blood, the impact of the divine blood is not seen in other places (for example, Herzog did not collect the divine blood? Xia Mi did it). During the serialization period, it is inevitable that there will be clues or foreshadowings that are not well wrapped up, but if the author wants to revise it later, you can also consider this suggestion I have a guess: Maybe the author thought about writing the scene of selling divine blood in the auction house, but finally deleted this line or put it later because of the advancement of the plot; in fact, from the beginning of Dragon Clan, the timeline is set a few years before Lu Mingfei went to Kassel, and you can feel the author's ambition to try. Slow layout (Speaking of which, the slow layout of this volume is similar to 0-08 of the Mysterious Tinggen chapter. The cool thing is that when the final battle begins and the clues are written in series, it is particularly exciting. The disadvantage is that the clues in the early layout may be easily obscured; when However, my personal favorite of Amon's techniques in this series is that Amon's formation in this volume even tore up the Sky List.) In the dragon clan, Amon restarted and slowly upgraded the game, returning to a writing style and layout similar to Douluo, but this time he walked in front of the protagonist and acted as a very positive guide. Unknowingly, I have said a lot, and I am also looking forward to the ending of the Dragon Clan Chapter. I also rewarded all the monthly tickets I got for the recent updates. I personally think this is a rare masterpiece among Amon fans. I also very much hope that the author can continue to maintain his own pace and slowly improve, and look forward to the completion of the book (⁠/⁠^⁠-⁠^⁠(⁠^⁠ ⁠^⁠*⁠)⁠/

By the way, the Time Insect didn't have the characteristics of the Star Insect at the beginning. Didn't it have the ability to access the doorway later? Used to travel to other worlds? There is a Space Insect in Douluo Four, a god-level creature with space attributes, the guardian of the space element in the God Realm, and the sister of the God of Space. I don't remember where she is. She is a unique soul bone that is very suitable for the path. Sequence Four Parasites, there is a nine-headed blood-red bat king in the Killing City, the one who parasitized Tang Chen to replace him, but he can parasitize a ninety-ninth-level peerless Douluo, and now Amon is afraid that he can't do it. For Sequence Three to deceive the instructor, I can only think of Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, who lay there for millions of years without being discovered by Heavenly Punishment, and the Ice Silkworm's initial soul skill was simulation, which is very similar to deception. Sequence Two Destiny Trojan can only contact the third eye of the Emperor's auspicious beast. Dou Er has fifteen thousand years, and now Dou Yi has five thousand years, so the golden dragon bloodline and golden dragon spear can be given to Yan Jin. The Insect of Time, the only soul beast related to time in Douluo is the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger, which is more than 60,000 years old.

The author is great. I searched in the Qidian search and found that the monthly votes for your novel this month ranked third among Douluo fan fiction. Your monthly votes for this novel this month are 450+, second only to "Douluo Villain Simulator, Beginning of the Persecution of Qian Renxue" with 760+, and "Douluo: Peerless Angel Glory" with 650+, ranking third, which is higher than the monthly votes of several high-quality Douluo fan fiction. You may not understand the value of such an achievement, so let me, an old reader of Qidian, tell you about it. Let me tell you this, Douluo fanfics, as a major category of Qidian fan fiction, can be said to occupy half of the Qidian fan fiction. There are many potential readers who read Douluo fanfics. According to the search data, there are many high-quality Douluo fanfics, and there are many high-quality Douluo fanfics. This shows that there is a market for Douluo fanfics. Therefore, if you write well, author, there will be bread and milk. Author, I would like to criticize you. Your updates are too outrageous, 4,000+ per day. Do you want to provide for your retirement with updates like this? If you want good grades, then update more! Five thousand or six thousand is never too little, seven thousand or eight thousand is never too much, ten thousand is never too much! The more updates you make, the more money you make! You have satisfied our readers, and our readers will not let you down. There are monthly passes and subscriptions. I would also like to remind the author that you should never be a eunuch. As long as you want to eat from the author, eunuchs are very harmful to your character. Therefore, the author writes well. Even if the results of this novel are not good, if you raise your author account and open a new book for the next novel, we old readers will support you.

(I understand it from a personal perspective, everyone will forgive me) The writing is very good, I shouldn't stop like this. I was attracted by the IP of Amon at first, and stopped because of the clear logic and good writing style. From the Douluo volume to the Dragon Tribe volume, (sorry I didn't order all of them), I looked forward to the integration of Amon and the original works. During this period, I have been touched by the author's plots, I have been moved by the original or self-created characters, and I have been attracted by the vivid narrative. I really started looking forward to the new world more and more, looking forward to the novel changes brought about by this vivid Amon, and looking forward to the ending after returning to the Lord of Mysteries. When I saw the news that everyone said it was going to end, I was reluctant to give up for a while. If it just stopped like this, would it be a little too anxious? I don't know how many book friends like me who just read books have this kind of reluctance. Maybe many people just don't comment, but have been looking forward to Amon's story? (Subjectively, I don't mean moral kidnapping, but I do have some feelings. The two-year process, a journey, and several stories are neither long nor short, but they just add some expectations and reveries to my two years of ordinary life in reality. For me, good stories can expand this ordinary life of mine. No matter how it is expressed, it can always give people different feelings.) 😐 (I only express my own feelings. If it has any impact, please tell me and I will change or delete it.) Below are some screenshots of monthly tickets that prove my pursuit of reading.

It's pretty good, the writing is pretty good (except for the first few chapters). I watched it once before and couldn't stand it, but after watching it the second time, I fully ordered it. The foreshadowing and big scenes are written very well and the logic is self-consistent. Come on, write well. Maintain this level.

When you express your opinions, please pay attention to your wording, use civilized language, and create a harmonious atmosphere, especially when responding to other readers' comments. If I see any insulting words, I will delete them directly. ٩(*´◒`*)۶

I really want to know how everyone felt when they saw Xiao Yan die.