What Does Getu Have to Do with Me? I Only Have a Few Words

Speaking of entertainment novels nowadays, most of them are directors or actors, and few are singers or musicians.

It looks good, but the pace is too slow. In terms of content: From the beginning to more than 200 chapters, it is a variety show. No matter how good the variety show content is, you will easily get tired after watching too much. By the end, you can directly guess what you want to write next.        ，，""，     In terms of characters: 1: The Guo Jiahe was actually not well written. The nearly 100 chapters before you all contained plots about him "seeking death". However, the protagonist did not mess with him, but he hated Fang Jianji, who defeated him only once with his strength. It is enough to describe the hatred once, but you also did it two or three times. I really couldn't stand it when I saw this. And later on, he actually "got close" to Guo (I know there are no eternal enemies in the entertainment industry). But you used so much ink to describe him as a boss, but the result was anticlimactic. Wouldn't it be a good idea to kill him? (My head hurts when I read it) Two: The supporting characters of powerful singers are vague about their abilities, such as Wang Jiawei. To be honest, I really don't know what makes her strong from the article. I only know that she is in the national team and her strength can crush all the singers. Even Fang Jian's description gives readers a stronger sense than that of the national team. There are several other powerful singers and supporting roles that I won't talk about one by one Suggestion: I hope the author will stop doing variety shows in the future and come up with more of his own creativity, branch lines, etc. So many variety shows are just different songs, changing the soup without changing the medicine. If the protagonist can also dance or something, then he can write about this or go international or something. The last one above only represents my personal opinion, everyone is welcome to correct me.

So far, I have seen the best piece of entertainment writing a chorus, but there are some shortcomings that I can't complain about: After the variety show ended, when it was the most popular time to cut leeks, Wang actually let it go for ten days. The number and influence of fake fans are also unreasonable. Wang actually thinks Qu Dad is not as good as a singer. Sihui asked Lin to go online to learn about the basic situation of the variety show (the boss's secretary's work level is outrageous, or he doesn't take Lin seriously at all. A capable person in this kind of company will immediately get away as far as he can). In that case, Lin asked Dong to be his assistant and Huang to be his manager. He sold the songs to them in that way and didn't treat them as human beings at all. If they still licked like that, they must be sick. There are many other flaws. Like a fly on a delicious meal. It can be seen that the author is talented, but has little workplace experience and his emotional intelligence is worrying.

Author, don't be so hypocritical. The Guinness record is typing out 708 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type out about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a record keeper, let's count it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you need about two hours of phone calls to eat every day, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash, an hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and an hour to fish in a daze. You should have nine hours to type. Linyi typed 435,780 words. Calculating 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, is it a deduction? Even the donkeys who gave birth didn't dare to rest like this, so the author quickly got up to code!

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother with the readers like this? It seems that the readers are just being sentimental. My brother is weak, so he just needs to rest more. If the readers press him so hard, it is the readers' fault. It hurts his body, and it also makes the readers feel bad.

Overall, it's okay. There are some professional details that laypeople take for granted, but they're not major problems. The biggest point of dissuasion is the large number of pornographic and shady jokes, which is very disappointing.

The creativity of this book is okay, and there is nothing to say. I just feel that the author is not good at the number of words (it's the kind of water that I know you are bad at, but I want to read). Although the novel should be attractive and exciting at the beginning, but when the stage plot is over, the pace can be slowed down. Passion is okay, but it also needs other embellishments. It has bones and meat to make it delicious. Just for reference, it's my personal feeling after reading too many books!

Awesome, so cool, I just watched it. Your shortcoming, author, is that there are too few chapters. Other than that, there is no problem at all. Too few chapters make it easy for you to suffer in a story that relies on continuous plots. Many criticisms can be solved by adding a few more chapters. From the beginning to the release, the complete plot is addictive. With 20,000 updates per day, I think you can become a god with one book. I am used to reading books for free before they are put on the shelves, but let me make sure that you are the first to pay for a new book. What you need is a continuous plot and a lot of updates. The more excellent the text, the more painful it is. If you do it, don't worry about criticism and insults. That is your medal of merit on the road to becoming a god.

Phoenix Legend Land? ? ? She is a contestant in the Eight Classics Youth Singing Competition. The song "Above the Moon" was originally a copycat of the melody of a popular European song, and then paired with Linghua Mongolian music style and rap, it's just a chicken. The reason why I think Phoenix Legend is unpopular is that mainland pop music was in decline at the time. Originally, the core circle was Wei Wei, Sun Yue, Na Ying, Faye Wong and the gang who played rock and roll and sold tapes. As a result, the era jumped directly, CDs went straight to digital, and the new generation of singers in the ring tones era were seriously separated from the traditional circle. The result was a serious failure in making stars. This is how soil comes about. No matter how good or popular the song is, it is useless. There is no Spring Festival Gala stage, no publicity, no entertainment magazines touting, no one recognizes your face, you are not a star. This was a problem with the star-making industry at that time. It was the stars that were popular, not the songs and singers. At that time, the direction of selling stars was super girls, and the direction of selling songs was ringtone singers The public and the professional circles were torn apart. The public did not think that Li Yuchun was a genius, but in the professional circles, Li Yuchun was nothing. All the programs and comments did not criticize the song. It was of the same level as the singer. It was impossible to criticize the song. At that time, Phoenix Legend was plagiarizing and talking about Zeng Yi's rap. Later, they themselves stopped talking about Over the Moon. Plagiarism was too difficult to deal with. Moreover, these two people made a lot of money from ring tones at that time. When the company became fat, they did not work hard to create stars. They would go back to eating the jobs of traffic stars. It is too hateful. They are fighting against Super Girl and Jay. Can they sell more ring tones to middle-aged and elderly people? It's safer to be a little bit humble, and you'll be safe and sound. After a few years of experience, you'll be a giant in the music industry.

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Many male videos with single female protagonists are written in a very stiff and rude way But you won't. I think your [Penglai] editor is right. The emotional development of a relationship is more natural and sweeter than sticking it together. A green plum falling from the sky and a secret love are all great sources of love buffs. Point, good writing is a bonus At least, that's how it works for me~ Compared with harem novels, such as "Collection of Pictures and Beauties", which do not respect feelings and women but insist on the pleasure of cool writing, I prefer to be clean, serious and really like a person's sincerity and heartbeat. It's cool, it can be in career, fighting for hegemony, and fighting wits and courage with enemies. It doesn't need to be reflected in diaosi marrying more wives. They have a sense of revenge in women after suddenly getting rich. Does it mean that you are powerful if there are many women who like you? Then certain animals in certain clubs are quite powerful, because there are many women who like them The type of literature about men's harem and women's harem is really difficult to evaluate. Comparatively, people who seek this type of pleasure in novels can easily write very corrupt emotions. Comparatively, Mr. Jin Yong has only one step. "Wei Xiaobao" was put on the screen and he didn't get scolded, but it's gone now, isn't it? To say so much, in fact, I just want to say that I really like the author's double overlay of career and emotional drama in this book. The career is very exciting, and the love is also natural and sweet Come on, I like your... Book Mi~

I saw that the author's Phoenix Legend songs are all in the Mountain and River Pictures. Can anyone recommend some duet songs 🙂 because I'm afraid the author's songs are out of supply.

Although it is a copywriting + system flow, the writing is pretty good and attractive, and there is almost no poisonous point. You can eat this bowl of rice.

"I only have a few words" is a joke. Lao Zeng is mainly responsible for the harmony part in a song where a girl is the lead singer. The audience may not understand it, but it is a bit too much for you, a judge of a music industry show, to not understand it. Generally, there are harmonizers at parties and music videos, so it is not so important to appear old. I hope the male protagonist in the author's novel can realize this in the future.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

I have only read the first chapter now, and I have never seen a first chapter that impressed me so much. I would like to call you the strongest first chapter from Qidian!

Akina Nakamori

The magical touch above the moon is the most essential part of the Mongolian song that expresses the vastness of the grassland. The author does not need to know the music knowledge. Writers and arrangers need to know some basic knowledge

How is the writing? I won't mention the cover issue first, okay?

All Phoenix Legend songs. The chorus is all chorus, but Zeng Yi is all in harmony. It sounds good if you listen to Linghua singing alone, but how can I put it, it's not as good as Zeng Yi's harmony, and it will be very monotonous. Station b has some explanations of songs without Zeng Yi's harmony. You can go and have a look. There are basically two levels of singing with and without harmony. Without harmony, it wouldn't be as good as what you wrote.

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I have always wondered whether Zeng Yi secretly funded the author to write the book

The hands behind the woman's waist, the woman's two right hands

Isn't this Phoenix Legend Zeng Yi

It's okay, the heroine's name is not nice, because my name is Song Ge😅, I feel like I am the heroine

Zeng Yi: What does Getu have to do with me?

There is no starting point for arranging activities, it all relies on chasing reading. If the first order is over 10,000, it will be approved. Just wait for the 200,000 words of the paid chapter to get the 10,000 order badge. It felt like the author could just go full-time, and the book took off immediately.

I feel that the heroine is a bit miserable. The bamboo horse was seduced by green tea and alienated her. She finally thought that she had changed her mind, but it turned out that the bamboo horse was taken away by an alien demon. The person she truly loved, the person she agreed to when she was a child, is no longer like him. She was actually with an extraterrestrial devil who was disguised as a male protagonist and was driven by the system to be with her.

I discovered the book yesterday afternoon and subscribed to it while reading it. Now I have ordered all the books and have finished reading them. I just want to say speed update🤭🤭🤭

I have been reading books for more than 10 years and have always read pirated copies. This is the second book I have read in Qidian Quan. Looking forward to seeing the author's new works soon. I wish the author good health! I also wish all book friends good health!