Online Games: Rebirth of Unparalleled Supreme

There are currently 25 chapters. It's a bit of a renaissance. I feel it's okay. There's nothing special about it. But I hope this kind of article doesn't always use equipment data to fill the word count, especially for the same equipment. I just looked at the character panel and lost a third of the content in one chapter. So keep up the good work. There are so few articles like this these days.

Supports online games. I can't stand being an NPC in a time-travel game and playing stand-alone.

What age are you still engaging in roommate friendship? Even if you play online games with your parents, sisters, and relatives, it will be better than roommates.

When it comes to the Renaissance, you have to at least be realistic. Why are you still following the same old routine from twenty years ago, and you really don't want to change it at all? The big pitfalls that have been the focus of attention for a long time have been stepped on in turn. After reading the first few chapters, there are no poisonous points that should be found in old online games. If you don't know how to write a plot, you still don't know how to c? Is it possible to find an old online game book and fill it in with the mold? Fighting will not be written in your c martial arts novel, suspense will not be written in your c detective novel, union battle will not be written in your c war novel, and heroine will not be written in your c urban romance novel. Practice more dialogue, write less psychological description, write more environment to set off the plot, and write less witty dialogue of the villain. Is it that difficult?

Let's take a look

Real men should not hesitate to choose games when faced with games and women.

Online games must have a lot of girls to have that flavor.

Who can read your updates? At least 10,000 words, 10,000 words a day! 🙂

A reborn person gives all the money he earns to his roommate for safekeeping, and keeps some copper coins on his body. In your last life, you were stripped of all your equipment by the guild, and you are very disheartened. How can you still have such a big weakness after rebirth?

Overall, it's okay. It's said to be dual-career but actually it's dual-role. It's too fragmented. It's impossible to talk about what to fight in the future and then switch roles and fight again. The roommate problem is that I am a good brother but not a nanny. I am very happy to be taken care of by my brother, but it is useless for me to be taken care of all the time. Do people have no self-esteem? Everyone has opportunities. Isn't this kind of game world more interesting if everyone has everyone's story? You can grind monsters and dungeons every day, and finish playing during the day and play at night. Real life is just going to bars and all that shit

Why are there still people who are not satisfied when you have already used the word count to make up for the gaps in the data? Such people are just too greedy. Authors should write well and don't listen to them. The data in your book is not extremely bad. You need readers' suggestions to change your writing style. Sometimes authors have to stick to their own ideas.

Eastern players were born in the Kingdom of Sword and Magic. Is this acceptable? Western players come to the East to cultivate immortality? ?

You have dual careers, so you have to open a new account and upgrade again?

It lacks a sense of immersion. Other online game novels at least make it feel like you are playing a game yourself. You don't feel that you are playing by yourself at all, you just feel that you are cheating.

There are only male protagonists and male supporting roles. I didn't dare to click on it for fear of male ketosis.

Is the game just a game, reality will not become stronger?

Some readers feel that the introduction of equipment is a bit watery, and emmmmm it is true. However, I only come up with it when I need to update equipment or the plot (actually, the time it takes me to calculate the data is not as easy as updating a few hundred words) Also, in order to make it comfortable for everyone and not feel short and weak~~ I will update the chapter introducing the equipment panel by a few hundred words to make up for it. After all, some plots do need to shake out the panel to see. Everyone can understand it, right😌😌

It's a very good book, the writing is smooth, and it's refreshing. I just don't want it to become a fantasy book later on. A game is a game. Become stronger by yourself, and by the way, make your friends and family stronger. Another goal

I can't watch the first chapter, Dragon Kingdom Magic? Western fairy? This setting is really cool