Going Dark in A Lifelong Journey

I hope there won't be Aunt Song. Wang Yidi, Huang Zhitao, Xiao Meng, or Li Meng from "A Little Reunion" are all fine, as long as Aunt Song isn't in it.

Almost every urban fantasy story has a "Nothing But Thirty" theme, so why hasn't anyone written a "Gentle Lies" story?

This is so watered down; it feels like there's hardly any plot. It just pads the word count with uninspired sex scenes…

If the author only took in the female lead from "Nothing But Thirty," that would be fine, but he took in Mrs. Wang too. Both of them are women who have been used and discarded by their husbands, and they don't even want their husbands who are in their forties anymore. Why would the protagonist take them in? Is he that desperate? Does he take in any supporting character? This is just padding the word count.

Dude, you're a genius! You stayed up all night reading it. Keep it up. Pay attention to the protagonist's character development. If you want to write a playboy character, avoid overly sentimental or tragic values, like misogynistic materialism or social injustice. Those are for protagonists with lofty ideals and ambitions, like in *Red Dawn*. Your protagonist is a playboy, not someone who hates materialistic women or is overly sentimental.

Dude, you've turned Eight-Handed Rose into a love-obsessed character. No matter how much you like Ya Hua Zi, don't drastically change the character's personality. Which of Ya Hua Zi's other characters in other dramas isn't better than this?

This book is well-written. I checked out the author's previous work after the update, and oh my god, it's a super simp! No wonder the author said that this book will never be about simps. However, because it still retains some of the writing style from the previous book, it still reveals a bit of simpness.

It's not dark at all, it's more like Dihua.

The writing is alright, but it's a bit petty. For such a big boss, even if you don't arrange a private jet, can't you at least let him carry his own luggage out of the airport? Couldn't you have arranged for someone to drive directly onto the tarmac to pick him up?

Holy crap, I subscribed to everything, and you told me it was free for a limited time? 😭😭😭