After Rebirth, I Became a Super Being

Can you please not write too many introductions to technology in the book? It's very stiff and I think you're underestimating the word count.

If you want everything, you are destined to get nothing.

The writing is good, but the protagonist is written as a college student, and he doesn't feel like a reborn person!

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I started working on artificial intelligence, and the articles on high-energy batteries are basically bad.

The male protagonist has always behaved rationally and everything is stable. It seems to have highlights, but I personally feel that it is less exciting In order to deal with the mine boss, everyone resorts to extravagant tactics, but the male protagonist is still abiding by the rules and laws. For a systematic male protagonist, in an era when getting rich depends on not following the rules, the male protagonist is also weird This is the era of primitive accumulation, and it is still an excellent period at the beginning of the millennium. To suppress cheats, you have to be flexible. The original purpose is to grow into capital and accelerate your own evolution, so don't pretend to be a white lotus. The male protagonist's plug-in must become the driving force of the times in the end, otherwise he will be eliminated by the stubborn forces. It is difficult to get a coal boss. When high technology comes out, the old Americans are afraid that they will not be able to do it.

I have seen some problems with the plot in more than 30 chapters. Those who can dig mines, not to mention all of them are killed, but there are definitely many people who have been seriously injured and driven a dump truck. Goldfinger I remember choosing Almighty, Currently I have only seen people working in computer technology Security in 2000 was not as good as it is now. There were definitely a lot of dump trucks, gangsters and so on. The gangsters at that time didn't think so much. If you don't give it to you, if you get the opportunity, you will be asked for money or life, or you will be killed, and you will come to rob things. It depends on how the author handles it later. The simplest thing is to point to biotechnology, which only requires a little synthetic virus to make those people die normally.

It's a pity. If the protagonist planned to take the road of robots, I might really pursue it. Comprehensiveness means mediocrity. It feels like there is nothing new.

I came to see you extraordinary. As a result, you showed me business wars and stocks?

It feels like it's too early to develop a smart assistant. At least we have to wait until the smartphone comes out, and then we can just start making games and make money.

It was okay at first, but started to fall apart once I wrote about women. . . . In the initial stage, women do not bring much benefit.

Your introduction, cover, and name made me think it was a fast-paced mechanical article. After reading it, the gap is too big. There are too many descriptions of women, which is awkward. If you don't grasp it well, write less I feel that you can write better, don't use all the bells and whistles

Rebirth again, failure again, what are you afraid of? Don't the reborn know the future? Don't you know the value of technology if you have failure? Don't worry about it first. We will vigorously develop it in the future. For example, if software is released to the Internet for people to use, won't it have computing power? Using technology to compress will make the Internet speed faster. It looks good at first, but it will be too depressing later. Cut it out.

The artificial intelligence assistant chatgpt has burned more than a billion dollars in computing power expenditure 20 years later, and it has not been able to do well after several years of repeated iterations. If you were to use a computer from an era before the advent of GPUs 20 years ago, it would be a dream. Nowadays, AI relies on graphics processing power. Artificial intelligence using pure CPU threads seems to be far away today. It is pseudo-science and true fantasy.

The appearance of Goldfinger is too straightforward! Suddenly it makes people feel that the protagonist is omnipotent! If the development is slow, people will definitely say it is a waste. If the discovery is fast, some people will say it is a novel written by a novice, and then the author's mentality will eventually collapse! Basically two to three hundred chapters are gone.

Does Super Life Form just need two female protagonists?

When I saw face recognition, I found that my brain was boiling. In 2003, even if you wrote the software and had no hardware, the problem of high-definition cameras, computing chips, and the entire city surveillance network could be solved in a day with pig's feet? ? Are you making smart phones in the 1980s?

10% To 10% is the end-user mode. The protagonist does not need any top talents. One person takes care of all advanced technologies. All technology giants will either become pig-footed opponents and be crushed to death, or they will be completely reduced to wage earners. As Pig's Foot continues to throw out black technology, all universities and research institutions will fall behind in learning and have to close down. What Pig's Foot needs is a liberal arts major that only deals with people. It will squeeze out more and more social resources until it is infinitely close to the end-of-life model.

2000 Is too early for automation, intelligence, and robots.

I think the title of the book can be changed to "Super Life Begins by Programming Minecraft"

I've read Chapter 168. The technology is okay, but the protagonist is so advanced and hasn't developed his own defense force yet, which is too weak. This is a super-evolved life form, and it doesn't look cool at all!

He acts reasonably and logically, but many of his routines are from ten years ago.

Set up mechanical ascent. The first software was Minecraft. It was not sold abroad as expected. It was only spread slowly in a small area in China. There were only three salespeople, and one of them was beaten! The second chapter helps to refine the procedures for handling cases. There are many chapters describing the process of handling cases, and there is another villain, the mine boss. There are also two girls. Do you want to say this is a cool article? It's not exciting enough, it's very dragging. Do you want to tell me the details? The first pot of gold was 50,000 yuan. It was introduced by the teacher. There was no thanks and certainly no 30% was given to the teacher. It's okay to accept that Minecraft is not being sold abroad and it will develop slowly, but I can't be unhappy! How can you go to Internet cafes to promote the Internet cafe management system? If artificial intelligence is to develop, why not directly develop chat software? Having mastered Internet cafes, chat software, and games, I didn't know how to write without feeling unhappy, until I saw this novel.

The male protagonist is not reborn, he doesn't look reborn at all.

When I saw the protagonist making up several non-existent masters, I couldn't hold myself back. I personally suggest that you be careful here.

In 1997, I spent 10,000 yuan to buy an Ericsson flip phone. It was in English at the time. It was released in Chinese less than half a year after I bought it. I regretted buying it too early. The author said that Nokia was only released in 2002. What the hell! ! !

Why not take the rabbit and develop it secretly? It's very poisonous to bring beauty.

Emmnn The rhythm is slow

It's better to give the protagonist the identity of a prince in an imaginary world.

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