You're Just a Bad Gamer, and yet You've Become an Immortal?

It combines the essence of online game novels from twenty years ago. Eating this history is equivalent to eating a public toilet.

Fight a BOSS and the protagonist's output is 98%, and the other four people will do soy sauce, and then the dropped items will be divided equally. The game currency shared by one person will be converted into real world money, which is more than one million. Then the protagonist's father's company needs money, and he transfers 300,000 to his father. I am thinking that you can give more than one million to a few strangers who have known each other for two days. This is all for my family, and I am so filial.

At that time, online game writing was overwhelmingly dominated by immortals and fantasy, forcing online game authors to transform. Unexpectedly, the post-modern renaissance also created online games to cultivate immortality. The writing is interesting. Please read it.

It is our duty to rebuild the glory of virtual online games! The online literary battle that year was between fantasy immortals and virtual online games, with the final score being 18-3. At that time, I saw the great writers of online games slumped in their chairs, crying and transforming one after another. This scene is something I will never forget. At that moment I was thinking, if I could become a professional writer, I would win them all. Now that the Renaissance is just around the corner, I must consider whether this will be my only chance in this life. I believe that virtual online games can have the hegemony they had in the past, and the great writers of ancient online games must have contributed a lot. It is our duty to rebuild the glory of virtual online games! (In the past, I couldn't read a single online game article for several months, but now I read several online game articles. Do you want the winner to take all?)

As one of the few online game articles, no matter how unreasonable it is before leaving Novice Village, I support the author to continue to persevere. But But But In the early stage, the protagonist still had his own thoughts or principles. To put it simply, he was still a person However after leaving the novice village, he was led by two NPCs throughout the whole process. Without his own soul, it was like he had been taken away. He could do whatever the NPC told him to do, and spend tens of millions on a meal? What's the point? Pretending? Which brother who is too poor to afford a 180,000 helmet spends tens of millions to show off? So everyone looks weird, they don't understand what the protagonist is doing, they don't match up with each other, and their real strength is taken away! ! ! Then how can I continue to read on my behalf? How dare you, an NPC, dare to gibberish while I play a game? A saint who dares to show his health bar dares to stab him twice! The chickens in Ximu Town are an example! This is you, the player who is new to the game. If you want to change reality and cultivate immortality, you must slowly guide the protagonist's thoughts step by step. You have written two very different characters, what is it if you don't have your body taken away? Of course, this only represents my own point of view. If I am wrong, I apologize in advance🙏

I suggest changing the name to "The Great Battle of Online Games"🐶

Author, please go to Baidu and there is a book called "Cultivators Play Online Games". The writing of this book written more than 20 years ago doesn't talk about anything, just the setting is better than yours.

I couldn't stand the first picture, and I had to buy a new helmet for a broken game. This is the first time I heard that to play games, you need to buy a new computer to play a new game. What's even more embarrassing is that if you want to buy one, you can't buy it. Not to mention that the price of a computer is over 100,000 yuan.

The protagonist's talent is too rubbish. As a magician, the talent is to consume ten times the energy and then cause real damage to the enemy equal to his own health after the energy is consumed. . . How many lives can you, a squishy Dharma cultivator, have? Not to mention the mobs that generally have higher health than most physical cultivators, the boss has dozens of times the HP of a physical cultivator and hundreds or thousands of times as much as you, a magic cultivator, even if you take it to PK. . . It can also be a bit of a deterrent to squishy professions such as magic cultivators, but nm has to use up his own energy to passively use this move. . . All I can say is that it's really useless.

The NPCs themselves have taken the initiative to say not to treat the game as a game, which is an OOC behavior. Please don't write the protagonist like a fool and ignore such obvious evidence. It's too cliché and noob.

Daily Guide to Drugs, when I read the book reviews, book friends sharply pointed out the poisonous points, and I didn't want to read it anymore. They recommended these garbage books to me, and I took it. Really, this author's mind is not that of online games from 20 years ago. . . This is not an AI article. There is no progress at all in writing.

A few books that I have been reading recently were released as soon as they were put on the shelves, which made me angry. It's not that I feel sorry for the subscription money, it's just that I feel uncomfortable with their attitude towards writing. After they were put on the shelves, I feel that they are definitely not ideal at first, no! Oh my god, how can one book make you rich instantly? Moreover, the results of those books are not bad, and they all have hundreds of first orders. It is very easy to earn thousands of dollars a month by writing steadily. I don't know what they are doing. If you are not confident, don't put it on the shelves. I even put it on the shelves to test it out, and it turns out that it is as expected, and people are gone immediately. Isn't this just a loss of jobs for us all? I'm not sure what the score of my book will be, but here's my attitude: It's absolutely impossible to be a eunuch. Even if I didn't go to Sanjiang, I should have exploded, and I should have ten thousand words or ten thousand words. I'm already stocking up on manuscripts. Although I haven't stocked much because I was on a business trip before, I'm still working hard on writing. In short, I'll make it as comfortable as possible for everyone to read, and there won't be a situation where I read half of the book. The saved manuscript is shown below. I will update it at this time tomorrow night. Since I have to go to work during the working day, I am not sure, but I will definitely update the manuscript every day. When it is put on the shelves, it will give you a lot of fun.

I was thinking about buying a helmet at the beginning until it was almost on the shelves. The game time should not last more than a month. He transformed from a poor loser into a strategizing master. This change in personality is too sudden. I know that many authors want to write about the character growth of the protagonist, but it's really bad if they can't write it well. Chapter 1 starts with rescuing the broken girl, and then focuses on writing a hotel companion. I really don't understand whether this plot is really necessary? Difficult to stretch. It's better to be a diaosi, be selfish to the end, and pull characters out to engage in brotherhood, online friendship, and school friendship. It makes me feel like I'm dreaming back to the 10-year online gaming era. Also, the way the heroine appears makes readers always think that she is the heroine. As a result, I couldn't figure out whether the heroine or the supporting character was the heroine. These are small things. I just wonder if the female version will be even stronger in a decade or so if the female version is so strong now. As a result, the writing was all silly and sweet, with no sense of expectation. I felt it was better not to write and just write more about the game. It can be seen that the author wrote this book very seriously, and it is actually quite good.

Trash online game novels from 20 years ago basically had all the poisonous points.

The protagonist is about to leave the novice village, and the work is about to release a new book issue. Monthly tickets for the new book issue have a great influence on the ranking. Dear readers, the little author is asking you for some monthly tickets. Thank you~~ (There may be some news about the work that I haven't seen, so you can leave a message below. I will read the comments on this post every day)

The author's idea, retro setting, retro is fine, but you don't even need to be retro in your writing, it really hurts my head to see it.

After reading Chapter 54, most of them are quite interesting, and I think I will continue to follow them. But there are a few places I want to talk about. The first one is the one who sold the woman's Qi and Blood Pill twice for 4.5. The second one is the NPC who forcibly sells the protagonist's boss drops. The third one is when the protagonist leads a few people to fight the boss. The protagonist's main output is a woman's shield, and two are pendants. The boss's drops also require so many spiritual coins to be distributed to teammates. I won't say whether these three points are correct or not, but I'll just talk about how I feel when I look at them. I feel a little uncomfortable.

I feel like there's something wrong with the economic system. How can a helmet worth hundreds of thousands apiece support tens of millions of players? Even if so many players are gathered? The exchange rate of spirit coins is too high. Compared with game currency exchange, it is mainly Fu Ge who pays for it. So many players can exchange it for cash. Does Fu Ge all play krypton gold in units of 100 million? If it is against the background of currency depreciation, daily living expenses are extremely cheap. High-quality suites only cost 1,800 a day? 5 Spirit coins? Ordinary players can stay in the presidential suite after playing the game for two hours

Master Fa, who has the talent of magic body cultivation, uses a bunch of sword cultivation skills. As he asked the dog to give up his ranking, he turned around and grabbed the boss of the big company Give a profit of 1 million to a passerby and 300,000 to his father... I can't do it anymore, help me, I really can't do it anymore

One chapter a day is what you call a large amount of food. You have to be at least half as powerful as Suicune to say that.

It's poisonous at the beginning, it's too tacky and I can't afford to buy a helmet.

Does the author not know what the closed beta players do? When others publish some wild monster map information, the protagonist suspects that the other party is the mastermind. Newbie groups and first-level accounts cannot detect this information at all. There are also closed beta players who only knew how to play at the time and did not expect to collect this information... To be honest, most of the people who can be invited to participate in the closed beta are some high-level players and bloggers. When these people play a game, they must record information, explore the map, and then publish videos to attract fans and maintain traffic. The description in Chapter 10 is...

Why can't today's online games work without cheating? No technical skills? In the past, the mad thief also shot through the sky.

Starting from Chapter 143, this novel has collapsed. Why, the invincible mode is turned on as soon as the foundation is built? I don't know, I thought you wrote cool articles? The previous writing is quite satisfactory, but the kind that can be read, the latter is really...

The "hook" of the technical stream: using "reasonable advantages" to create "effort-based pleasure and the anticipation-based pleasure." The "hook" of the system stream: using "surreal advantages" to create "immediate pleasure and cathartic pleasure." Both are hanged, why are they different? The "hang" of the two is similar in the form of "non-traditional advantages", but the "hang" of the technical stream is the extension of capabilities within the rules, while the "hang" of the system stream is the granting of privileges outside the rules. This is their most essential difference. First of all, the novel is fiction: Technical flow is an extension based on the logic of reality. System flow is an extension based on the logic of destroying reality. But the existence of both is an inevitable choice for novels to "use fiction to satisfy readers' fantasy/feeling of pleasure". You may object. The person who may not be able to accept the technical flow is hanging. From a macro perspective, it is, but the writing method is different. How to choose between the two books? It is the book lover's own choice, and he cannot impose his own opinions on others. Everyone reads novels, ultimately, for various kinds of pleasure. Novels are novels after all, and they cannot bring reality into reality. For example. I want to read something with a bit of logic today. I want to see something with some technical skills tomorrow. The day after tomorrow I want to read some pure white texts. But what can we do? What can you do? We are discussing fiction, what is the use of talking about reality?

Beautiful, indeed a rare online game article

Has the way of writing online game articles not changed since Warcraft? It feels like it's just a change from a hoe to a golden hoe.

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The progress is too slow, and it's just not good enough. The plot changes in real life more than in online games. It feels a bit like an urban novel. It looks weird.

Fine ~ understand ~