Marvel: Complete Evolution

First, I think that setting restrictions on the omnitrix is ​​consistent with the behavioral logic of Azmith. Because all the omnitrixes in the parallel universes were designed for peace, and while each universe's Azmis may have some flaws, they are all good people without exception.

Let me share my thoughts. What made me lose interest was that you spent a whole story developing the protagonist's mindset, making him more serious and less arrogant. Then, you discovered who was behind it all, and they'd already targeted you and your friends, but you did absolutely nothing. The mastermind, Kim, didn't kill them? The gang didn't deal with them? None of his henchmen did anything?

I actually think it's quite an achievement if an author can write Marvel well. Many authors just like writing about Marvel, but then they jump to DC midway through; some even combine the two universes... It's really unreadable.

Either don't write at all, or write three small, worn-out notebooks. Just like a shameless scoundrel.

The unlocking of aliens could be set up so that the protagonist's transmigrating abilities malfunctioned. Aside from a few basic aliens, the genetic data of other aliens was more or less flawed. Transforming into other aliens was possible, but extremely painful—like being tortured to death!

What's puzzling is why you had to write about the DC universe? This book clearly started with Marvel, so why insert other things in the middle? You inserted DC and then suddenly switched back to Marvel and then back to DC again. What were you trying to do? Do you realize that writing like this will create a divide among your readers?

I couldn't continue reading after a few dozen chapters. It wasn't because the plot was stupid, the setting was bad, or the characters were problematic. The writing style is simply disastrous; many parts are written vaguely and incomprehensibly. After reading the comments, I saw that the writing hasn't improved at all even after hundreds of chapters. It's truly a case of "living in Bengbu" (a Chinese internet slang term for being stuck in a bad situation).

It's a bit strange that Marvel suddenly switched to DC, but DC's later works were actually quite good. Wonder Woman even kissed the main character! Then suddenly they switched to Marvel, and they had to at least let me know what would happen between the main character and Wonder Woman afterwards! It was such a painful break!

Haven't read it yet, just wondering if the protagonist's fighting power is suppressed? It's not going to be another story where he's weak, slow, and good at dodging bullets, right? Isn't there a book even more powerful than the original Ben10?

Having read the first dozen or so chapters, here are my thoughts. Advantages: The sentences are fluent and the interaction is good, without feeling like "Chinese". The characters are also quite vivid and lifelike. Weaknesses: The protagonist's infatuation with 14-year-old Gwen is a bit too sweet, and the transitions between battles and dialogue feel childish and awkward.