Tokyo: Drawing Comics Starts with Daogui

， Author, when you write, you can actually think more from a Japanese perspective. For example, if the Tao Weird Fairy is drawn into a comic, what editors should pay most attention to is not simply its excitement and heavy taste, but a new comic style. Should it be called "Chinese horror"? Although the actual Chinese horror is not the same as the Tao Weird Fairy. Then there's the setting. Li Huowang's name is obviously Chinese, Zuo Wang's attributes are obviously that of Zhuangzi, and his obsession with becoming an immortal is unique to Chinese fantasy. These are all points worth pointing out.        ，， Some obviously unique and excellent styles, settings, cultural differences and attributes are also refreshing. Some things that may be taken for granted in online articles may be a kind of collision and inspiration when placed in Japan. Well, a little suggestion, I hope you can see it.

It's not bad, but it may arouse the disgust of people who are not very interested in the book. It should be moderate, and then the protagonist's own understanding should be added, as well as the optimization of various aspects. After all, the times have been progressing.

As an author with a complete three-dimensional perspective, I traveled to another world. I'm not saying that integrating into another society is not good. I just looked at it and felt that the protagonist was a little Japanese devil with Chinese memories. The transition was a bit weird. In my mind, it was like reading a Japanese chuuni manga, and then when the characters in the book interacted, it was inexplicably a bit like the emotional ups and downs missing in Japanese TV dramas in Japanese life. It's awkward anyway

The setting is quite good. I have also conceived similar ideas, but replaced the suspense with martial arts I have a few suggestions 1 is Shikigami. Is there any foreshadowing behind this? I think it is best not to have anything too supernatural in comic themes. If you focus on the description, it will lead to Separated from the main plot To put it lightly, I feel that it is a bit useless, so I don't understand why it is written that Shikigami is the golden finger of the protagonist, but I think being able to remember the suspense novels of later generations is already a good golden finger, and other things are not necessary 2 I feel that the timeline is a bit early, around 00 Around 20 years, the advantage of this time is that the probability of the work becoming a migrant manga increases, and most anime teams prefer to update weekly The disadvantage is that the quality of animation production is far inferior to that of 20 years later Like Dead Fire Sea, due to the production level and production cycle, it is far inferior to that of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. The production quality such as the Giant's Spell Return Both the animation expression and the picture quality The protagonist's suspenseful monster requires extremely strong drawing tension to be expressed, otherwise the animation will end up being far inferior to the comics Refer to Slam Dunk

It's hard for you to think of some ridiculous names like Suzuki Huowang Hinata Reimiao. I think it would be better to just keep the original name of the other world. The Japaneseization only involves the real side of Huozi. After all, it's easy to explain. It's normal for people in other worlds to have names that are not Japanese. And how can the names of Cao Cao, Gao Zhijian, Da Liang, Da Qi Tian and Chen be translated into Japanese?

The words are quite passionate, human? No comment. As a supporting character, Miu Hashimoto, why not give her a hand and create comics together with her? From the introduction, the protagonist is bound to follow the evil path of the comic. Wouldn't it be a pity to put the righteous comic there? Of course, the author must let her leave, then there is no other way.

I feel like the protagonist is too passionate and the author's image of Dao Wei Xian should at least be more stable and profound.

It feels average, and the image of the protagonist quickly fades into middle school as a reader in the book circle said. At the same time, for me, the daily part is a bit bland, and it is a pity to discard it if it is tasteless, but it can still be read, and it can be used as food.

Want to see: Brother Huozi's shock to early audiences, industry response, plot developments related to cartoonists, conflicts Don't want to see: Love affairs in the fourth grade of elementary school

Personally, I think it can express the novelty and slight shock to Japanese viewers that Huozi's character is completely different from the Japanese protagonist.

After drawing Daogui, you can draw Secret 😏

Very good. I read a book about Japanese paintings some time ago, and here comes another book about Japanese paintings. Sit back and wait for me to take over the Japanese comic industry

If you can't imagine the comic style of "Daogui" in the book, you can refer to the Legend of Jianfeng

I saw the introduction, it was updated 12 hours ago, okay, it wasn't updated 1 day ago and transferred to the introduction to the sky,,,, it can be a good introduction, add a bookshelf, but your sister told me that it was finished 12 hours ago.

Are there any similar ones, writing about Hong Kong entertainment, going back to the past Hong Kong entertainment novels copied from the Internet, I read Hong Kong entertainment novels, the protagonist always copied the martial arts, I almost want to scold the street, is it a brain disease to not copy the Internet articles in Dacheng, and always use the time difference as an excuse, there is no time difference in this thing like "Shuang" and "Hot Blood". If you are reading online novels for the first time, you don't see anything unacceptable, as long as some modernized wording is modified.

I suggest you draw "Master Gu" and then follow the example of the old thieves and stop directly at "Ju Yang, Fang Yuan and the Stars". If you haven't seen "Master Gu", you can go and read it. To describe it in one sentence, "it is a monument for both readers and the novel world."

The protagonist portrayed by the author fits my impression of people in daily life very well

Change the cover. Can your cover not be so two-thorned? And the style is still very old 🤔🤔🤔

Come, the author reads with me My solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night!

What is the relationship between Hikari Ito and Makoto Ito?

Is the author here? I think the next comic should depict a mysterious resurgence, full of evil and blood, and it was once a very popular book. The setting is also very good, and the drawing is also very strong. I really can't think of any other novel that is more suitable than this one. It doesn't feel like the mysterious resurrection of a strange fairy is suitable.

Is there a female protagonist? Single heroine or harem?

Your book can be used as a guide to Daogui. I have added Daogui to my bookshelf after reading it. I plan to read it in one sitting when I have time.

Please support the new book, thank you!

I suggest the author practice his writing more, the creativity is good.

How come I finished this book so quickly, only over a hundred chapters?

Author, how many chapters do you want to write about this trick? Another novel writer, "Reborn in Japan, writes online articles" wrote more than 400 chapters in one novel, from the first chapter to the end, which is simply outrageous

Is there anything similar? After traveling to other countries, I can copy online novels or adapt them.

This book is so well written, but the cabinet doesn't have it

Let me tell you my personal opinion. I feel that the plot of the Dao Wei comic that the protagonist is drawing is a bit long. Can you speed it up a little? I feel that it is not very comfortable to watch the drag. (By the way, what will the protagonist draw next? If possible, can you consider the Lord of Mystery?)