Lord of the Abyss: My Troops Have No Weaknesses

A reborn person is a woman from the same orphanage, and a former boss is also a woman and came from the same orphanage. All I can say is awesome.

This talent is not just for recruiting problem subordinates. It doesn't work even if the talent is good and the reversal will be useless.

After reading ten chapters, I found a fatal flaw. The description of the Lord game and real society is ambiguous and very confusing. Sometimes it is unclear whether the protagonist is in the game or in reality. It is recommended to skip a line before entering the game Write----underline---game startup---this kind of distinguishing words

This talent is very suitable for recruiting heroes who have been cursed by the gods.

I am Shennong, everyone can leave now.

The protagonist only has talent, but others also have it! The protagonist is never the only one with talent! How can a protagonist like this get along without a golden finger?

Can be considered dry food. —————————— More details and embellishments would be better. The story can be considered relatively novel, but the narrative technique is too dry. It's dry and dry. You have to read it slowly for a while before you can continue to read it. Below I will give two examples using scenes and characters. If you have better rhetorical methods, you are welcome to discuss and share! ! ! —————————— 1. Scene If you want to write a scene, you need to reflect the time and space state of the scene. But if you find it too troublesome, you can simply add a few strokes. Suppose I want to write about an ordinary city in winter, for example: The winter morning light falls on the willow branches and eyebrows, refracts back and forth between high-rise buildings, and caresses everyone's shoulders and toes equally. Pedestrians hurriedly took away the remaining bits of silver on the asphalt road... 2. Characters Write some indispensable characters, but I also want to mention them briefly. Suppose I want to write a character who will die later but is still useful now, for example: He wrapped himself in a black windbreaker and smoothed away his head that was wrapped in a hooded scarf. The only two light brown eyes that leaked out were staring at the pit he had just dug... —————————— Generally speaking,, there is a lot of room for improvement. The most critical and valuable inspiration and story are already there. The rest can be done slowly. 😄😄😄

No wonder there are so few comments and all have been deleted.

This talent is suitable for finding those powerful arms with extreme weaknesses and transforming them into all-round arms.

In the first chapter, it was written that wood can be exchanged at 1:100. Wouldn't it be better if the merchant directly had unlimited stuck bugs?

Daddy, sit down Daddy, I'm so itchy, give me one more piece, please, just one, I'm really itchy! I swear, I will never touch this thing again. If you give me another one, just once, just this time today, I really can't control it. I'm so itchy! One piece, just one piece!

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If the characteristic is that the light-loving property becomes stronger in the presence of light, does that mean that it becomes weaker in the absence of light?

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Lol ok. Do you have any ideas to continue writing novels (of course not this one?