Starting from Becoming a Magical Girl Yan Lili

There are quite a lot of stitches, but you have to pay attention to the details. Huaqiang Knifeman did it premeditated, and it was not because of the accidental incident of buying melons. The owner of the melon stall originally had a grudge against Huaqiang's family. What you wrote is not detailed enough. With Huaqiang's character, he should go to other stalls to buy melons when buying melons, and then go alone to resolve personal grudges.

If you don't want to watch it, don't watch it. As the title says, don't make each other disgusted.

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1. The barrage is a bit too talkative 2. The description of the appearance is too dense (I know it looks good, but it can't be eaten. Jpg) 3. You write that a man wearing a woman looks like a woman wearing a woman, and people are confused The rest of it feels okay (ps: It's really the ultimate stitch monster)

This way of writing, the female video author must have switched jobs.

In fact, it is more suitable to be published on a female channel. There are too many descriptions of appearance, and the dialogue is also childish...

This author and this ingredient... A eunuch wholesaler

The first dozen or twenty chapters are okay, but after reading too much, you'll get better at it! Slowly, the smile gradually turned cold, and then slowly started to feel a little annoyed in my heart. Annoying how I feel. . .

I feel like the author is not very good at writing female characters

Is the description of the protagonist's appearance a bit too dense?

I feel like we don't need so many characters. There are so many worlds. If you integrate them all into one, can you write them?

The one bad thing about this book is that it's too little. When I read it, I felt gentle, not like other novels. If you read too many other novels, it's good to read this kind of book to purify your mind and make you less irritable.

It doesn't work, this live broadcast is very affecting the viewing experience, as well as the time traveler, and the protagonist can't act maturely. Yan Lili in the drama is originally more supermarket. What you wrote is really bad!

Corrected the typo, and sometimes the pause is 0.5 Or 0.1 Seconds?

Please wake up, the soul is a man,

Pure Mary Sue, the female channel is also quite explosive

The Bai family singles who are making such a fuss here are all full of food, and some are already scolding them before they even start reading this book. When reading the transformation article, it is recommended to ignore the comment area. Basically, after you click in, you are no longer reading a novel. I would like to share with you my personal experience. There was a period two or three years ago. I was very interested in this kind of thing at first, but I ended up scolding people without realizing it. In the end, I stopped reading the novel. When I had free time, I would check if there were any replies. During the day, all I could think about was how others would reply and how I should fight back. After half a year of reading, I didn't read a few books, but my scolding skills were already very good.

To be honest, it feels a bit strange, the combat power is unknown, and then the emotional changes are too outrageous, and it is very easy to collapse.

Half of a chapter is devoted to the main character's speechless appearance (ー_ー)!!

I wish I was alone, it would be great if the female protagonist is alone and beautiful 😌🌹

Book friends, do you have any recommendations for books written by fans of the Armored Warriors? This one is better and slower.

To be honest, there are very few dianniang novels nowadays, and I look forward to seeing a good one.

I guess I didn't even know what I wrote until the end.

Stitch monster, smells like Mr. Dongchang's smell

To be honest, it's quite novel that someone actually wrote a childhood TV series. I want to read it, but the number of words is a bit short, and I'm not sure what the author's orientation is. (Transformation writing is not excluded, but only single orders are accepted, and marriage is not accepted.) (You don't have to argue with me about your orientation. Is there anyone in the world who eats sweet tofu? Anyway, I only eat salt tofu.)

Why don't you write anymore? I'll just watch the fun.

Why hasn't it been updated in the past few days?

The third eunuch in the transformation novel that I have been following recently

It seems that the armor and the little devil fairy have a linkage.