I Am Ma Su, I Am at the Street Pavilion

No, is it too far-fetched to reverse the plot in order to continue writing this book? Will you write this book after you finish it? Not saying so much, abandoning the book, and retreating even if you have 200,000 against 20,000 catapults and gunpowder? Unbelievable!

I have written dozens of chapters about the Battle of Jieting, and I am still planning to expand it to more than 200 chapters. Is Jieting important during the Battle of Chibi and Guandu? Even Lao Luo is not that good. You are like playing a game and getting stuck in the street booth...

Clearly there is a fundamental error in the outline of this book. I only know that there is a political struggle within Shu Han, but I don't analyze what they are earning? The only major event in the Shu Han Dynasty was the Northern Expedition. Facing the Northern Expedition, we can know that there were several Northern Expeditions. The local factions do not support the Northern Expedition? I don't think it's supported, but can we still do the Northern Expedition so many times? It means they are nothing. Does the Dongzhou faction support the Northern Expedition? I think that during the first and second Northern Expeditions, they might support the subsequent Northern Expeditions if they had the chance. I don't think the Dongzhou faction would. But there were so many Northern Expeditions, which shows that they are nothing. Does the Yuan Cong Department support the Northern Expedition? I think they definitely support it, but they definitely want to attack Wu State more. After all, Liu Guanzhang died directly or indirectly in the hands of Wu State. Then why didn't they attack Soochow? On the one hand, the Yuan Cong faction knew the general situation better, and on the other hand, the prime minister was really strong. What did the Jingzhou faction say? The Jingzhou faction said it depends on what the prime minister said. Abba Abba Abba. Also why do I think it is the Yuan Cong Shi body rather than the local school and Dongzhou school. You will know why the Shu Han did not make the Northern Expedition in the later period. The second part of the mistake is why a general must start from a small soldier? The person who grows from a soldier to a general is like a crucian carp crossing a river. Is it true that only a small soldier can become a general? Putting aside that, why didn't Cao Zhen start as a soldier? There are countless nobles who have become famous generals. Is it the same path in Huashan since ancient times? The third mistake: I read before that Ma Di was the leader of the Jingzhou faction, which is correct, but this was based on excluding the prime minister. Does Ma Su need to consider how the Jingzhou faction operates? Isn't there a prime minister? If you can't even figure out the way out for your faction, you would rather believe what is said on the Internet about the struggle between Shu and Han than the Prime Minister. The last sentence, you would rather believe that the internal struggle between Shu and Han was fierce during Zhuge Liang's reign, but you don't believe that I am Qin Shihuang. VI will make you a general for 50 yuan.

It's really hard to self-defeat. The author really relies on imagination to write about politics... No matter how much an elephant self-defiles, it can't avoid the impact of its huge size on its surroundings. As the successor of the prime minister, I don't want to use my merits to establish prestige. Instead, I think about the inexplicable factional struggle... Brother, do you understand that military is an extension of politics? Military itself is a political means. Besides, as the successor of the Prime Minister, your job is to be the arbiter, not the vanguard of a certain faction🤮🤮

According to Mr. Tian Yuqing's research, the factional conflicts within the Shu Han were almost eliminated during Zhuge Liang's first Northern Expedition. There are always folk historians who like to talk about factional struggles.

The writing is good, but you want to taint yourself for no reason. You are tainting yourself under the hands of Prime Minister Zhuge of the Shu Han Dynasty. It is really poisonous. The Shu Han is going to die. How can there be so much internal fighting! The author thought of the chapter names very carefully, but one chapter is finished in seven pages. This is very uncomfortable. Have you ever seen any high-end author do this? It's all done by the fool Quanqin. Why do you want such neat chapter names when you are ready to fool around? You make readers unhappy, but you still want to feel happy? To be honest, you can't cultivate loyal fans like this, so be it.

Ma Su wants to taint himself. What political capital does Ma Su have and what capital does other people have? Who do you want to show yourself to? No matter how I think about it, I can only think that you think the Jingzhou faction wants to destroy Shu Han and is ready to commit suicide and run away.

Why are you still in the water? My dear, I have almost written about the second Northern Expedition. Are you still running around in circles 😥

The last chapter is just random. Without seeing any gunpowder, Zhang He was able to gather an army when encountering a landslide caused by a strange weapon and blowing up the camp? ! Do you think Zhang He is a god? Or is the Wei army a heavenly soldier and a heavenly general?

The author is really speechless about killing four birds with one stone 1. The swing between two cities is just that there is this letter in history, and it does not necessarily mean that people are really swinging; after all, if someone can appoint a high position on the front line, it may not be clear to future generations whether it is to show weakness to the enemy or to be sincere. Moreover, the protagonist only has objects such as helmets. The objects can be forged without the most important heads. As long as the Wei army stabilizes the city lord and does not let the gastritis attack quickly, your street pavilion will be in danger. The general is not here, and elite soldiers must be sent to protect the general and escort the items. It is really difficult to do another wave. This plan is very unstable, and it is difficult to tell without asking the prime minister. 2. If you want to learn and choose to delegate, the opposite faction is offended by you, and the people in the same faction don't recognize you just now. If you go down and join other factions in taking the position, is he willing to let you sit back in this position? It's even more nonsense to make friends with gastritis. All three factions don't like you. How can you still study at the bottom and go back? 3. The political influence is very poor. You are at least the leader of the younger generation of the factions. Even if you get a high position in the future, how can the Sichuan faction obey you? The Sichuan faction is a local snake, and you can't kill the local faction now that their base camp is in Sichuan. In the future, when the prime minister dies, you will take over the banner of developing productivity and cultivating scientific talents. With such a record, will Liu Chan dare to delegate power to you? 4. The character design is strange. You dare not stick to one side, but you dare to use unstable plans to influence the Northern Expedition. I'm surprised. It's not like every toilet in Warcraft requires a commander to clear it. The support of the Ma family and factions allows you to have loyal direct descendants. Your identity as a time traveler allows you to recruit talents before you know it. You have enough manpower to guard the place. You can even sell favors to the Jingzhou faction to get some people to come over for gold plating. Isn't it obvious which one is more stable and which one is easier to succeed? Your act of grabbing credit almost puts a knife in the Prime Minister's hand. Whether the punishment will be used again in the future depends almost entirely on the Prime Minister. You dare to hold your life in the Prime Minister's hands, but you are unwilling to tell the Prime Minister the identity of the time traveler. Even if you make up a nonsense, Yimeng has learned the new and forgotten the old. It is easy to win the Prime Minister's trust by saying that the main figures in the Wei State died at the same time. As long as you tell the Prime Minister that these learning problems are easy to solve, the Prime Minister will definitely not put you in a high position in the early stage. In the mid-term, you will find more talents to receive the Prime Minister's training together. You will learn more and better than you at the grassroots level. This wave of operations is strange anyway. I think it kills four enemies with one stone. This is just like a game. You will be given a strong character to try out first, and then you will be reduced to level 0 and have to practice again; but you have laid the groundwork and described it for a long time. Everyone has developed a sense of development for this character. Now it is difficult for people to accept it. After defeating the enemy and achieving great achievements in the climax, there is a negative incentive. The combination of the two makes the reading experience very unpleasant. It is difficult to set a goal in the plot arrangement of your fall and predicament. It is difficult for everyone here to set a target and revenge goal, and give readers a clear goal to defeat this person and future excitement. If you return to the top, you will only slowly get back your previous things, not to mention that you gave up on your own, so the original enjoyment is not enough. Moreover, you are short in terms of code and the description is too detailed to quickly get the protagonist out of the predicament. I feel that the results after you put it on the shelves will be ugly. Unless you write brilliantly in the next "Three Sessions Trial". It can establish the image of Zhuge Liang, write the feeling of being both an enemy and a friend of the Sichuan faction, draw out the allies of this faction and establish the character. It is best to have a sense of intense conflict that is unexpected by our readers, and give the protagonist a clear goal that makes people want to watch. If you can do this, just think I farted a series of loud farts. If you can't do this, I suggest you review the outline again.

Just write sixty or seventy chapters on a street pavilion battle, and you end up committing suicide? Other prime ministers have trained you as their successor 😅

Who can you expose yourself to, Ma Su? To Zhuge Liang?

I can write more than 40 chapters even if I'm guarding a street booth. That's pretty impressive.

First of all, the Battle of Jieting was too drawn out and too long, and it would be outrageous to sully oneself after winning for a while. After all, it was too late for Zhuge Liang to focus on promoting the successor he was optimistic about, and there was no need to sully oneself. The political struggle is written too far forward, which makes it unsightly. If you want to write about the political struggle, you can write it after the war or from the side. Focusing on this aspect will make it unsightly on the battlefield. I suggest that this book can be saved by tearing down all the chapters after the self-destruction and rewriting it. If I keep it, I won't be able to write it later because I can't stand the current chapters anymore.

Is self-slander useful? Doesn't self-slander just give people a chance to deal with you? What's the difference between this and sending someone to hack you?

After reading so much, I carefully read the plot written by the author, and also read the author's reasons, but I still think that the opinions of several people in the comment area are relatively correct. The author's writing is a bit one-sided, and it is a political struggle, self-destruction, etc. You can write a plot that is brainless and funny, but you can't treat readers as fools, right? It makes modern people not like modern people (without all the taboos of modern people), nor completely loyal to the prime minister and the big man (if he has technology, he will not give it to the prime minister). This kind of plot is still too advanced for me. Maybe I can't understand the author's art. I decided to take care of the book for half a year, hoping that the author's book would get better and better.

After Prime Minister, who will take over? Jiang Wan. Where is Ma Su? Ma Su is guarding the street.

Ma Su was 39 years old when he went to Jieting. You are still fighting monsters and leveling up. Do you know the concept of 39 years old? Zhuge Liang treats him like a child, do you think he has grown up? 🤮

The Records of the Three Kingdoms records: He relied on Nanshan to block the city and refused to move down to occupy the city. So, there should be a city there. Even if the city is in dilapidated condition, it is still better than going up the mountain and having the water source cut off. The Chronicles of the Three Kingdoms record: He cut off his Ji Dao, attacked and destroyed it greatly. Ma Su did send people to protect the water source, but Zhang He defeated the troops guarding the water source. And Ma Su's troops are enough to defend the city, because the Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms records that Ma Su: Unite the masses first. And during the founding of the Eastern Han Dynasty, a man named Lai She had already given an example to Ma Su. And Ma Su couldn't even gather the defeated army. Three Kingdoms records: He fought with Wei general Zhang He in a street pavilion, but was defeated by He, and the soldiers were separated. Although the masses were at the forefront, they still failed to contain the defeated army after being defeated. By the way, in order to prevent some people from making excuses and saying, "How can you trap the defeated army so easily?", Let me say one more thing. At that time, Wang Ping, who was under Ma Su, trapped the defeated army under his own command. The original text of the Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms records: Su moved up the water to the mountain, and his actions were troublesome. He even tried to admonish Su, but he could not be used, and he was defeated by the street pavilion. The crowd dispersed, but Wei Ping's men beat drums to hold themselves together. Wei general Zhang He suspected that he was ambushing his troops, so he refused to press him. And the most annoying thing about Ma Su is that he abandoned the army and ran away. The original text of the Three Kingdoms records: He fled. Also, later Wang Ping met Zhang He again, but successfully defended it. The Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms records: Wei General Sima Xuan Wang attacked Liang, Zhang He attacked Ping, Ping held firm and could not defeat them. So the last possibility: the reason why Zhang He is too fierce is also thrown out. And even if you insist on it? Annotation by Pei Song in the Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms: The front army was defeated and the troops were stationed several miles away. In other words, when Zhuge Liang found out that Ma Su was going to do something bad, he hurried to support him. There were still a few miles to go, even if Ma Su only had to persist for a while? To sum up, if you don't defend the city, you have to go up the mountain. No matter how dilapidated the city is, it is better than being cut off from the water, and the troops are definitely sufficient. The most annoying thing is that not only did they not hold on for even half a day, they also failed to contain the defeated army. In the end, they abandoned the army and ran away.

I read a few chapters and the main character is so disgusting

After reading the comment section, I just want to say one thing: the civil society and civil history are actually no less harmful than the civil science.

I have failed all the knowledge of military, political and historical knowledge. When writing a novel, mark it clearly. All the fighting generals have come out. I'll give you the test.

Gunpowder is good, but can you match it? ? There is also the issue of purity. Is it so simple, just get it done? The protagonist is a chemistry major? ?

Looking at the first few pictures, I feel that the protagonist has not been brought into the Three Kingdoms from the time traveler. I am more accustomed to the protagonist standing in the Three Kingdoms and then applying the knowledge before traveling. Instead of standing on the post-travel and using the knowledge before the time-travel, what I feel now is the latter. There is no need to write in such detail about lyricism. Judging from some descriptions, the author should be quite good at this kind of details, but there is no need to specifically write out the emotions of the protagonist. Just click on it and let the readers go back to their own taste. If you write it out, it will be finalized and the readers will not be able to feel it for themselves. Limited by my ability to express myself, this is my suggestion above. I am very optimistic about the future of this book. I hope the author can persist until he finishes it before starting the next book, instead of just cutting it off if he thinks the results are not good. If this book is finished, it should be able to accumulate some fans, which will be of great help to your next book.

To be honest, the death-seeking version of Lao Ma Lang next door almost turned into the three-eyed Prince Ma.

After seeing that I won the Battle of Street Pavilion, I couldn't watch it. The author's writing skills are actually not bad. It's a pity that he didn't keep up with the times and wanted to use the ancient chapter back-style novel to show what he was. In this way, thinking and imagination were restricted. Time-travel novels are the most test of imagination.

I just saw the first few pictures. The Wei army is too strong. During the siege, under the suppression of archers, under the attack of golden rolling stones and wood, in the bottom-up battle, accompanied by the attack of returning artillery, the battle loss ratio was close to 1:1. It was too strong. If it were a field battle, it would be one to a thousand. It was not easy for the Shu army to persist for so many years.

Come on, author, the writing is beautiful

Come on, come on, this book can indeed do it. Details are well drawn and the plot does not drag out.

The Shu Han in my heart, Bai Yueguang is the only one with some radiance of humanity in troubled times.