My Journey Through Civilization

I feel that the official part is too awkward. This part is far away from the readers' knowledge. I feel that the author doesn't know much about it, and there is also a harmonious factor. The correct way to open it is to not write it or write it sideways.

This is a rare piece of food, don't get too carried away later, this level has surpassed 98% of the authors on the site

Open a special comment thread, and you can put forward any comments you have. The author himself is not highly educated, and he doesn't read many books. He opened this book in a daze, and luckily got it approved and started updating it. Therefore, there are many problems in the book, and I hope readers will criticize and correct it. This post accepts suggestions and criticisms from various directions.

I wrote six chapters of this memory, which really affected my senses and made me stop wanting to subscribe.

When writing this type of book, the reality is that you won't write it if you can, especially when it comes to realistic romance. We are here to read game novels, not romance novels. So the author must not be too cruel.

Just write about shitty reality, just write about the game well. The level of the game is considered to be the top of this genre. The reality is straight into a lump. From the beginning, the single dormitory was obviously to stay up and not expose yourself, but in the end, I took the initiative to go to the test site. I didn't expect it.

The plot can't be developed at all. Let's get some facts to walk through the plot. You just deleted the last dozen chapters. Not only does it not affect reading, but it also improves the overall quality of the novel.

The plot is too bland. What's there to write about? The secret realm is completely skipped. It's not interesting at all. On the contrary, the scavenger crab is interesting.

There are too many descriptions of stars, really too much, so much so that people feel that this book is about stars. Stars can be written, but there is no need to write so many chapters just about one star. I just skipped to read it. Isn't the story of the crabs delicious? It is also very interesting.

For example, Chapter 44 was unified and a bit speechless. Inexplicably, the tribe where Lion Tooth belongs can be regarded as the source, not to mention how many talents have been cultivated. It seems that they have been cultivated since childhood. The tribe of the mentor was attacked, and no one came to support him. This is not because modern people's hearts are complex, so it is understandable not to support them. But look at what era this is. In such a simple era, even if the concepts are different, it is impossible to remain indifferent. My evaluation is that it's inexplicable. I always feel something is wrong. I killed him for the plot. I don't want anything for the sake of the plot.