Cultivating Demonic Arts, Starting as a Mortal

When I saw the third picture, I was disgusted to death. I have no grievances against you, and I kindly took you in for food. You slaughtered the village, and you even said that I would build your path to immortality.

It's really no brainer. A monk hired someone to kill the protagonist three times without success and entered the Bloody Forbidden Land. He didn't use it even though he had a trump card? Are you trying to explain lowering IQ?

I wish all fellow Taoists good luck in the new year!

It's a retarded vernacular, with no writing at all.

It would be better to write a direct time travel at the beginning. Using an old voice will make people think that the protagonist is being manipulated, which is very uncomfortable.

Have you written about the spiritual world now? I like this killing style

It could be a little short. Has the author read Shenmu? You can learn from Chen Laomo's character

Here it is, let me taste it 😊

Overall, the author's writing is good, without any sloppiness, and the entry points are rare. Other authors wish they could only write about women when writing fan fiction.

Come on, author😁