The Supreme Immortal Body That Covers the Sky

The writing is okay, just don't drive high and go low.

There are too many poisonous points, and the author has no clear understanding of the gap between realms. How can a half-crippled saint Crocodile Ancestor be so arrogant in front of the Quasi-Emperor's Forbidden Weapon? He still survived one blow. And how can you, a person in the Lunhai realm, absorb a drop of the magical medicine without exploding without help from outsiders? When you, a person in the Wheel Sea Realm, encountered a robbery from a member of the Jiang family in the Dao Palace, and knew that someone might come to reinforce and chase you, you didn't just take out the holy soldiers and kill him. Why are you wasting your time? Does the experience have to be here? Can I just find a place deep in the mountains and cross realms to fight with strange beasts? Can't we wait until the four extremes of the Dao Palace to compete with the children of these aristocratic families? And you are being hunted to death, and you still think that you cannot kill the women of the Jiang family, so you want to have a relationship with the God King? I'm going to die, I don't care who you are. I entered Zishan and directly asked for a drop of the magic medicine liquid to add the source to save the life of the God King. I just traded Douzi Mi. I have a quasi-immortal weapon in my hand. I have so many worries about what to do, so I just use it. It's good that I didn't act recklessly.

Since you are going to write a fanfic, don't be timid. Everyone has a future, but the protagonist of the fanfic doesn't? No. What novels do you write? Why are you being cowardly? Just grab it. If you don't obey, slap him to death.

It's very uncomfortable for the author to write like this. Those ordinary people were fine holding Buddhist artifacts of unknown condition, but the protagonist, the emperor's soldier, was directly shocked and bleeding while still in his body. And the protagonist is hesitant to kill, but he still has to kill later, can't he do it now? Those people aren't threatening but they are disgusting.

The conjecture that Emperor Zun is Yuanshi is quite good. The protagonist should not envy Ye Fan, but Ye Fan should envy the protagonist. Does anyone really think that the bulk version of Emperor Sutra is better than the full version? The protagonist has a near-immortal-level imperial weapon that can be resurrected at any time, but Ye Fan only has green bronze. It sounds good and can fight against the emperor's weapon. The bad thing is that it is gone after one encounter. Ye Fan has the mother energy root of all things. The protagonist has the feathered lapis lazuli sword. The rest is not that important. This is still nagging Ye Fan.

I don't understand why I suddenly ran to lick it.

Okay, there are some vicious plots in the back, which are a bit cliche, and then this vast universe that everyone is fighting for, everyone is fighting against the sky and the earth, is not suitable for writing these kinds of love affairs, let alone having ambiguities with so many girls. It cannot be said that there is no heroine, but it would be nice to write one. Everyone in this world wants to be the emperor for a lifetime. Regardless of the Taoist saint, he seems not to have invested too much in the emotional aspect. They all want to practice and make progress. Also, can he use an ordinary weapon first to make the transition? You will understand the atmosphere of this world after reading the original work. Ye Fan was hunted down to no avail, so he only had a little cash, and he was still a newbie. I think we should hide it first. If we can't hide it anymore, physically eliminate the insiders who may be exposed, so that there will be no exposure. But it's written in a careless way, and the combat power is not very strong. Just go and take it out, and then seem to let everyone know, which is a bit unreasonable. I have these thoughts for the time being. Cheers to the author.

I don't say I don't want a heroine, but it's outrageous to save someone who kills me. It makes the protagonist look like a clown.

A physique stronger than the Chaos Body, no shortage of training resources, a quasi-immortal weapon to protect the path, and the speed of training is almost the same as that of Ye Fan in the early stage? To put it bluntly, trash has been elevated

This new plot is too weird. Is it forcing the heroine? Repaying evil with kindness is like a fool.

You can't even express your feelings of happiness and enmity when writing about fan fiction. It's just bullshit.

There are so many introductions, more than 30 chapters, and only a dozen chapters can be seen The Jiang family is chasing them with their front legs, and you can save one with your back legs. In the end, there are still feelings. You have watched too many TV dramas, so I should refer to Ye Fan's paragraph.

It's very well written. I really won't write it anymore. I just started reading it and I have already collected it. ? ? ? ! ! ! !

Save that woman is really annoying to me. I can understand your jealousy. It really makes me sick that you still play such old tricks. Don't have this kind of plot with this woman next time. It's annoying.

The previous writings have always been good, except for An Miaoyi. An Miaoyi chose Ye Fan because she was fighting for the imperial path until someone could help her protect her path in the end, because she felt that Ye Fan's holy body was easy to achieve, but he could not prove it.

I particularly admire that after reading the first chapter, I still insist on watching Shennong.

Title of the book, Licking Ye Fan to become emperor and immortal, make a 🐶

Ye Fan was chased by the Ji family and robbed Ji Ziyue. The protagonist was chased by the Jiang family and robbed Jiang Caixuan. Isn't this a trick? It can be said that the subsequent plot is almost the same as the original work, just changing the characters.

I have read a lot of Zhetian fan fiction, and nine of the ten novels I have read are about pimps. The protagonists are all thinking about how to get Zixia to be Ye Fan's daughter-in-law to give birth to an innate Holy Body Taoist fetus. Isn't this disgusting? Author, you won't take Zixia as a member of the harem as soon as you write it, and find a way to get the ruthless person Immortal Kung Fu. Observe and slowly ponder and modify it, and create a weak version of the technique of devouring other people's origin and fusion. Yes, I remember there is an ancient holy body corpse in King Qingjiao. Just let Zixia swallow his origin and merge it into the incomplete innate holy body. Finally, bring it to Zishan, get the approval of Wushi Bell, and get the God Emperor's elixir to transform. Doesn't this mean you directly get a wife with the innate holy body? I don't know what those authors think, but they want to be a pimp and a licking dog. This is disgusting.

Although I have been reading this book, the author is so boring. There are some exciting parts, and all kinds of memories suddenly appear, and I go crazy 😴😡

Those who can continue to watch will automatically be given the title "Poison will not kill". They are all contemporary Shennong.

You can still read the front part, but the back part is the same as Gou Shi, especially the confrontation between the emperor's soldiers. It takes more than 10 chapters to write about Emperor Zun and Memories of the Void. What's the result of a long-lasting call to Xiaopeng King?

Ye Fan cares about the parents of the earth. What does it have to do with you? You also said that you had already arranged it. I just want to know, how do you know about Ye Fan's parents? Why don't you know so much? What does Ye Fan think? To put it bluntly, the author is just smart and cares about others.