My Journal of Transcending the Myriad Worlds

The biggest problem with this book is that everyone is a good person, the villagers are good people, the teachers are good people, the students are good people, the examiners are all good people, and the county magistrate is also a good person. No matter how dangerous the society is, there are never bad people, everyone is kind-hearted, everyone likes the protagonist, everyone loves him, and is willing to help him. There is no selfishness, no jealousy, no suppression, no bullying. A completely ideal world of great harmony, filled with truth, goodness and beauty everywhere. Even if bad people occasionally appear, they will soon change their ways. But even so, the society is still poor, the people still have no food to eat, and exorbitant taxes and miscellaneous taxes still exist. Why? ? ?

It's been more than thirty chapters. The first dungeon has not yet become an official and is still in the examination. Is this to prepare for speeding up later, or to write more than 100 chapters for the first dungeon?

Leave a review and support the author. Overall, the writing is good. The writing is relatively plain and a bit wordy in some places, but the plot suits me quite well. The protagonist is affectionate and righteous, and knows how to be grateful. There is no plot of bitterness and deep hatred, nor is there a plot of hatred and hatred that wants to wipe out all the people. There are not many small evil points, and the writing is comfortable to read. The plot is rich and full of small pitfalls, such as repaying the people in the village, the grateful wife, and the wife of the academy. It seems quite comfortable and I can remember the characters in the plot. The only thing I'm afraid of is that if the author can't grasp it, it will collapse later. After all, in the fantasy channel, your first feudal ancient world is too big. It seems that there are at least dozens of chapters left to finish. Judging from the introduction, the ending will not be that simple. If it is not well written, it will appear too redundant. In general, the length of the first world should be considered medium. I know more about the first thing, so the second world and the third world must be a lot, or even more. It seems that the author has an outline, at least to write 12 million words. Unlike a new author, the length of each world is arranged to be relatively large. My evaluation is a portion of food and a small portion of fairy grass. After all, the writing is too short now, and I don't know if it will collapse later. I can only say, come on, author, and I will reward you with one or two hundred points. Come on! I am poor, I only have these coins!

I feel uncomfortable. I really think about the people. It would be best if there was no emperor. Let's talk about your first option first, do nothing and wait to die. You can be Galileo or Newton, and most of their theories can be realized in the protagonist's era. As for the second option, Qianli wants to kill you and establish a direct constitutional monarchy or separation of powers. Most people in Cromwell and Washington know this. You can be the emperor yourself, Napoleon must have heard of it. The fame and influence of these people are no worse than Zhuge Liang. The third type will not be evaluated. You said that the second type will affect the reputation of the protagonist. I think it is nonsense. The late emperor's photos are still there, and Qianli wants to kill you, the founders of the country. Doesn't this mean that he is a useless emperor? Emperor Qianli is just a selfish thief. If you write it like this, you might as well write it so that the Old Era Group listens to Emperor Qianli after the protagonist dies. Don't say that the protagonist doesn't believe that they won't do this. The protagonist is willing to believe that the ruthless and unjust Emperor Qianli is ordinary, but he is unwilling to believe in his brothers in life and death. Anyway, I feel uncomfortable looking at these pictures.

At first, it was said that only wild beasts can cultivate, other species cannot be extraordinary, and humans can only be ordinary people. Only by changing into wild beast skins can they cultivate. How can the skinless immortal have extraordinary power? He has not yet reached the stage of changing his skin. He has not changed into wild beast skins, but just peeled off the skin. How did he cultivate?

You have traveled through time, how do you know that the world you traveled through is also spherical? It is unreasonable to apply modern theories to explain

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Those comments said that those who sell refined salt are really outrageous Their IQ is not even as good as Jack Ma.

The village chief, classmates, teachers... These many supporting characters are very good, and the characters are more fleshed-out. In comparison, the protagonist is a bit stretched, a bit like a middle school student who is particularly young and has never experienced anything independently.

I personally have a rather picky taste in reading novels. Even those written by great authors rarely make me want to read them. There are only a handful of people who can insist on reading the entire novel. I have seen too many novels in my 15 years of reading. This is my third novel account. Reading more than ten thousand volumes is really not an adjective. The same routines, most of the great writers have lost their original intention, their innovation is always in the setting, it is tiring to watch, there is nothing interesting, and the story is not attractive at all. In comparison, I prefer to read books written by new authors. Although the writing style is slightly inferior, the ideas are still there, there is no framework for creativity, and it seems very easy. And you, my cute little author, I was very satisfied with this book when I first read it. However, in the middle and later stages of the first volume, it was difficult to be satisfied with the quality, narrative style, plot advancement rhythm, and vocabulary and sentences! So much so that I no longer had the desire to read the second volume, so I just looked at the table of contents. You have committed a common mistake among many authors: start high and go low. It's just that your situation is more serious, and you are completely different from the previous one. Now it's time to say goodbye, I can't stand it anymore, take care.