Faders at Hogwarts

The Faded Ones enter the Harry Potter universe, and the subject matter is relatively new. The reason why everyone likes to watch Suture (neutral word) is that two familiar stories collide with new sparks. However, the key to stitching is [two familiar stories] Because it is a re-creation, the setting and tone of the story are limited to a certain extent, and the two creators are born to dance in shackles. You can add some fresh elements during the writing process, but the premise is that you cannot overturn some basic backgrounds and settings that everyone is familiar with, otherwise it will become a trick. I don't need to go into details about the tone of the Souls series. Although the characters in Harry Potter often have funny moments, it is not a pure comedy. The author wants to take a light tone, no problem, no objection. But don't forget that the protagonist is the Faded One, the King of Elden, or the King of Madness. What kind of depth does this background represent? If you forget to suggest restarting the four episodes In order to conform to the relaxed tone of the writing style and the interest of the plot, he can act carefree from time to time, but this cannot be a complete portrayal of his inner world, and the protagonist should not be written as a pure fun person. However, according to the author's current portrayal, this is just Long Aotian who has mastered the power of another world. At this mental age, if you didn't tell me, I would have thought he was a fourth grader. Where is the measure of being a king? This is not the King of Madness traveling through time to Harry Potter, this is a game where players get tired of playing in the Borderland and travel to Hogwarts to cause trouble. I hope the author writes more from the perspective of the faded person himself, rather than from the perspective of sitting in front of the computer playing games To be honest, I am still very interested in this subject. It was quite fresh when I was attracted to it at first, but the more I read, the more I feel that it is too boring. I am really unhappy after catching up on the latest chapter today. I bring this up in the hope that the author can write the article well and not waste this subject.

Although the author has not read the original work carefully or has not read the original work at all, so almost every chapter is deviated from the original design, but I have to say that it is still quite interesting, especially the protagonist is set as a mastermind who is both good and evil. It is enjoyable to watch! It's just that the author's coding speed is very slow, but he doesn't have any writing skills. I have to praise him for this. I hope the author can keep up the good work and keep producing useful information. Don't be lazy.

From the borderland, you said that the protagonist of the three-week project does not know the magic of the borderland. I can't understand it, but I'm shocked. JPG Even if you learned Topps' stance...

Let's briefly talk about the current problems in the author's book: 1. The character design conflicts with the actual performance. The border area is not only a place where people eat people, but also a war-torn world. The first priority in this kind of world is to protect yourself. But when Snape wants to draw blood, others look at him like goods. The protagonist does not have any reaction that he should have. He should refute them immediately. It is normal to have a stress reaction. But the protagonist is like a puppet, "forgiving" or having a laugh at the school teacher's behavior. The tolerance for characters in the HP world is too high. 2. Regarding the problem of the Harry Potter trio, they inexplicably started to believe in a "kind" elf from a God's perspective, and then doubted the person who saved their lives. First of all, it is not in line with conventional thinking. Not to say that they are 100% the protagonist, but at least it is too outrageous to casually doubt others without definite [or seemingly definite] evidence. This makes the trio [very] unpleasant. Secondly, the protagonist has no emotions at all, just like an NPC who says fixed words just to advance the plot and let the trio investigate him. 3. The issue of combat power. The world of HP is obviously a world with low combat power, which is not comparable to the world of Magic Circle. Stop suppressing your fighting power for no reason. The author should carefully reconstruct the subsequent plot. 4. The author should think carefully whether he wants to write an invincible and exciting article, or whether he wants to write an article about the collision of two worldviews that creates something exciting. Everyone does not reject Kai Wushuang, but they are disgusted with the idea of ​​suppressing the protagonist just to satisfy their love for the original HP characters. This is commonly known as the abuser. There used to be a fan of Fahuan Lu Mingfei, and he wrote endlessly about first grade life, about a 50-50 split with Chu Zihang. Then it was released not long after it was published. The author thinks it over himself. Either be bold and find a way to transplant some game characters such as Golden Tree, Lani, Big Brother, and Melina, and have a good idea of ​​the collision of world views, or else just write an invincible and exciting article honestly and push the main line quickly. Readers on both sides want it, but both sides are displeased. Above.

A transfer student, he was attacked by a dragon when he entered school, and a goblin died. He had powerful power in his own right, Professor Weasley. Elden's Ring x Hogwarts Legacy✓

Is this the person with three eyes in the Dharma Ring? Why do I look less and less like it? It's the first time I've seen such a weak Sanjiu.

The character is a bit stupid, and the faded one roars all kinds when attacked by a dragon?

It really makes no sense to insist on Hogwarts. Wouldn't normal people avoid danger? Did the protagonist feed the dog with his previous life experience?

This book could be called, How Faded People Become Nannies

Here are some pictures to understand what I mean

Why is the protagonist a native? Lick harry a bit

This book can be said to be abusive. It's the first time I've seen such a lazy author in Sanxuanmu. He's a good-for-nothing author.

Damn it, I finally found a novel about the linkage between magic circle and hp After reading more than ten chapters... Emmmmmmm Everyone who commented was very pertinent and accurate. It seems that if you want a book with this theme, you have to write it yourself What would happen if I got a player who inherited the magic ring bucket number to travel into the HP world, and there was a petite Lani in the storage bag...

Try the four-hand combo of the ice-type flash mother monster! Jin Jin Jin! Bang bang bang! Ba ba ba! We must beat the noseless monster to his knees and force him to go back and make the mouth of the star beast! Kalia is really invincible in the world! What, it's a fire scene maniac! Everyone, run away! (Chapolini's scream) (The twisting of the ominous bloodline) (The squirming of the God-Eating Serpent) (The crawling of the Platinum Son)

Can the author change it so that no one in the Harry Potter world can cast spells without a wand? In the Harry Potter world, students at the Wagado School of Witchcraft and Wizardry can do it. Even wands only appeared in Africa in the 20th century. African wizards all cast spells without wands.

The magic ring should be considered a high magic world. If you go to a low magic world like HP, the effect of magic should be very shocking. The destructive power and effect will be very strong! If the author can't think of what the destructive effect is, I suggest you go to Station B to search for the video of God King Elden! Learn from it

The writing is too messy, with a hammer here and a stick here and there, and the flow of the story is also messy. Did you encounter a fire dragon on the way to school? Ron attacks Snape? The protagonist is also involved? Forcibly go to the Forbidden Forest

The protagonist is too attached to the protagonist's group. Is it interesting that the protagonist's group is just a group of children? Book review (The writing is OK, but the plot is not. It is not as eye-catching as Rolok 118. It falls in love with the protagonist's group of nannies and likes to force the plot with Harry). The writing is in vain, the plot is cliche, and the setting is average.

I've had a big bucket for three weeks, and these pig's feet are too tight.

I don't know why I'm scolding, is it good to have a Harry novel of this quality? When looking for a Harry novel, I've always been looking for chocolate in the shit. To be honest, a Harry novel with good writing that can follow the big plot can be considered a high-quality product. Otherwise, the writing is ridiculously poor, or else It's just that the author couldn't figure out what he was going to do when he was writing high. The writing is good, everything has a cause and ends, and it doesn't matter whether it matches the original work or not. It's also good to have a second creation that you can explain clearly. I'm already very satisfied with the writing style of this book, as long as the author doesn't finish it badly.

Speaking of the old ring, I took the horse in the second week. Killed all the NPCs and monsters I could see. If it weren't for the great blessing that prevented us from taking action, there wouldn't be anyone left.

Why is this book ranked 21st on the fantasy completion list? It's just a waste of my time.

It's been three weeks, not to mention destroying the world, but at least he is not weaker than a demigod. Sealing the stars is trivial, and the protagonists are weak.

I am going to write a book about gangsters and Hogwarts, Peaky Blinders, but I have no choice but to write it myself 😐

It gets more boring as you get to the back, what else are you going to watch after everyone controls you?

How should I put it, what is worthy of going against my invincible King of Elden? Ringworld is just not very good in the game. In fact, the people and objects in it are quite extraordinary. Everything is worthy of being on an equal footing with the Faded One controlled by the player. What level do you want to teach me? Let's first go through Mr. Tops's reflexive stance before speaking.

I originally wanted to raise it, but I couldn't help it. I would like to ask if there are any novels that the author has completed before?

It was still very interesting before it was released, but not so much after the attack on the Ministry of Magic... The number of words in the later chapters is getting smaller and smaller, giving people a feeling that it is very difficult to write...

I need a novel in the world of Harry Potter where the protagonist possesses the power of Elden's Circle. Please recommend me.

Is the author's word count too excessive?