The Legend of the Condor Heroes

The best Condor Shooting fanfic I have seen so far. If you don't steal Huang Rong, you won't be obsessed with semen. The protagonist is upright.

I've been thinking, why hasn't anyone written a novel about traveling through time and becoming a disciple of Peach Blossom Island, and then getting the Kunlun Liang Xiao template? Liang Xiao's martial arts style actually matches that of Huang Yaoshi's Peach Blossom Island

Is there any Peach Blossom Island martial arts comparable to the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon? Except for magical powers. Huang Yaoshi is as famous as Hong Qigong in the Five Arts. Although his other martial arts are top-notch, they pale in comparison to the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, which are practiced over time. Xidu's Toad Kung Fu, Zhong's magical innate skill, Nan Di's Yiyang Finger, Bei Bei's Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, Dong Xie Gui's many but too complicated, he just snaps his magical powers.

Huang Yaoshi is actually a bug in The Legend of the Condor Heroes. In The Legend of the Condor Heroes, he has been famous for many years. At the age of thirty, he created the five magical skills of Peach Blossom Island, and his internal strength is not weak. He is good at playing music, chess, calligraphy, painting, astronomy, geography, five elements, eight trigrams, Qimen Dunjia, and so on. He is amazingly talented and gorgeous! He also read the Nine Yin Manual, and even if he didn't practice it, he still knew the essence of the magical skills very well. As a result, he had no innovation and stagnated in the next fifty years. He spent his whole life on these five skills, and he was exhausted! The original work attributed it to the fact that he had learned too many tricks when he was young, but he had learned so many tricks when he was young. How could he innovate and create five special skills in one go, but then he made almost no achievements in a century? It doesn't make sense!

I couldn't help but say, save Ye Erniang, the reason is that I can't bear to play with maternal love, Ye Erniang has a shitty motherly love! She understands motherly love, and I think those mothers who lost their children wanted to cut her into pieces.

It's not that it's not good to tear down Guo Huang, the problem is that it has to fit the character. What Huang Rong likes about Guo Jing is his sincerity and simplicity. Huang Rong will never look down on a man who doesn't have this trait. And you know what the army of time travelers is, right? Does it have anything to do with sincerity and simplicity? It's good if he's not a stinky guy. Do you still want Huang Rong to like you?

This book feels more and more tasteless as you go to the back. It would be better for a time-traveler not to time-travel at all?

Basically it follows the plot of the original book. It makes no difference whether there is a song or not. It's just a waste of time to watch.

No, what are you doing traveling through Tianlong? Mo Chou doesn't care anymore? It can't be like this, what if you even re-open a new book? This is too casual. . . . . .

No one can beat Tianlong through time. It's still the same martial arts. Don't change your thinking and run to be tortured.

The writing style of this book is too classical. . . Classics are no longer available in online articles. The good thing is that it has the flavor of ancient martial arts and is a classic. The bad thing is that the writing style is old and increases the reading threshold. And when I read Chapter 11, I still felt that the protagonist's image was not distinct enough. It seems to be just a paper figure following the author's baton. It is very flat and has no vitality of its own. The dialogues between the characters in the novel are also very dry and uninteresting.

Fortunately, you are writing about Peach Blossom Descendants. When I saw the Tianlong chapter, the protagonist's pedantry didn't have the evil spirit of Huang Yaoshi, but it was full of Guo Jing's flavor.

The author's strength lies in his writing style, but his weakness lies in his outline. The protagonist's strength fluctuates up and down, and his actions are uncertain. The characters written by him, other than those from the original novel, are all too flat and untenable as long as they are written by the author himself.

Common problem! ! After traveling from the Condor to Tianlong, he can't even beat Duan Yanqing, but he always tries to lower the protagonist's strength.

There seems to be no difference between having a protagonist and not having one.

It would be better to just write about the indigenous people. If you use the indigenous characters, you can also add some plot of exploring the world. As a traditional martial arts protagonist, the progress of the protagonist who has the advantage of being a prophet is too fast. As a time traveler, his actions are too slow and ambiguous. In the end, both sides are not happy.

His behavior is no different from that of natives. It feels very rigid.

Hahaha. I read a comment. Made me laugh. It is said that the protagonist does not rob Huang Rong. Be honest. What a hatred. Such a stabbing attack

The writing is okay, but the plot... I guess it's probably not what these readers would like to read. Does a traveler need to follow the moral principles of the world to seek revenge? After so many years of using mononitrate, disulfide, and charcoal with some sugar, Da Yiwan must have avenged his revenge.

The protagonist looks nothing like a time traveler.

The author's writing style is good, but the writing method is too traditional and requires patience to read. It doesn't feel like an online novel at all. The protagonist has no adventures, but instead has bad luck along the way.

The main character is like a retard. . Unless the author has a golden finger, if ten chapters are missing, he will die five times.

A double-standard hero, he took the heroic route and went to the palace to steal things. He was found to have hit people hard and almost killed people. The Julang gang committed evil and killed many people. His mute servant did evil and spared the lives of others. He failed to be a good person and failed to be a bad person. If he is not good or bad, it is better to be a fun person. Don't give the protagonist so many inner dramas. It is difficult to imagine that a modern person can travel to the past and act chivalrously with a simple mind.

Unfortunately, there is no bright spot in the work. The protagonist has nothing to do with the time-travelers except for being labeled as a time-traveler. As a time-traveling protagonist, you don't have any golden fingers or strengths, and you don't have any modern knowledge or can't use it smoothly? After so many years of making a short flintlock gun, except for Wujue who might be able to dodge it if he was on guard, other people could not shoot one at a time at close range. If he couldn't stock up on some black powder to make an explosive pack, Wujue would have to kneel down. Even if the protagonist of this book is a time traveler who knows nothing, he still knows the plot of Jin Yong's novels, the Double Ninth Festival inscriptions in the ancient tombs, the treasures hidden in the Liancheng Jue ancient temple, the Pusqu Snake, the ruins of Lingjiu Palace, and the Knight Island. The author had to tie up all the hands, feet and brains of the protagonist in order to block the road to Jiuyang. Ta Ma could not have just written about the aboriginal people. The whole book is aggrieved. This is a fan! Do you know what doujin is?

It is a breath of fresh air in martial arts novels.

I can't watch it after reaching chapter 52. Did someone else write it?

The people here are all brainless and do not distinguish between ourselves and the enemy. Can't stand it anymore

Recommend yourself "I Have Three Hundred Lifespans of Time Traveling and Shooting the Condor"

Even dogs don't worship Huang Yaoshi. They first go to Shaolin to get Nine Yang, then go to Xiangyang to find snakes to practice Qigong, and then go to the ancient tomb to get Nine Yin

What subject matter are you planning to write for your next book?