Battle Through the Heavens: The Netherworld Poison Lord

The first part is fine, but the protagonist immediately starts building a sect. How deep is your obsession with sects? In a remote, impoverished area with nothing, you begin building a sect. You have no trustworthy subordinates, not enough talent, not enough medicinal resources, and barely any cultivation techniques or fighting skills. The protagonist still has to invest money and resources, and there's no return in the short term. Are you just bored?

I finished reading it, but something felt off. It seems the author's writing skills are lacking, making the book feel stiff.

So far, it's quite interesting. However, I suggest the author not to go into too much detail about the disciple; these few paragraphs are enough. Without a special physique, the protagonist in *Battle Through the Heavens* won't benefit much. The protagonist will level up very quickly, and the disciple won't be able to keep up. Giving him opportunities would be putting the cart before the horse, which many readers dislike. The main focus should be on the two female leads and Xiao Yan.

It seems the Breakthrough Pill requires a different kind of fire to refine, right? I suggest revising that. 🙂🙂🙂

Could we add Zi Yan as a female lead? Zi Yan is so cute!

Little Fairy Doctor

Little Fairy Doctor

Well written, remember to send me 50 cents.

The author has really managed to stitch together something new—a different kind of fire spirit, huh? The author could write less about sect building and more about different fire meetings; the Netherworld Poison Fire doesn't seem like someone who can sit still—it's probably quite talkative.

The Azure Lotus Earth Core Flame possesses both fire and wood attributes, so the protagonist should now be able to refine pills.