Mortal: Han's Immortal Path

The writing is really good, but it's a pity that I haven't signed the contract yet, so I can't help if I want to reward you.

"Brother Han, can you really not practice without spiritual roots?" This sentence illustrates the desolation of the world of immortality. In fact, there is nothing wrong with being a mortal, and maybe you can die a good death.

In the original book, Han Li was able to crush his peers in fighting skills and was even able to compete with senior monks of the same realm in the Dan Yuan Ying stage. In my opinion, in addition to the powerful magical weapons such as the Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Sword, the most important thing is that he has practiced the three-turn heavy Yuan Gong and the Dayan Jue. One gave him deep magic power and the other gave him powerful spiritual consciousness. Therefore, if the protagonist in this fanfic wants to become powerful, he must have techniques that can improve his magic power and spiritual consciousness. Whether it is to cross the river by following the stones that Han Li walked or to innovate a new route is very exciting. I hope the author will work hard.

Newcomer and new book, I sincerely thank all fellow Taoists for their generous support and enthusiastic recommendations. Every recommendation is an encouragement and recognition of my work, which makes me feel honored and excited. Your support is the driving force for my creation and the source of confidence for me to continue moving forward. Thank you again!

I sincerely thank all fellow Taoists for their strong support. The author has been honored to receive the platform's invitation to sign a contract. Fellow Taoists can invest with confidence and go on the road together! (I am now working hard to save the manuscript. I hope all fellow Taoists will continue to support me.)

It's so hard to find such a serious novel about mortals cultivating immortals. Good luck to the author.

Don't you think your writing is too protracted?

I have some small suggestions, you can use a realistic style, the writing style is okay, but the style is a bit inconsistent. Don't write too literary and youthful. Not many people like to read it. If it's for your own entertainment, then that's fine. But if you want to achieve results, you should still write in a realistic style to reach a wide audience.

Mortals have no golden fingers. How can one soar when resources are so scarce? How to raise a woman

Mortal stream + family stream, as long as it is written well and the quality is guaranteed, it will become popular.

Let me go, write a novel about cultivating immortals and you still use classical Chinese. It seems too strenuous.

The listener understands that one person was negligent in his shortcomings. I sincerely ask fellow Taoists to correct me and discuss it together. Again, thank you all fellow Taoists for your valuable opinions!

There is no literary youth's life but there is the literary youth's disease

The mortal world is not suitable for your writing style. It is suitable for writing about the world of Sword.

It's so well written that it won my heart. I've been waiting for half a year to unblock the book. Please update it. By the way, don't pay attention to the trolls and write according to your own ideas.

The writing is so good that all my monthly recommended tickets have been handed in.

It's beautiful, I love it, I'll give it all to you

The main reason is that part of the plot makes people dislike it. Han Li is a tool man and there is little mention of it. The protagonist is his elder. How to control the distance is a problem. This way of writing is really difficult. Also, the protagonist can use evil methods to practice, but the writing uses similar people to do it. This is unpleasant. You can do more demon clan.

But it is understandable that Han Li kills Nangong, but some actions are really not recommended, and there is really no need to be dark for the sake of darkness when using babies to practice. The most poisonous thing is knowing the plot but suffering heavy losses. Telling Linghu to Luan Xinghai is the most poisonous thing. The reason why Han Li, a mortal, succeeded was because he didn't trust anyone. How do you know Linghu won't kill you to silence you? After searching the soul, he found the bottle again.

Great author, I hope the protagonist will not turn into a Madonna novel. The Madonna novel is not good-looking. Cultivation of immortality is inherently cruel. The strong survive and the weak are eliminated. Cultivation as an immortal is about earning money, rather than those sand sculptures of Notre Dame music characters that draw a sword to help when the road is rough and eliminate harm for the people every day.