Black Myth: Beginning as the Destined One

Let's just say that the writing is too frustrating. Reading a novel makes me feel so depressed. What are you doing? The protagonist rejected various big shots and wealthy businessmen in the first two pictures, but after returning to school in these two pictures, he was humiliated by a second-generation official or a second-generation rich man. This is such a contrast. Brother, I can't stand it anymore. I feel like a loser. I only made hundreds of thousands in the previous thing, and now I am being humiliated for a scholarship. To be honest with the plot, this part is a bit poisonous.

The author is really awesome. I think Black Myth Wukong hasn't even started yet, but you wrote it a year in advance. Oh my, I can only say that the author of Qidian is really awesome.

The emotional scenes are a bit toxic. Moreover, in the plot, I have superpowers, and you are the class monitor at the end of the day. You still bully me, and you won't give me the scholarship if you don't want it. This is basically 1.5 Million. Why do you still care about 90 pounds and let that Li Tianyi pretend to be cool? After you finish pretending, you can do the opposite.

When will you become the Monkey King?

Chapter 27: I feel like there is something wrong with my outlook on life. Do you understand the plot of Linghu Chong and Tian Boguang becoming friends?

Has the protagonist not seen a woman in 500 years?

Another point is that the Nineteenth Level of Hell is too weak. The Nineteenth Level of Hell can be written like this. It is a hell in itself. Anyone who walks in will have infinite dimension reduction, and once the door is opened, it will be similar to those great men in ancient times. They will come out of the long river of history and restore their original appearance. This is equivalent to all the evil spirits or warriors, gods, and demons in ancient times being sealed in the nineteen levels of hell and re-evolving. The world would have been consumed layer by layer and turned into new lives until reincarnation completely wiped them out. However, the new species they transformed into still exist in the long river of history, but because of the opening up of the world, they will be resurrected in the long river of history.

I have read more than forty chapters. I won't say much about the writing. Anyone with eyes can tell that he is a novice. There is a lot of room for improvement. He just needs to practice more. Character lines, supporting characters' intelligence (even the protagonist's intelligence has never been online), and plot conflicts (especially the haunted hotel plot around Chapter 40) are not big or small problems. How can I put it? It seems that there is no detailed outline ~ Especially the four roommates of the protagonist are too ink, and there are too many lines that have nothing to do with the plot. Emotions promote unhelpful interactions. Even if the identity of the four people is a foreshadowing, it is not presented like this... The plot conflict is that passerby A repeatedly questions the protagonist's ability, and then pretends to slap him in the face. The routine is okay, but the performance is too stiff. Then again, it is a common problem for novices, and it is not a big deal. It still needs more practice, more watching, and more learning. In general, the author is talented in this area, but lacks systematic training and learning. If he really wants to eat this rice, he still needs to work hard. I can't even open my eyes. That's all. I have to get up early to pass the second semester tomorrow. ಥ_ಥ

I think this novel can be written like this. Sun Wukong can be him, and so can he. It is Sun Wukong, but Sun Wukong is not him, and he is not Sun Wukong. It is similar to inheriting Sun Wukong's identity and power but not the original him. For example, he shuttles between modern times and the mythical era. Now it belongs to the end of the Dharma era but has a little rhythm of spiritual energy recovery. In this case, the worlds on both sides are abnormal, so it is easier to understand the relationship between them. , Transform each other, and perform a move of magical power to come, which is similar to the three-dimensional two-dimensional drop of the spiritual energy in the body into nothingness. The body instantly degenerates into the state of being uncultivated. Facing this move is like facing the five sorrows of heaven and man. When a person becomes an immortal, he also walks out of the shadow of Buddhism and walks out of his own roots. Those who learn from me will die, and those who follow me will live. This way of writing is interesting.

If others are dissatisfied, I will do what Qidian did.