In Panlong, I Have a Plane Prison from the Start!

The author accepted the protagonist's cheats and let the protagonist return to the state of a master-servant contract. I want to see how the protagonist, who does not rely on luck or cheats, but only relies on his own efforts, hard work, perseverance and perseverance to face difficulties, solves difficulties and reaches the top step by step. Don't just talk but don't do anything, show us a demonstration😄!

Just cut it, I can't stand the three chapters.

First of all, I am the author of this book. It is my first time to write a book and I have no experience at all. Please forgive me for the bad writing! Secondly, some friends said there was something wrong with my sentence segmentation, so I will correct it here chapter by chapter. Some friends also said that my writing was rubbish and ugly. I am sorry that my poor work has stained your eyes. Please turn it off yourself and don't look at it. Some people say that the water I wrote is not clear in expression. Sorry, I'm just an amateur, not a full-time writer. I can't write the story you want to see. I have my own main job. I wrote this book just to fulfill my dream. I don't expect it to make any money. Of course, if you can make money, that would be even better! From beginning to end, it has 60,000 words, and I have never asked for a recommendation for collection. I suddenly received a monthly ticket today. Whether you are a real person or a computer, I am very grateful to you. Thank you!

The incredible golden finger, the useless protagonist. After twenty years of meditating on the laws, even if you don't practice fighting spirit, you will naturally become a saint. And the protagonist is just entering the law and some bullshit pseudo-sanctuary? ? Please be more reasonable in limiting the protagonist. The protagonist with golden fingers is incomparable to the original Lin Lei. If the law space were given to Lin Lei, he would probably be a mid-level god with a five-star demon level.

I was looking forward to it at first. After seeing the background of the incident, I read it patiently. It was a bit verbose, but there was nothing wrong with it at the beginning. But everything about Ni Ma was introduced until it was clear. I really couldn't grasp the point. You have to introduce a fight and you have to introduce an object. You have to introduce a story. It slipped away. If you can't grasp the point of the novel, it is nonsense.

The progress is too slow. The original detailed descriptions are nothing in Panlong. A Nixiecao has written more than 50 chapters. How many words are you going to write for this book?

Fire 🔥 + light + life = ☀️, the three laws of soul mutation are completely integrated and evolved into the supreme god of the sun 🤓

The author's beginning attracted me, but I feel that this writing style may need to be improved. Everything is rambled on, and I feel that the key point is not written. I hope the author can work harder 😡😡😡

First of all, I personally like Panlong fanfics very much. I have watched many Panlong fanfics. I am very happy to see more and more Panlong fanfics. Then, I want to say that the author actually writes very well, but it makes me feel out of touch. For example, the blood-reverse grass is too outrageous. Of course, there may be such things in the original work, but it is definitely not possible to have so many, or it is impossible to be particularly effective. Although the fandom will inevitably contain second creations, as a fanfiction, you still have to create based on the original work. After that, for example, if the name of the main god is known by an ordinary sanctuary, it feels unreasonable to me. Finally, I wish the author better and better as he writes more.

Why isn't it updated? Going in?