Hogwarts: the Demon King? No, Change Maker!

Tzeentch: Everything is planned 🙂

The Dark Lord who is born evil. You can try treading water and climbing trees in Naruto🙂

The writing is very good, but the rhythm is not grasped. I wrote more than 30 pieces before I got to the branch. People will get tired.

A luxurious play house with a cheating exterior 😅

The setting is grand, the goals are clear, and the plot is a joke.

Write about the big picture at the beginning, and then write about boring things, just like Qin Shihuang only talked about love

There are probably pitfalls in Harry Potter's magic. First of all, let's not talk about the chaos thing called Obscurus. Did the ancient magic in Hogwarts Legacy make you think of anything abnormal? Emotional energy is completely out of control, energy receptors are becoming more and more paranoid and irritable, and goblins strengthened by ancient magic are becoming more and more violent and bloodthirsty. Are they familiar? In addition, the protection law itself is full of doubts, not to mention that when it was first implemented, it still had to continue despite the great resistance from the court wizards and wizard nobles. The attitude of ancient wizards towards offenders can be seen from creatures such as goblins and centaurs. They would directly conquer them with violence, even house elves. I have been enslaved by the twisted form to this day, and the strange thing is that they did not directly conquer the Muggles who were not a threat to wizards, but hid. It was puzzling. It was like a naughty child came to my house. Not only did my whole family move to the basement to avoid the naughty child, but I also had to fight with my wife before she wanted to sleep upstairs. Moreover, the enforcement of the protection law has never been stronger, so strong that wizards who violate the law will be executed without trial. In the end, even if the wizard died of starvation, he never thought of going to Muggles to enchant technology and gain countless wealth and honors. How could someone not think of this and take action after so many years? It's extremely strange! Looking at magic again, what is the biggest driver of Harry Potter's magic? Mood. The manifestation of magic is more distortion than transformation. If the essence of magic is the energy of subspace, everything will make sense. The existence of the protection law is not for wizards to hide from Muggles, but to prevent the spread of magic use and cause the earth to shine like a Christmas tree in subspace due to the abuse of magic to attract the attention of demons. The isolation of the two realms of Uma and Uma ensures the purity of the human technology tree. Look at how Vashtor corrupted those technologies that relied on subspace and were generated by using psychic energy to jump out of the technology tree. In this way, human technology can be guaranteed to be purely free from the pollution of the power of subspace. Until human technology can suppress the use of subspace energy, we can open this Pandora's box. Looking at the magical government's ideological stamp on the Secrecy Act, it is very likely that they have been ideologically stamped, causing other wizards, except for some highly talented wizards, to maintain the premise of wizard-Muggle isolation without thinking. Controlling the scope of the magic world also ensures that the physical laws of reality will not be eroded too much by subspace energy. Otherwise, the whole world would be the magic world and the physical laws would have been distorted into chaos. What are the characteristics of Grindelwald and his like who are so good? The use of magic spreads, the ban on psionic energy is lifted, the number and quality of psykers increases, the energy concentration of subspace increases, which increases the efficiency of psionic spells, and psykers destroy the existing order and gain dominance. This is a typical precursor to subspace invasion. Therefore, the current situation in the magic world is either that the world is full of fairy tales, or that magic itself has huge pitfalls and must be used under control.

This style looks a bit familiar, like the one Grindelwald liked, but unfortunately it seems to be unfinished.

It's really uncomfortable to watch this kind of translation style

Stop playing house in school. You know what your characters are facing. They are the savage green skins of the Orks, an enemy even the Great Devourer is unwilling to face. As long as these savage creatures can hold on to the first wave of attacks, they will gradually evolve, becoming bigger, greener and more cunning Complete Orks

Oh, Warhammer, the burning cesspool of endless despair

Come on, author. Really good

Does it have to start from when I was a student? It can't be like "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them". In the same worldview but not following Harry Potter.

Magic, energy, my people are trapped in it.

I would like to give you a suggestion, use punctuation better, for example, "You are finally here, the son of the prophecy" is changed to "You are finally here - the son of the prophecy"; "Dumbledore, I am the Minister of Magic" is changed to "Dumbledore! I am the Minister of Magic."

It's okay. Although it's not considered fairy seedlings, it's still relatively good food.

Damn, I was only halfway through it, and found that the update date was 4 months ago 😅

Brothers, please read the new book. I don't know if the writing will suit your taste. It will be a shame if you don't read the new book... Thank you all, thank you very much.