Marvel: Complete Evolution

First of all, I set restrictions on omnitrix that I think are in line with Azmis' behavioral logic. Because the omnitrix of all parallel universes were originally designed for peace, and the Azmis of each universe may have more or less problems, but without exception they are all good people. So when the omnitrix is ​​no longer under his control, I think it is okay for Azmis to impose some restrictions. After all, it cannot determine whether the person who picked up the omnitrix is ​​a normal person. The most important thing is that I have clearly stated in the subsequent chapters that omnitrix can be cracked, and the protagonist is working hard in this regard. Even Xiaoban, a recognized idiot, can crack it. I think a normal adult should be able to crack it too. As for why it is not given to the Little Strange Soldiers, please think about it carefully. Azmis gives you restrictions, and also gives you the alien heroes with the highest probability of cracking the omnitrix from the beginning. What is the difference between this and the Maginot Line? You can also ask other questions and I will try my best to answer them.

Tell me what you think. What made me not in the mood to read further was that you spent a story writing about the protagonist changing his mentality, becoming serious and no longer arrogant. Later, you found out who was behind the scenes and had already attacked you and your friends, but you did nothing. Is Jin Busha the mastermind behind the scenes? Will Kazuo handle it? None of his men care? Don't say that killing people is an enemy of the country. What you have in your hand is a cracked version of a small broken watch. You have ten thousand ways to make them disappear. It clearly has nothing to do with you. Maybe there will be changes in the future, but I really can't stand it. It's a shame to spend even a penny. Just like that, my brother ran away.

I actually think it would be great to be able to write about Marvel well. Many authors just like to write about Marvel and jump to DC as they write. Others write the two worlds together, which is really unreadable.

Otherwise, I would end up writing three small books. Same as shameless people

In fact, unlocking aliens can be set because there is a problem with the little broken watch that travels through the universe. Except for the basic aliens, the genetic data of other aliens are more or less problematic. You can transform into other aliens, but it will be very painful, so painful that it feels like you will be cut into pieces and executed! You can only rely on constantly transforming into each other so that your bodies can slowly adapt to each other and reduce the pain. At the same time, don't expect to randomly choose a new alien transformation and be able to fight. The first few transformations will be so painful that you will faint and exit the transformation state. At the same time, the protagonist's body is constantly strengthened by alien genes. And in the new universe, their genes are too active, which can also cause very strong mental problems, causing the protagonist to even suffer from schizophrenia and other problems. Especially for aliens like ghosts, there is even the possibility of being taken over by the other party. This allows the protagonist to carefully choose the person to transform into, and not dare to open a new alien randomly until he has completely adapted to an alien and makes it unable to affect him anymore. Moreover, transformation consumes a lot of energy, and the transformation energy can only be paid by the protagonist's own body. High-end protagonists such as Super Giant and X Superman must strengthen their bodies to a certain extent before they can transform, allowing the protagonist to continuously exercise and strengthen themselves. Both physical and mental aspects jointly limit the protagonist. If you don't adapt to an alien many times, if you dare to transform into him, you will directly lose your combat effectiveness and fall on the street. If you don't fully adapt to an alien, if you dare to bite off more than you can chew, you will suffer from schizophrenia, or even be reborn by the alien. The cost of transformation is all paid by the protagonist himself. If his physical fitness is not strong enough, not to mention high-end goods cannot transform, and ordinary aliens cannot transform for a long time.

What is puzzling is why we should write about the DC universe. This book obviously started with Marvel, so you shouldn't insert anything else in the middle. After you insert DC, you suddenly insert it back to Marvel and then back to DC. What do you want to do? Do you know that if you write like this, it will alienate readers? Those who like to read Marvel will not read your DC part, and those who like DC will not enter this book. You have divided the readers at the beginning. Why should you change it? This is purely thankless. You have offended Marvel people, and DC people will not come in after reading the title of your book. I came here from listening to books, and I jumped over all of a sudden. There was no foreshadowing, no forward movement, and it sounded very disconnected. If you want to write about DC and Marvel from the beginning, then you should reflect it in the title of the book at the beginning, or mark it in the introduction. If you do this now, other than making readers abandon the book, I really can't think of any benefits.

Although it is a bit strange that Marvel suddenly switched to DC to write, but DC's writing was also very good later. Wonder Woman even kissed the protagonist, but you suddenly switched to Marvel. You should at least let me know what will happen between the protagonist and Wonder Woman. It makes me feel so uncomfortable.

After reading the first dozen chapters, let me tell you my opinion. Advantages: The sentences are fluent and interactive, there is no "Chinese" feeling, and the characters are more vivid.        :14，，，(Ò ‸ Ó||) Summary: This book is suitable for junior high schools and elementary schools. Old people like us can't eat such sweet things. When I first started reading, I only read Battle Through the Sky. Daily sweet stories like Warcraft and God of War were not suitable for me (not recommended for those who don't like sweet stories).

I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters, not because of the weak plot, the poisonous setting, or the character issues. The writing style is simply too disastrous. Many parts of the writing are vague and foggy. When I came out and looked at the comment area, I said that the writing style has not improved at all after hundreds of chapters. It is true that Bengbu lives.

I haven't read it yet, but I want to ask, does it suppress the protagonist's combat power? Isn't it some kind of weak person who can run slowly to dodge bullets? Isn't there a book that's more interesting than the original ben10?