
I'm in Perfect Control of Heaven's Punishment
我在完美掌天罚
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- 1.4M Words
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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The Immortal King beats the Immortal Emperor? No other novel is so out of line, right? Why are the comments so favorable? Are they all bastards?
I read the beginning and was very confused. You, a son of the Thunder Emperor, want to personally measure the genius of the lower world? You seem to be a bit funny, buddy.
At present, the protagonist has five kinds of ten evil treasures, namely Kunpeng method, Thunder Emperor method, Nine-leaf Sword and Grass sword method, God-beating stone method, Phoenix method. Currently, the extreme breakthrough cave heaven realm imitates Shi Hao's ten caves and heavens in one, the formation realm imitates Cao Yusheng's carving into a corner killing array, masters the six-path reincarnation heavenly art, and the five pure-blooded living arts such as Phoenix subordinate to Suzaku.
After reading Chapter 2, I have a feeling, the body of the Thunder Emperor's son? Kunpeng's lair resources? Mana immunity? Just this dish?
The Thunder Emperor's son was severely injured by the calamity.
What was written about the Thunder Emperor's parents and his son fighting the garbage from the lower world?
Today's authors love to give the protagonist some big background at the beginning, but then the protagonist writes like a beggar and has nothing to do with the background.
After reading the introduction, table of contents, and comments, I ran away!
I suggest the author re-read it to make it perfect before writing. What are you writing about? He is the parent and son of the Thunder Emperor. Even an ordinary person who studies the Thunder Emperor's method has higher qualifications than you. The part about overcoming the thunder tribulation is simply funny. The Thunder Emperor was born from the Thunder Pond, the owner of the Thunder Spirit, and his parents and children went to rob the Lei Pond. You wrote it so embarrassingly. I can't stand it anymore, bye.
There is no need for the descendants of the Ten Evils to pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, right? And it's just like pointing the thunder back and forth. I'm totally sorry for the Thunder Emperor.
It's better to be born as an ordinary person. Nowadays, novels often have a big background. Do these authors know how to be more comfortable? It's much more awesome for ordinary people to subdue other geniuses than you, the son of the Thunder Emperor.
Let me tell you my personal opinions about the original work
I have read the trilogy at least a dozen times. Let me talk about the Ten Fierce and the Immortal King first. Some people seem to have some misunderstandings about the Ten Fierce. They think that the Ten Fierce should be compared to the Immortal King. I think they have some misunderstandings about the Ten Fierce. However, the ten evils mentioned here are the real ten evils. They are the ten evils who get the real name. If you don't understand, you can think about the real dragon. Only the one who gets the real name is called the real dragon. The ancient Ten Evils were alone. When these Ten Evil parents gave birth to them, they must have given birth to more than one, but in the end only one got a real name. This can be thought of the parents of the Alicorn Ant. His father got the real name, so he can fight the Immortal King, but his mother is not as powerful as his father. And there are several brothers and sisters of the little Alicorn Ant, why can't they defeat He Wushuang, because they haven't got the real name yet, the real name is in His father, the later generation Little Alicorn Ant is strong, because he got his real name, and then let's talk about the fighting strength of the Ten Fierce, the quasi-immortal king can fight the Immortal King. In the entire trilogy, apart from the Ten Fierce, Chu Feng is the only one who has done it. Even Shi Hao has not done it, and was almost killed. Of course, Shi Hao is too anxious, and he can definitely do it. With such a talent, if you use the Immortal King as a benchmark, do you look down on the Ten Fierce? Let's talk about the descendants of the Immortal King. The original book describes how powerful the royal family of the foreign land is. I feel that when Shi Hao was young, he couldn't defeat the royal family of the foreign land. Is it true that he couldn't defeat it? You put them in the same environment and try to grow up. The descendants of the Immortal King are indeed strong, but their highest achievement is that of a true immortal, and their parents and children are also quasi-immortal kings. The descendants who are stronger than these are when the Immortal King is young. This can also be seen in the original work. Some royal families often say that they can rival the ancient ancestor when he was young. What does "shoulder" mean? There is no need to explain. What else is there to return to the ancestors? Why should we return to the ancestors? It is because the ancestors are the most powerful. In fact, this kind of thing is easy to understand. You can understand the immortal king as the great emperor who covers the sky. Their descendants are blessed by their ancestors, so they are naturally stronger than others, but they can be better than their ancestors. Ancestor, don't say that the younger generations are trapped by the immortal's Dharma and Tao. Then why can those seniors find their own way without Dharma and Tao? Why do those younger generations who have the Dharma and Tao of their predecessors have reference but still can't find their own way? He Wushuang and Mo Xian should be the best examples. He Wushuang is strong. Being a descendant of a foreign royal family, he can become an Immortal King. This is the best proof of the strength of the Immortal King and the descendants of the Immortal King when he was young. Moreover, He Wushuang became an Immortal King after more than an era, which is not amazing at all. Which of Shi Yi's ten crowns did not become an Immortal King in millions of years? Mo Xian was on par with the royal family, so he finally became a true immortal. Some people say that Shi Yi cannot defeat the royal family and treat Shi Hao as an ordinary person. He can make such outrageous remarks. I really advise him to read the original work several times.
I just read a novel that was free for a limited time. I opened it and saw that it was about the Thunder Emperor. I was ecstatic, but when I saw the main character's name was Lei Chong, I thought, why not call her Lei Bi? A bunch of answers
Shennong died. Hey, I can't stand it anymore.
Such a weak protagonist with almost no fighting scenes.
The protagonist was written as Long Aotian, which is a bit poisonous
Like a piece of shit, written like a piece of shit
I have a question, how come the Thunder Emperor's parents and children behave like ordinary geniuses?
I suddenly found that those who wrote about Perfect World fan fiction were much worse than those who wrote about Dou Po and Mortal Flow. It can be said that there is a huge difference. I used to make a lot of money writing about doujin Flow in the harem, followed by Dou Po. In Perfect World, I can't marry this one and I can't marry that one. It's a bit funny to think that they are all written in the same world. There are so many crappy things. The most taboo things among fandoms are licking the original protagonist and growing up with the main protagonist. It is better to read the original work, which is not attractive at all. The second is the behavior of giving women away. I have seen many perfect fanfics and it is very serious. This completely fails to capture the secret of the core traffic of fanfics, which is the traffic of female protagonists and beautiful women. The character configuration is the same and the positioning is the same. It is better to read the original work. Generally speaking, writing perfect fan fiction is really unattractive, but Dou Po and Mortal Really make a lot of money. Write, rewrite, rewrite and win the beauty, and make money easily.
The Fairy King's appearance is really not good at all. It's an inexplicable second design.
Damn it, it's inexplicable that I didn't remember a single bit of the original novel. He was a bit player for a long time and still called Tianhuang, but in the end he was persuaded to make peace. It's really disgusting. Who is he hooking up with? Is it worthy?
Why has the witch become a stranger? When you write it like this, don't be so ambiguous as before. Now she has become a stranger.
Dear book friends, if you think there are any gaps in the original work that have not been filled in, you can leave a message here and I will try my best to fill them in.
There is no description, it's all dry information, dry and tasteless. I might as well read the manual.
Watching this one might as well watch another one, The Perfect Ten Evils Reappear
Why. The Immortal King has the combat power of the Immortal Emperor
The novels written by this author are really dry.
I'm so bored that I keep describing the plot. The emotional lines are not described, and there are no flirty words. The dialogue between the characters is as stiff as a robot, just asking questions and answering questions. There are only a few sentences describing the character's psychology, and there is no exploration of the original setting or adding some alternative plot settings. It has almost 200 chapters. After a few chapters, the plot is just what the protagonist did, said a few NPC lines, and then described the fight and repeated the cycle It felt like I was watching an abbreviated version of the book, which is perfect. All I can say is that we are really out of food and grass. Let's take a look again.
Oh! This Heavenly Punishment is conscious, and the Heaven will be slaughtered today. Chen Dong's series usually follows this trend.
I don't understand why so many people criticize the setting of a fictional novel. In my opinion, Shuangwen is also a novel, but anyone who has studied Chinese knows that the three elements of a novel are characters, plot, and environment. As long as these are written well, it will be comfortable to read.
I'm not afraid of them in the first picture, but they keep talking about things. What the hell?
Mana immunity? ! Dharma = the law of the world = the law of the great road. Anyone with the word "dharma" or those who recognize it as "dharma" are immune! Force = the power of the Great Dao, the power of Pangu, the power of Newton, the four basic forces of the universe, the power of rules, etc. All words with force are immune, or motion, friction, perpetual motion, anything supported by force and cognitive force are immune! Forcibly recognizing your algorithm/power counts!