The Dragon Rider’s Sky

As I write, it becomes a business simulation type. They talk about setting up a club to help improve their strength, but in fact they spend a lot of words introducing the entrepreneurial process. So, I came to see the protagonist start his own business? Instead of writing about watermelons, you only write about sesame seeds? Why not include the main character pooping and peeing? Why can't you even distinguish between priorities? Just like the title of your book. Dragon Rider's sky. Where's the dragon? Just the opening plot of nearly 100 chapters, with a word count of 170,000. Check it out for yourself. How many words are there to describe this dragon? How many words are there for interacting with a dragon? Can there be a total of 1,000? Just put it on once at the beginning, and oh twice during the battle, and it's gone! What is this? Tool man? You write about dragon knights but not about dragons? You play warrior and don't buy a knife? Did you run on your legs as a knight? Is this appropriate? Also, I really don't want to complain about the setting of being able to ride a dragon in its young stage. Please refer to the settings for Dragon. The baby dragon is just a fat lizard, it can only run like a duck! The baby dragon can fly, so why call it a baby dragon? It's better to just crawl out of the egg and fly. Then why do you still need to be in childhood? Don't gnaw on it until you grow old. Why don't you go hunting for food by yourself if you can fly? Forget it, these are all minor issues. Writing business simulations there is a big problem. They all fell asleep to me

When I first read the title, I thought it was the famous military urban novel released a few years ago.

Why does "Starting with an Archangel" perform well? A big reason is that the title and introduction clearly indicate that it is an invincible hero theme. This attracted a large number of nostalgic fans of Invincible Heroes. Recently there is "Invincible Heroes: The Hidden Architect". To be honest, the writing skills are very average, but the monthly ticket can reach 3,000. Why? A big reason is that a large number of nostalgic fans of Invincible Heroes are watching and voting. If True North directly returns to Invincible Heroes, especially if the title and introduction of the book make it clear that it is about Invincible Heroes, I think the results will definitely be better than his.

I will still follow the book. I just hope that Beifang can write it longer this time and don't end it just as soon as it's over.

I forgot how the previous book was successful, and this is what happened.

To be honest, I don't want any players to come out () There aren't many that have been written.

No matter if there are more updates later or not, please reply.

The eunuch who cut himself twice in a row also had a few unfinished books

How come robbing women in the article is considered a right thing by the author? !

Difficult to stretch